Just a latin american guy who wants to post his stories in the site. That's all.
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It's been a year and a half since a failed experiment brought as a result the human invasion to Equestria. After having lost absolutely everything, the ponies seemed to be in crossroads, and didn't seem to find a solution. At least, that's what they thought until they put down their hopes on an unexpected ally.
Translated to English by djr3b3l, Sweet Letters, Robertii U and FALG
Edited by warewolves (Since prologue to chapter 4), ShadowblazeCR and VitalSpark
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What reason do they have to invade Equestria?
What reason? Does Equestria have some sort of... element that can cure cancer? What? Give me a damn reason!
Okay, your sentences are awkwardly written.
I've said it before an I'll say it again. The only media that utilized the Dancing With Wolves formula effectively was the movie Dancing With Wolves. And that's because it was based off a true story.
With every update of chapter, I will answer all the comments you guys leave to me.
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If you want to know the reasons, you have to keep reading to the chapter where explains that. Respect the Dances With Wolves formula, is the first time that someone compares my fanfic with that movie. Even made me want to see it someday.
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Fixed
The legend thing, not the horns one.
Also thanks to "Vengeful Spirit" and "A Follower" for follow me
PD: Sorry for my bad english, this is not my first language
Half the battle with creating literature is presentation. Sadly, no matter how many times we say it, we DO judge books by their cover. And this cover looks like a misanthropic, gary-stu, self-insert crack fic. Maybe it's not. But I just don't want to give the time, because of said cover judging.
I suggest you look over what you got and see if you can improve on anything in your presentation.
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Nah, is not a self-insert or gary-stu. Too bad for me then because the person who made it is gone for a while.
Thanks for the comment anyway
4837110 You're welcome. I was looking more at the introduction though, not the art. You could have nothing there, or have just this: resources1.news.com.au/images/2011/04/02/1226032/586509-seppy.jpg
The picture might help, but it's supposed to accent the description in the introduction, not take it's place. If the intro doesn't inspire intrigue in the story, you're doing it wrong.
At first I thought the title was The Legend of Rave Brick
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