Mane-iac is dying, but before she goes, she have a final request for her childhood friend
WARINING: euthanasia, if you don't agree, don't read
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Okay, that ending was both touching, tragic, and an awesome origin story for the new villain.
“I developed a machine that can repeat the conditions of my accident when I turned ino this" you for got the T in into
Seems a little rushed but i liked it i think the whole humdrum turning evil or into a Anti-Hero is an interesting concept and idea
Hecould kept the intellect but be a good guy cause there's still High Heels, Longface and a bynch of other guys.
Some punctuation errors but still rather touching.
Have some
that was very good, you got me to shed a few tears.
I didn't know this was here but now I NEED MORE OF THIS. Villain humdrum is an awesome concept that I've yet to see till now, I would love for there to be a sequel or more stories like this.
You should most certainly continue this. This story arc has great potential and I have seen much demand for something like this.
This is sick shit!! I need more of this!!!
You will did a great job about the power ponies, maybe you can write more about this version. Everyone will like to read.
Hm
OK, little editing please? I cannot get over the beginning, with how sensless everything is being read, and I'm from Russia. I only study English language.
Look... I know there are Power ponies comics as well as MLP comics, but I would like to know if this whole story is real or just fiction on your part?
real part of the death of mane-iac.
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Well, this only fiction. Don't read the comics unfortunatelly
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What not? I mean, if you don't mind me asking.
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Just not interested, no big deal
Mr. Es-pen is a genius! How nostalgic it feels. It seems like only yesterday that I read his stories on fanfiction.net
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Hey, someone recognized me!!
Yeah, hope you enjoy the translations as much as the originals.
Chao; nos leemos!!
I don't like stories where heroes become villains or friends stab each other in the back.
But you did good at this story.
Fun fact but Humdrum isn't actually a dragon but a pony. Great story though.