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Rarity is one of the most famous, successful fashionistas in Equestria. The unicorn has it all from the shops and dresses to the fame and respect. Certainly it has been an easy road for her, right? At least, that is what Sweetie Belle thinks until she finally asks Rarity, "What kept you going despite all your failures?"
Edited by tommal & link4
Pre-Read by Scared Blade
Based on the events before "Crusaders of the Lost Mark."
My 5th short story in the "A Lesson From" series. Enjoy!
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Oh, the infamous perils of learning from failures
. I could totally relate to Sweetie Belle here. This was nice! I enjoyed the read.
7872203 Thank you very much.
I can relate as well.
perseverance
Sweetie Belle!
I'm standing right here ya know...
Like how Spike chases after you?
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“Rarity! I’m ho-o-o-ome!” Sweetie Belle announced, belting at the top of her lungs.
“Oh, my. Sweetie Belle!” Rarity frowned. “How many times have I told you not to come in here and yell like some uncouth hooligan?”
Because Sweetie Belle did an imitation of Rarity's accent using that word and Apple Bloom demonstrated its meaning to perfection.
7873640 Is that really a good thing or a bad thing? I can't tell.
7874232 It was on Sisterhooves Social, when Apple Bloom belched.
Hi, you've been Rage Reviewed.
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/201778/rage-reviews/thread/300547/rage-review-a-lesson-from-failure-by-nugget
7887282 Thank you
Everything Wrong With This Story:
1. Mannequins *Ding*
2-6. Rarity is doing typical Rarity cliché with clothing stuff/things. Plus five sins *Dings*
7. Swooning *Ding*
8-12. Plus another five sins for the clichés of Rarity. Nice job, very well done. *Dings*
13&14.. Obvious reference is obvious, that's a double sin. *Ding* *Ding*
15. Using a word such as uncouth, shame on you for making me work to look up words. *Ding*
16-20. And yet another five sins for yet another Rarity and you know what that means, a 3X multiplier for the Bonus Round!!! *Dings*
21. Students *Ding*
Bonus: X3 Multiplier
Total: 63
Sentence: Raritiché (Rarity cliché)
This now has an EWW right here.
EWW This
The message in your story is something every artist can relate to. At some point, you will find yourself in your work and look at it with a different set of eyes. But what would one have to do when one's greatest critic is oneself?