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RoseOf1000Thorns


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FAIR WARNING: THIS IS SIMPLY A SHORT CHEESY POINTLESS ROMANCE BECAUSE I FELT LIKE IT.

On a night of stargazing, Rainbow Dash and Twilight are wrapped up in the beauty of the night. But the internal and external beauty of each other will surface, and feelings will make themselves known.

Before you say it; TwiLuna is my fav ship but I thought this up on the fly because I was running late for a story, cut me a bit of rope, slack, whatever you blagedagers call it.

This, my friends, is just a cheesy romance because come on, it's Valentine's Day, it's all about cheesy lovey stuff.:heart:
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Comments ( 30 )

Not a big fan of this ship, but this was cool! Good job! I rate this 8 out of 10 ducks! :pinkiehappy:

How can you not like Twidash?

Seems cheesy enough to give you a fave :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

5616581 I'm such a lucky bastard. :rainbowkiss:

FIRST NON-STRAIGHT SHIP IVE READ BUT THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL. TAKE MY FAVORITE AND LIKE.

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Sorry, it was just amazing. :twilightblush:

5619287 Thank you even more, I'm glad you liked it.

Comment posted by RoseOf1000Thorns deleted Mar 6th, 2015

This is, what I call a great shortstory.:twilightsmile:

You managed to capture the feelings very good, even though the story is this short. I can't think of anything that could have made this better without making the story longer. One of the best TwiDash shortstories I've ever read. (And I've read a lot)

Great work:heart:

GAHHHH!!!! I just died of cutabietes

Aaaah, TwiDash... It's the only thing I ever read anymore.

6065864 So did you enjoy? *looks with pleading eyes*

6085518 Very much so. ^_^

:twilightsmile::rainbowkiss:

So cute!! :twilightsmile::heart::rainbowkiss: This was a lovely thing to read before bed time, ADN just perfect for me: sweet cute fluffy Twidash. Yay!

their necks craned together to make a heart

They're going to have some serious neck injuries.

Er Cadence and Shining Armor did that when they were defeating Chrysalis

And I bet after their wedding they both had neck injuries.

Cheesy and romantic indeed, but well written! It was adorable! And you're very good on the description to set scenes without over-doing it.

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