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TundraStanza


The Poetic Frost makes mistakes so that you don't have to. "Dance, Sode no Shirayuki!"

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From the dark recesses of unconsciousness, I somehow enter a world that isn't possible.
I exist even though I shouldn't.
I remember these strange thoughts.
Frost magic and musical rhythms feel like second nature.
All the while, I have taken the role of my alias.
Have I been living an incomplete life this whole time?

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Takes place in an alternate future of "Through the Eyes of Another Pony".
I own nothing except my OC.
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic is owned by Hasbro.
Songs are owned by their respective owners (Within Temptation, Avril Lavigne, Evanescence, etc.)
Bleach belongs to Viz Media.
I forgot the name of the artist of the cover image, but thank you anyway.
I gain no profit from this.

Edit: Changed cover image. Sorry if this displeases some of you.

Edit: Rated Teen for increased violence in chapter 10.

Chapters (23)
Comments ( 92 )

I know a whole lot didn't happen in this chapter. Sorry about that.
I'll try making it up to you in the next.

Damnit, I was hoping for a Bleach crossover, because you have Rukia's Sode No Shirayuki as the cover art. Instead I get a crappy story with elements stolen from other stories I didn't enjoy.

All of my rage.

new chapter yay cant wait for the next its gonna be interesting with Celestia :twilightsmile:

I'll be honest, I don't think I'm guiding the story anymore.
It feels more like it's guiding me and I can't see where it leads 100% of the time.

new chapter yay this one was good if you ask me cant wait for the next :twilightsmile:

Uh... you're really going all-out with the Bleach crossover, aren't you? If this 'dream' is an indication of things to come... you're really going to need some flame-retardant armor. Maybe even a bunker.

In all seriousness, though, you need to make these chapters longer. You're trying to tell a story, but you're telling only small pieces at a time, and a story with as much potential as this deserves more.

On that note: Shroud the world in darkness, Kagehime!
(Don't bother trying to look that one up, she's an original creation of mine)

713019
Thanks for the warning.
Though, if I wanted to please everyone that was ever going to hate my work for one reason or another, I never would have started writing in the first place.
...
Hm... shadow princess... that's a cool Zanpaktou name. :pinkiehappy:

713043 If'n ya want, ah can let ya borrow 'er fer a chapter or two...:ajsmug:

Just make sure to credit me.

713110
I may do that. :twilightsmile:
Though it might be a long time before she sees the light.

713261 I can live with that. PM me when you want details.

new chapter yay cant wait for the next :twilightsmile:

I'm not used to making chapters a whole lot longer.
Because of this, the next chapter will probably take a long time before it actually comes out.
I started this mess, and I'm going to finish it, one way or the other.
:flutterrage: Charge!

724035 :facehoof: You really are going to go all out with the Bleach crossover. :ajsleepy: Good luck, Tundra, you're going to need it.

I do have to say, though, perhaps you should wait until we see the ending of Through The Eyes of Another Pony? Because it isn't over just yet.

Just out of curiosity, do you think I should add the "Alternate Universe" tag?
I have a feeling that this is going to deter from the possibilities presented by CardsLafter's story.
Thanks.

734468 If it didn't warrant the 'Alternate Universe' tag already, the attack of the shadow-Changelings probably clinched it.

And eep. Applebloom with Ruri'iro Kujaku. That's a bit frightening. What was with the emotionless thing for a bit?

By the way, as a bit of trivia, the release phrase for Ruri'iro Kujaku is more accurately translated as 'Split and deviate', rather than 'tear in frenzy'. I have to admit, the former sounds a bit more like Applebloom's style than the latter.

734821
1. All right. I'm adding the tag then.
2. Well, when Yumichika fights, he's a bit less emotional then when he's holding a casual conversation so I thought, eh, worth a shot.
3. Interesting trivia. "Split and deviate"... I'll file that away for future reference consideration in future chapters.
(Personally, I prefer listening to the English dubs but that's just me :pinkiesmile:.)

734935 The main problem I have with the English dubs of anime is the emotion. Bleach is, admittedly, better than most in this regard, but the Japanese seiyuu still convey more emotion in a scene than anything the English VAs can do. Also, the English dubs have a bad habit of adding in voiceovers where there weren't any in the original. But, hey. Just my opinion.

You. Are. EVIL! Leaving me hanging on such a perfect cliffie!

And David's really going all out, here. First the shadow Changelings, now he's bringing in the Bount dolls?

You know what would be REALLY weird? If the people in Hueco Mundo somehow sensed what was happening, and sent Harribel to investigate. She's the most level-headed member of the Espada. Though, I wonder how her body would react to Equestria?

