Pinkie Pie invites her friends over to the Sugarcube Corner to try out her newest pastry creation.
A One-Shot with some experimental elements.
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Pinkie would invent Twinkies...
Why the teen rating?
4838016 Pinkie is a baker. You would think that she would be trying to make something new... That doesn't kill her friends.
Good story. I like simple one-shots that feel like they could actually by something from the show. I'm seriously sleep deprived, so I'm sorry if that didn't make complete sense.
But now I'm kinda hungry.... Kitchen's so far away...
Goddammit author, I'm in the mood for a Twinkie now.
4838050 Actually, I really enjoy writing these little scenes and creating these small situations more than writing out a long story since I can contain the fun in 1,500 words or fewer.
4838062 YES!!! THE STORY WORKED!!!
I'm still waiting for the penis joke.
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Think you may need a proofreader for your comments. :P Also, it is a pain in the anus to copy and paste things between those quote things on a phone.
Those commas in red needed to be removed.
That sounds disgusting...
I'm not saying it was bad, it's just there's no conflict. Every good story has to have a conflict. Yeah, Applejack and Rainbow Dash got into a little scrape, but it only lasted a paragraph, and it was just RD and AJ being their typical selves. Basically it's just them, well... Eating pink twinkies. So what I'm saying is... I don't understand.
You do realize 'reek' usually denotes a bad smell, like garbage.
4838351 Fixed
4838768 Changed (I do know)
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The reason you felt that way was because the plot was meant to be incredibly simple, that way I can experiment with writing about the "5 senses" that a character / or characters experience in a story.
Also, is there any conflict when you are enjoying a Twinkie?
Wait caffeine was in Twinkies? Why is that bad?
Alright that was funny. I'm glad the Twinkie Pinkie turned out to be innocent, sugary fun. All the talk about the cream made me think Pinkie was being weird for a moment but I'm glad I was wrong.
Love Rarity's funny reaction when she eat hers.
4865211 Thank you very much for the review and... yeah. I wanted the treat to be innocent.
Although... I could have changed this little part right here...
...to something that would require the Mature tag.
except Spike, for the same stupid-ass reason she didn't include him in "Maud Pie": because the writers don't like to think he's friends with the mane 6.
4869128 So I take that you are upset over the fact that I didn't include Spike in this story?
4870021 I'm upset that Pinkie doesn't think of Spike as one of her friends.
unfortunately, this happened in canon, so I'm more upset that this is a reminder of that depressing fact.
Spike entered where the mane six had just enjoyed the Pinkie Twinkies and with his frustrations coming to a boiling point he screamed "Aw COME ON!" He looked at all his so called friends his little claws were clenched in rage , Tears coming to his eyes " You guys just don't care do you?"
'FOREVER!"
He slowly waddled over and sat in the corner . He sat for a short while till he felt a hug and a sweet voice tell him "That's all right my Spikey Wikey"
He knew exactly who the mare was " You can blame the writers at DHX for all your troubles" She gave him a little kiss in his cheek, Spike turned to look in her eyes "She gave him another little kiss "And you can thank FimFiction writers for a swimmingly great time my gentledrake, My hero"
Spike blushed and replied " I'll always be at your service my lady" Twilight then said "Does this mean your crus..."
As Pinkie pops out of nowhere in twilights face"FOOOOREEEEVER!"
odor = stinky
Aroma = Yummy
What you do? read the twinkie label???? More in the chemistry in the players and less in the food.
very adorable and clever, when I first heard Pinkie say "Twinkie Pinkie" in WINTER WRAPUP,
for some reason, that almost sound a bit dirty. glad I was wrong. well done and I look forward
to more confectionary creations courtesy of our fiesty, fun fuschia filly.
Well, I guess Twinkies must really be good, then. I have never tried one. Do they grown on trees in America?
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No, but they are limited whenever a zombie apocalypse occurs.
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Haha! What was the name of that movie Z-land or something...
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Zombieland, yeah.