Just a latin american guy who wants to post his stories in the site. That's all.
A routinary life can make us weak against any unexpected event that modifies our routine. Twilight Sparkle writes a report about her activities in this day, trying to seem calm. But the reality doesn't allow her to lie.
Winner of a latinamerican fanfic writer competition.
Translated to English by kowaiser
Edited by ShadowblazeCR
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Pretty good! Rather good build up to even more to come, I suppose!
Awesome
It definitely reminds me of Scootaloo. I would love to see this expanded with both a prequel and sequel(s).
There's a lot of typos in the description both short and long:
Here's a proposed fixed version:
Short Description:
I know this is translated, but I hope you fix these minor errors to prevent any annoying downvotes because of these.
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Is traslated, but is not a excuse to leave some minor bugs here and there. Thanks to tell me about that.
And thanks everyone for favs this fic.
This is interest without a doubt. You official caught my attention
¡Pero si es Exelion! My friend Exelion, so mush time ago. Great fanfic, i can see why you win the competition. See 'ya.
Wonderfully written and now, I ponder. What would happen if I lost my sight
( play card games, read and write constantly, and love watching the night)
*dark, maddening thoughts bubble up*
Hehehehehehe... Not gonna think about that
I reviewed this story!
My review can be found here.
It seems rather odd that, despite Twilight thinking of herself both as Princess of Magic and Princess of Friendship, has lost sight of what she declared in the series premier: Friendship is Magic. I could more easily buy a pre-ascension Twilight falling into despair since she has not quite internalised that. By the time she is a Princess, however, it seems rather hypocritical of her to wallow after getting her wings because of friendship and a friendship spell. I mean, obviously she's going to be depressed, but that after 100 days it takes Spike to point out this logic seems out of place.
That, and as a Princess, at least now she's learning what life is like for two-thirds of her subjects.