NUU evil cliffhanger cant wait for the next chapter

Next chapter: not quite what you were expecting.
...or maybe it's exactly what you were expecting.
I don't know.

770263 Definitely not what I was expecting.

So, Trixie's still a bit sore about Twilight. And she got Ichinose's zanpakuto. Interesting.

Fluttershy has Wabisuke, eh? Do you know what that hook is actually used for? :fluttershysad:

770434
Yes, I'm afraid I do. :raritycry:
Still, how often did Izuru actually use it in specifically that way?
In any case, I'm not planning on letting our friend Fluttershy do that anytime soon.

770469 Good. Out of the Mane 6, Fluttershy would definitely have the hardest time trying to kill something.

*grin* Hehehe. You got her character perfect. I'm most impressed.

Though, I have to wonder... In the dream sequence earlier, Scootaloo was shown using Suzumebachi. Did you change your mind, or something?

773543
Yeah, I kind of did.
Fluttershy was originally going to get Tobiume.
*shrugs*
My writer's mind is ever changing as the wind.

775339 Maybe you should consider changing the dream sequence?

775353
Dreams don't necessarily coincide with actual events.
There's evidence of that in all sorts of places.
Zecora didn't laugh evilly when Twilight met her just because she dreamed that she did.
...
Though... I guess to give this story some consistency, I may consider changing the sequence.
I make no promises.

773543
By the way, thanks. It was reassuring to hear that I got the character right.

Oh, yeah! Scootaloo, kick Trixie's derriere!

Twilight's going to be receiving her Quincy powers soon. That's good. Now Rainbow Dash needs Zangetsu, Applejack needs Zabimaru, Celestia needs Ryuujin Jakka... oh, wait, she wasn't in the dream, was she? :trollestia: Still, if she was, she'd get Ryuujin Jakka for certain. Luna would get Hyourinmaru.

Ooh! Ooh! Idea! If Cheerilee gets involved for whatever reason, she ought to get Sogyo no Kotowari. Its spirit(s) make a good match for her, since she likes taking care of foals. And its ability (absorbtion and redirection of energy) reflects a teachers desire to protect her students.

788148 :rainbowderp:
Get... out of my head. Get out of my head!
:rainbowlaugh:
...
We'll just have to see. :raritywink:
That's a very good idea for Cheerilee. I'll admit I hadn't even considered her yet.

and big mac will somehow turn out to be Chad right?

...Luna already knows Tenteikura. Meaning she's probably already gotten Hyourinmaru. That's interesting.

Hm... I'm getting this image of Spike with Suzumebachi. Possibly because he's one of the few characters in the show who could actually USE it.

Why not just call David " Aizen"? That's who he seems to be the equivalent of.

So there's already fullbring and theres not even a Quincy. That's horrible chronologically.

So there's already bount dolls and theres not even a Quincy. That's horrible chronologically.

Did you get the water tank escape from the movie " the prestige"?

796863 I really like this fic. Please hurry and write moar because you combined my two favorite things! Bleach and My Little Pony!:pinkiehappy::ajsmug::fluttershyouch::rainbowlaugh::raritywink::twilightsmile::moustache:

A little warning for the future:
I've got some late finals to study for this next week, so I might not be able to update as often as I have been.
Sorry if this inconveniences some of you readers, but that's the way it is.

800285 Nothing wrong with that. Being studious never hurt anypony. Unless you're Twilight in "Lesson Zero" :twilightoops:

Anyway, I knew Luna would get Hyourinmaru. No wonder you told me to get out of your head. :rainbowlaugh:

Still, I can't help but wonder: when will we learn what happened to Firewall? And when will Pinkamena make another appearance?

I found some time. :yay:
Here's a little something to hold you over before the action picks up again.

I appreciate the disclaimer, Tundra.

And most of the characters look pretty spot-on. Especially Rarity and Senbonzakura's interaction.

Next chappie lets us look at Rainbow Dash and Zangetsu. No Shirosaki here, though. :rainbowwild:

Sorry to put a warning after a warning but I felt obligated to let you all know this.
During the month of July, I'll be traveling to another location. It's a location where internet access is... not guaranteed. :unsuresweetie:
So if you don't see the next update for a full month, that's why.
Meanwhile, here's chapter 21. Enjoy!

835668 Thanks for the heads-up.

Also, Gilda is a punk. With Suzumebachi. Crap.

And Rainbow DOES have a Hollow half? What the hell? The only reason Ichigo had one is because he gained his spiritual power from nearly becoming a Hollow himself. Unless this was a copy-paste of powers by someone, in which case, they've bucked up.

lol Rainbows weapon is weird cant wait for the next chapter:twilightsmile:

Found a connection point. :pinkiesmile:
...for now.

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