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Exelion


Just a latin american guy who wants to post his stories in the site. That's all.

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You know that your friend is a bad influence, but you have other reasons to be with her.

Story based in this image


Traslated to English by FALG
Edited by Banshee

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 17 )

Wow.

This is really romantic! Keep up the good work!

There's some awkward phrasing which could changed to help the story flow more smoothly, but overall, this is a cute story.

Those two are so sweet together in this fic. :heart::heart:

This is an absolutely amazing story. Such a great tale of two little fillies who are nervous about expressing how they truly feel about one another.

DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:

CUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTTTEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :heart:

I really enjoyed this! Magnifico! Gracias! :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by ServingSpoon deleted May 6th, 2016
Comment posted by ServingSpoon deleted May 6th, 2016
Comment posted by ServingSpoon deleted Apr 25th, 2016
Comment posted by ServingSpoon deleted Apr 25th, 2016

The next morning, the sun crowned the first hours of the day, and colts like our protagonists had to attend to a new school day.

Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon are fillies. A colt is a young male horse.:twilightsheepish:

Other then that I loved this.:twilightsmile:

SilverTiara FOREVER!:pinkiehappy:

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Hi, thanks for pointing out that mistakes, all fixed now :pinkiehappy: and thanks for the favs.

7191338 well i may have been overly critical about the change in perspective. But first person would have worked for both chapters since nothing happened outside either pony's perception. But I want to reiterate this was a great fic and really did my OTP proud!:pinkiehappy:

Haven't Evan began yet, but I can already tell this is going to be good.

Picture this chapter's dead. Nice story though!

Happy anniversary of the Silver Spoon group!

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