Lyra has been dating her human coltfriend for a little while now and wants to start a herd with Bon Bon. The problem is, Bon Bon doesn’t want to accept her feelings for the strange creature. Can the earth pony find love with the bizarre human?
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Damn it Bon!
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wow! just wow!
Bon Bon, why?
Yay! My favorite side character appears! I can now say that I love Ember!
Protip for those who really want to love Ember: Picture her having a Hungarian accent. Like Eva Gabor, but a little deeper. Let the pleasure wash over you.
I cannot comprehend how mind numbingly stupid you would have to be to actually believe that.
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Not sure why you would think that's rude or judgmental, but I do think you might be right, so I went back and toned it down some.
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I can't picture her with out that voice now and I love it.
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Wow is bad or wow is good?
You're bangin' these chapters out quick. Can we continue to expect the semi-daily updates?
Well, that was interesting...
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I wish I could say I was surprised that Bon-Bon freaked out, I really wished I could.
But that would be a lie.
Honestly I knew this would happen, given all her thoughts and opinions about Chris.
Honestly the date was kinda doomed to fail in the first place in my opinion, as Bonny was and still is utterly terrified of Chris.
But I know that in the end Bon-Bon with join Lyra and Chris cause you know, the title is kind of a spoiler ya know?
Honestly I think Lyra and Chris should've expected something like this to happen really.
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Well all this stuff was already done, but I had to stop and fix part 2 cause of reasons... I mean right now part 3 is done, but I am waiting for editors to fix things, and chapter 4 is about almost roughed out... so... maybe like once a week I will have a chapter up, that is if I don't mess stuff up again.
Can't find anything witty to say so I'll settle with, I WANT MOAR!!! Please
Seems it may take a bit more effort to work through all of Bonny's baggage. And it seems that her parents had a part in that, curious to see how this progresses.
Bon Bon was adorable until her freak out. It looks like she has some serious issues in her past that might need to be overcome first (parents? poor experiences with Stallions?). I'm also not sure if she is afraid of Chris as much as it's more like his hands are triggering a phobia...
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wow is wow.
God damn it. If she would just voice her fears, this would clear up so much quicker
5694713 Wow!
Somehow, I knew Chris would mess up when ordering the wrong kind of food in front of a pony who wasn't comfortable with him being a meat eater. And despite being a meat eater myself, I can understand Bonny's perspective on her thoughts on those poor, defenseless, little bunnies. Hmm... I don't believe I ever had rabbit before. I wonder what they taste like? Ah geez, all this talk of food is making me hungry!
Anyway, love this chapter for the addition of two bat pony characters , the touching gifts Bonny received (I remember the necklace from the cover art, but I totally forgot about the lily ), and that heartbreaking cliffhanger at the end.
PLEASE update the next part soon!
And if they do go on another date or re-take the first one, I hope they'll come back to the Everfree Moon again. It had such a lovely atmosphere and wonderful service. Plus, I want Dusty and Amber to make another appearance!
5694556 Nice to know, thanks!
5694776 Well, I always try to be as helpful as possible. Given the situation of course.
As for the two mistakes I noticed, I simply get annoyed by them (and therefore the reason I point them out) and am naturally good at finding them I guess...
Lastly, you missing them is no big deal really. I mean, sometimes our brains are programmed to read sentences correctly rather than wrong. I know that I do it on occasion.
Edit: Oops forgot to say thanks, so thank you
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But... I don't play World of Warcraft anymore... I don't understand. What are you trying to tell me?! I wont go back you hear! I wont play that game anymore! I've been 8 years clean!
I love the story, I never have waited for the next chapter of a story more than this one...
The real secret to a wonderful marrage is to marry your best friend...
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WOW!
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*hugs* not the game, just wow, simply wow.
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Thanks for pointing those out. I fixed them!
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It is one of her many issues. Somepony needs to get that mare to open up.
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Yay I'm glad you liked it all! And we may see the bat mares return at some point.
Bon Bon held the flower close to her muzzle and took a soft whiff of the flower, letting the surgery
noticed that, kinda killed the feeling that you had going when i was reading (but only a little)
love this story and hope to see more soon (i'm watching your editors every move)
So...Dusty confirmed for Smash--I mean, the herd?
That's was preaty good, no, great. It set up a great conflict is loved to see how your going to get Lyra as Chris to resolve.i sure could use your edit though if he's even free
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Ahaha surgery XD Well thank you for pointing it out. I fixed it now.
Also good! keep them on their toes.
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Idk about that... Ember seamed to be more into that idea then Dusty.
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It's starting to piss me off, really.
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I'm hoping that will fight the weird sadness I'm feeling.
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You and Lyra both. Next chapter Lyra is going to have a word with her about that.
excellent i look forward to more of your stories. The emotion in this chapter is amazing. If you ever decide to write a novel similar to this i will brew a strong cup of coffee and gladly stay up to read it all day and night.
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There was so much I didn't know about beards.
Definitely didn't see that coming!
5695155 beards are one of the universes great mysteries, only so little is known.
5695065 Heh, I wouldn't be opposed to Dusty joining the herd (mainly because bat ponies are my favorite type of ponies)... Is Ember her mother or something? IDK why, but for some reason that is the feeling I got from the two. I could just be tired and my mind is playing tricks on me...
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Ember is Dusty's employer lol, but Ember has a very motherly type of personality. She treats all her employees like her children.
before reading this I was like
but after reading this chapter I'm like
why is bon bon so scared of him I get that hes diffrent but to act like that is just plain sad
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Bon Bon has some issues.
but over all great chapter but the feels are still getting me
I read about half way through then gave up... The story was going well, but this conflict Bon Bon is going through is just becoming very annoying and tedious. I felt the two need to grab her and just shake her into some proper sense. I do so hope you have a good reason as to why Bon Bon is acting like such an ass around them. Otherwise this inner conflict is just gonna drag on and sour the experience.
And I see why you added that flower and necklace to the picture of Bon Bon. Hopefully the other 'items' are part of her outfit as well (specifically the striped one keeping her backside warm ).
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Sorry you didn't like the story. but the story is now going to be focusing on getting all those issues she has resolved if that makes you feel better. Or try to resolve them.
“What if she did start to fall in love the human”: It may be just me, but isn’t there a “with” missing?
I’m glad that BonBon was able to stay that long, even if she run away at the end. I’m sure that, if she has time to think about it, she will come to some conclusions.
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You are right. That was missing and is now fixed lol. thank you. And she has a lot of thinking to do.