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Dunglord


"One of these days, wham, bam, zoom, straight to the moon!"

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Maxwell is a weird human, he just stays inside all day. I may have found something that could get him out of his room, however. I just hope that it works...

Rated Teen for Language usage in both the story and music.

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 14 )

Other than the odd spelling error, It's Great.

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You can't just say that and not tell me where it is! :flutterrage:

Also thank you! :pinkiehappy:

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You mispelled chuckling... You said chucking instead. It was somewhere in the 3rd or 4th chapter, (im not going to put all of them here because i am lazy and theres a better method)
Little trick to find your errors that I learned from someone on Deviant Art If you re read it in a day or two you should have no trouble finding the errors, has something to do with your brain automatically thinking that it doesn't see what it doesn't want to and will correct the errors in your mind, It really helps.

Btw, there aren't many errors, so good job on that front.

[Listening Material] - [How Much A Dollar Cost] [Blacker The Berry] Choose One.

Both the yt vids have been taken down :applejackunsure:
Also, don't tell me what to do!
I'll listen to both thank you very much :derpytongue2:

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Goddamnit.

Oh well, at least you have the song names, so you could look them up if you really wanted to :P

8114477

They seem to be up on my end though?

Ahhh
That was perfect
This story really REALLY got me good.
Thank you mate

Comment posted by 001101598730 deleted Jun 21st, 2019

What year was it on earth when he came to equestria

nice a new Chapter

No offense but i has completely forgot about this

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I gueeess it would be nice to read through this baby ...one more time ...just to see if we forgot somethings.
BUT I really liked this nation wide art walk getting the public to see what he was doing.
This was fun

Rereading for perhaps the third or fourth time, wonderful story, any thoughts of continuation?

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