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Julia


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Crappy wall of text.

5218728 why bother commenting if you have nothing helpful to say? At least give some pointers.

Anyway I thought the story was good.

5221670 I said something helpful, use proper paragraph spacing.

5222801 Very well, I implied.

Julia #6 · Nov 3rd, 2014 · · 1 ·

5224060 I don't care how it looks, I just care how it is...

5224066 thank you, its the content that matters not how it presented

5224292 if I may ask, and I guess I sound a bit silly, but what was your favorite part?

This was written well, but, you need to work on your paragraph spacing.

5225049
oh... so many ponies tell me the same exact thing, so I guess I'll take heed...

5225057 I'm not saying it was bad, because it wasn't, in fact it was great, the only thing I noticed was the paragraph spacing which can throw some readers off

I liked this story, The only thing that threw me off is the spacing, I usually can't read giant clumps of text.

Nitpicking aside, good job! :twilightsmile:

congrats not many things can make me cry.

You suck.
I didn't even have to read it to know it's a fail~

5476776 Wow Laddie, you must really love me a lot.
You know it made you cry.
you're just mad it has more views than all your stories combined

5476789
1) Pft no I don't! You have no proof.
2) Actually no, it doesn't. I checked. Bitch~

5476800 okay i checked too, but beat 13 stories plus like 30+ coming in the future.
you gotta long way to go before you can defeat me.
IF you can even reach that flower upon this high peak.

5476826
Fuck. I forgot the other 11 stories XD

5476826
I will catch up to you and you WILL be my slave!
At least I didn't cancel any stories yet~

5476841 at least my stories aren't carbon copies

5476845
ADITS is the opposite of a carbon copy when you compare it with Adagio, Aria and Sonata's stupidly amazing adventure at the everfree forest.
Bitch.

5476866 Bitch is a five letter word that means the same thing as domesticated she wolf.

5476920 i hate she wolves.
wolves are overrated.

5476937
But they're so enigmatic and savage; brimming with mystery.

5476955 wolves are too hyped up...
i don't get it...

5476964
Go buy Watch Dogs, that's over-hyped.

5476980
I was so close to buying its collector edition. (I only bought standard)
Then I got the collector edition of ACU. I regretted it.

5476989 don't buy tv shows...
watch them illegally

5477009
I used to get everything for free,
but then I took an arrow to the pendent.

5477022 Arrows are overarched

5477040
I'm a sneaky warrior anyway.
The only magic use is Thu'ums.
(Yay Skyrim)

5477048 i use all magic.
but i love physical, spiritual, and natural energy the most

5477076
Bitch please, fire is best element.
(secretly a fire-bender and Azula's lover)

5477086 fire goes with natural energy. dumbass.
learn your powers from Superpower wiki.

5477095
Go suck Aria,
I am a star wars

*Assassinates you with a fish*
Bitch.

5477105
You would use Light Energy, Star Energy, and Plasma Energy.
Aria would use Esoteric Fire
Sonata would use Sound Energy and Dark Light Energy.

5477107 you replied to nothing

5477133 Plasma IS fire, you idiot!
GOD, you can be so adorably dumb as a bag of fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2014/074/5/2/maud_for_mayor_by_jackspade2012-d7acg3q.png

5477117
Is it weird that I really enjoy chatting with you?

5477158
Well excuse me, Mistress! Sorry for not knowing many alternatives to the word: "Fire"

5477158
I just don't get it,
why is Maud so damn popular?

5477174 why are we having so many conversations?

5477198 awww! i love ya too, but sucking my ass won't get you that golden apple!

5477234
You love me too?
I had no idea you had a heart...
(Also it's an arse worth sucking)

5477253 lol. yes, i am the goddess of love too.

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