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A small favor can go a long way, but Big Mac isn't sure that he can take these favors anymore. As the dreams he doesn't understand get weirder, he doesn't know if he can confess to Luna that he doesn't want to do this anymore. However, there is a lot more than the thought of him helping that keeps him doing it...


A short fic showing you what happens when I get a random idea in the middle of the night.

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He looks so beautifuler
So shinny...
(Still better than Cadence)

I can't read so didn't read.

5501074 i really didn't want anypony to read it actually...

i wrote it while i was half asleep and i didn't proofread it

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Why's Big Mac an Alicorn Princess?

5501102 because i was up at 1 am and looking at random pony pics on Derpibooru...

then i was like "Biggu Makku-kun!"

5501105
Blaze Shine is my fem Flash Sentry because it sounds kewl

5501114 Aria Blaze Twinkleshine.

Lel.

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Crap! I accidentally created a ship!

5501190 wow, welcome to Hell

"Big MacIntosh, you know, that fallen angel is a liar," Jesus told him. "I tell you the truth, nothing beneficial comes from ye who lies to gain a false security."

Man, Lucifer was being totally cool, and then Jesus has to be hatin' on him right to his face. Not classy, big J.

Dear Princess Luna,
the dreams are getting weirder and weirder.
I can't keep doing this...
I think I'll give up the experiment.

Oh, come on! A little philosophy with theological overtones and you're completely thrown out of your depth?
This isn't hard! Go with Jesus if you want to be good and righteous, and go with Lucifer if you want to be cool. Simple indeed.

"You know, you will forsake me. You will turn me over and walk with my enemy. Bu surely you have been forgiven."

I'm pretty sure that's not what happened here.

"Are you sorry for doubting her? You truly understand now how important she truly was to you... don't you now?"

No, actually, I think not doubting her was the problem.
I mean, insofar as there is a problem.
Mac's got a kingdom and is an alicorn and rules ponies with (I assume) an iron hoof. That's not a bad deal.
Apparently Luna died somewhere in all that, but hey, you can't have everything.

Power is fleeting. It's a shame he succumbed to its temptation.
However, despite a wonderful theological treatise, I can't seem to really figure out what was going on outside of his interaction with the Shekinah.
A little more elaboration on the back story would be very much appreciated.

If only my dreams were this sane, I would be content.

This is about as difficult to follow as my own dreams when I drink coffee before bed. I like it. :moustache:

-Jake

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