Double Bunt Cake

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Metal-Max1991

Metal-Max1991 #1 · Dec 1st, 2014 · · ·

Nice work

ShagDragon

ShagDragon #2 · Dec 1st, 2014 · · ·

Glad to see a commission up.
And hooray for chubby pone :D

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cpgrad08

cpgrad08 #4 · Dec 1st, 2014 · · ·

Enjoyed it very much.

TimeRarity64

TimeRarity64 #5 · Dec 1st, 2014 · · ·

I wish I was in Mrs. Cake's position. -Gulps-

The Judge

The Judge #6 · Dec 1st, 2014 · · ·

it must have been some kind of architectural trick to make it appear as though it was simple as a small, sweetly constructed cottage instead of this massive interior operation that it apparently was instead.

It's a Time Lord science!3.bp.blogspot.com/-NQQO2TLXON8/UWQTxHgpT5I/AAAAAAAAF-0/OvGMki7ZKqo/s1600/The-tenth-Doctor-TARDIS-Time-Lord-Yeah-doctor-who-31965854-500-250.gif

00Colt

00Colt #7 · Dec 2nd, 2014 · 3 · ·

To put it frankly Pinkie Pie was the envy of anacondas everywhere.

NO!

Alticron

Alticron #8 · Dec 6th, 2014 · · ·

There are some things you may want to edit. First, there are several times where you wrote Ms. Cake instead of Mrs. Cake. And lastly,

She'd basically caught him with her tongue halfway down his throat, and his hands playing with her cheeks like molding clay.

I think that either this story in missing an anthro tag or that should be hooves.

Metal-Max1991

Metal-Max1991 #9 · Dec 6th, 2014 · · ·

5332785 a lady with a dark side? I'm intrigued, madam.

Trig Is A Writer

Trig Is A Writer #10 · Dec 26th, 2014 · · ·

To put it frankly Pinkie Pie was the envy of anacondas everywhere.

CAN YOU NOT, PLOTPONY? CAN YOU NOT?

maskedcollector05

maskedcollector05 #11 · Jan 6th, 2015 · · ·

"..but ‘oh sweet Celestia’s grace’ did those sweets ever know where to go when they got there. To put it frankly Pinkie Pie was the envy of anacondas everywhere."
Good use of Nicki Minaj's butt song as a reference.
I feel me and Shortcake have a lot in common. I mean, he's an ass-stallion. I'm an ass connoisseur. We're like kindred spirits, man! Still feel sad for Mr. Cake tho.
One thing: plz describe Shortcake's appearance a bit more. Well maybe just his mane, I keep confusing his appearance (in my mind) to another OC I know of.

Magatsu Orpheus