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MidnightFMare


I fear that nothing I see is real, so I write to make sense of it. I see things that can't exist yet I feel them breathing under my fingers. I will not forget this place nor the friends I've made. MFM

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you have been living with a blind filly named Snowdrop for a few months now and have gotten really close. But a comment she makes causes you to want to grant the little filly her wish.
a semi-commission for Sirob1687 and because of the title art by the ultra-talented artist: vavacung
This is also my first attempt at second person writing

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 80 )

Wow. That device sure is visionary.

5399310 well, seeing is believing
also thanks for the favorite

5399402
Not at all. If you want more eye puns, I wrote some for Yanderpy.

5399490 You've given me a whole new way of looking at things.

5399501
Seeing your one-liner, the eyes in my sockets roll 'round and 'round, 'round and 'round, 'round and 'round. . . .

5399507
5399501 you guys make me laugh so hard, I cannot retina single thought

5399546
They don't get cornea than that!

5399548 iris I had more punds

All the feels and the laughs.

5399981 I'm glad I made you feel and laugh
I cry a little at the end too (and I wrote it)
but give Sirob love too, wuithout him/ her I wouldn't have made this

So cute! Also,

"I brought her here to stall and because she wanted to finish the 'Hitchhiker's' book."

Hitchhiker's trilogy?

5399663 Stick around and you may learn more, pupil.

5400017 Bingo! Glad to know that people still read it
Did you know that he also wrote an episode of doctor who? never aired but entitled "Shada" it was sweet and on DVD with tom baker (the doctor at the time) narrating it

5401796 No, I didn't know that, and I think that book is hilarious, though I haven't finished it yet,

5401191
I just hope I didn't make a spectacle of myself

5401801 it's true, and I've read all three twice

5401802 I'm sure we can all turn a blind eye to any mishaps you may have along the way.

5401931
That is the eyedeal reaction.

5402044 And yet people are still stricken with shortsightedness...

5402070
I suppose they can't see the big picture.

5402073 It's like that time the invisible fairground opened up in my neighborhood. It had to shut down because no one could see the attraction.

5402087
Hopefully whoever set it up was able to look past the failure.

5402090 Oh don't worry, he had a vision.

5402112
As the adage goes, "Hindsight is 20/20."

5402118 Ah, the past. Always an eye opener.

5402137
Any ophthalmologist would agree.

This was amazing. I wouldn't object to more second person from you. Neither would I object to more snowdrop.

5402160 Thank you so much! I will try my hardest and, as with this, have fun doing it

5402159 Ah, the Ophthalmology office! What a sight for sore eyes!

5402290
Hope I don't have to see one!

5402316 I seem to lack the foresight that would have told me of this stories' eye popping success

5402405 eye made a happy sound when I saw the number of likes and faves it got right out of the gate. I thought my eyes were playing tricks on me

5402414
But no! --It's a stroke of glauc that you got such a successful story!

5402418 I just can't get over the social astigmatism that this might create

5402422
Keep your eye on this story. It just might get featured!

Sent from my eyePhone

5402430 eye cannot, eye am going on technological hiatus for a while and I am going to be without internet for unknown amount of time. I am leaving tomorrow and I just can't monitor it. mind keeping a watch on it and PMing me if it does, I would be very grateful

5402441 my inner child wants to say "Eye can't hear you!"
but then again, there is Wumbo involved (One of the most comical episodes, besides all the others)
I shed many tears when I watch the original episodes

5402524

my inner child wants to say "Eye can't hear you!"

EYE-EYE, CAPTAIN!

5402558 OOOOOOOOHHHHH!
Who lives in a pineapple under the sea?

5402571
SPONGEBOB SQUAREPANTS!

5402578 absorbent and yellow and porous is he

5402594
SPONGE! BOB! SQUARE! PANTS!

Quite well-written

5402650 thank you! give some love to sirob too and thank you for faving it!
5402601 I forget the rest of the song

5402666
Here you go:

If nautical nonsense be something you wish,
SPONGE!
BOB!
SQUARE!
PANTS!
Then drop on the deck and flop like a fish!
pesttrackers.com/images/sponge.jpg
pbs.twimg.com/profile_images/3468420961/95841c04807c60c21052bfd1c4d1d8c9_400x400.jpeg
upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/d/dd/Square_-_black_simple.svg
sfweekly.com/imager/homeless-man-beaten-and-robbed-of-pants/b/original/3204747/14b0/2a1fe82.jpg
Ready?

SPONGEBOB SQUAREPANTS!
SPONGEBOB SQUAREPANTS!
SPONGEBOB SQUAREPANTS!
Sponge-Bob. . . Square-Pants!

5402752 That made me laugh :rainbowlaugh:
OH my sides!

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