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A snapshot. A moment captured in time, preserved forever. Relationships have many such moments, from the first kiss to waking up together. Twilight and Dash get to share a few.
My place to write various, non-directly connected pieces focusing on all parts of a relationship.
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Very good. I am anxious to see more.
Woah...
First person from Dashes view.
Not my type of story, sorry.
Excellent as always. Your stories are part of the reason I love TwiDash. Your stories are very good at bringing a smile to my face, even when I've not had the best of days/nights (my day and night are flip-flopped :P). Thank you for always managing to make me smile.
Well that was incredibly fluffy.
...Carry on.
5158280 There'll be more. This is my place to basically write down any feelings/wants I have about romance, just put into pony form. Not really self insert, but self inspired.
5158568 :D I hope it brightened your morning
5158802 What's wrong with first person Dash?
5159035 :D I always want to make people smile, and it makes me so happy I've achieved that here.
5159315 Oh I will ^.^ With more fluffiness. Fluffy demands it.
Hmmm...
5162189 Good Hmmm or bad Hmmm?
Celestia dammit 314, y u make dis so good?
5162298 I can't resist the TwiDash. It calls to me, like a Siren song. No, not those Dazzlings. TwiDash is love. TwiDash is life.
I like how you-I mean Dash-described the story. This is gonna be one of my fav. I hope I could read next chapter soon;))
;;sorry for my bad English.
5162376 Thanks! This is kinda my story to chill out and relax with. Most of it will be from Dash POV, but Twilight will have some too. More will probably come in the nect few days because it's fun, easy to write, and takes up a nice hour of time.
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So you could say... You're under their spell...
I know this isn't that kind of fic, but I don't think I have read a single sentence on this entire site more Changeling-y than this one.
Very nice. Although this chapter feels a lot like a pre-relationship event (although it was mostly focused on Rainbow Dash and how sick she was, it seems... I don't know, anticipatory?).
5162237 I'm interested, please tell me more 'hmmm...'.
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It just felt weird reading it...
Maybe it was because I redit before bed?
(haha puns.)
Its still a good story.
Definitely seems like this chapter should come before Waking Up, if they're supposed to be in chronological order, unless Waking Up was a fever dream?
5162396 The wonderful, d'awwable spell of TwiDash.
5162482 I read that this morning and thought to myself "I wrote that? I actually wrote that? Idiot."
5162602 5165873 Fever was a pre-relationship event. However, I forgot to hit Save Chapter Order when I rearranged the chapters. So oops :P It's fixed now and will be for all future chapters :D
5162603
5165845 Puns. They're usually bad, but I use some pretty bad ones in my writing :P
Also quite good, but there didn't seem to be any proof whatsoever of the two of them being in a relationship. Hell, Rainbow even referred to Twilight as a friend and not a marefriend.
5166851 A good relationship takes time to build, first with a friendship as the foundation, then the romance as the frames, and love as the roof protecting you. If Rainbow had just gone "Hey, Twi's hot. Let's date," then the relationship would be terrible. A moment like this is where the seed is planted (or ground broken, keeping with the house analogy).
Won't you update this one ?
Hm... Luna's response doesn't seem right. Helping Rainbow Dash just find him isn't an intervention in their reconciliation--it's allowing it to happen in the first place. A single pony isn't really capable of finding a specific person who could have moved to any city in Equestria (or even beyond).
Considering that... the brain damage could be more severe than Rainbow Dash thought. If her dad isn't the same pony or wouldn't recognize her, it could be seen as a form of protection on Luna's part.
Also, do you have an explanation for how chipper she was about the previous year's birthiversary? Adding in sorrow to a normally joyous event is good and all, but she was pretty happy about her party last year.
6043840 Which sounds better: "How'd you find me?"
"Princess Luna told me."
"How'd you find me?"
"I searched endlessly for years trying to get you back."
She seemed happy at this one too, as long as she was around other ponies. Only a very very few will see her shell drop. Other than that, she's still the invincible Rainbow Dash.
6046017 You forgot the third option: "I wish I could have spoken with my daughter again before I died of old age."
Y'know, seeing as how it's incredibly unlikely for a single pony to be able to find another single pony without access to vast amounts of resources and connections. Sure, you could say that Twilight's helping her with her princessly connections now, but then you just get a variant of the first one - "Twilight found you for me"
Read that again, slowly.