After a suprise visit from Sorian leaves Rainbow confused, life seems to go on as normal. But it will soon be learned that it will never be normal again.
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You must be willing to die to protect those you love
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The title should be:
Rainbow Dash's Pregnancy
Fixed. Capitalization is always important.
That said the story itself isn't that bad.
Ill fix that
Yay you like it :)
Wow. I can't even read the description without cringing. Lack of capitalization, no punctuation, and you misspelled Soarin's name.
Dude really im disabled i cant twrite well
4710816
I'm mentally retarded, but that doesn't give me an excuse for any mistakes I made in writing or in anything else. I have to learn how to do better just like everyone else does, even if it means it will be twice as hard for me.
Just because you have a disability, it does not mean you get a pass on mistakes you made!
The story isn't that bad, but it could use an editor's touch.
4710871
Yeah i need one
4710916 Well, we have plenty of editors on the site that can help you.
4710946
can you help me find one
4710963 You can ask someone to edit the story for you in those group: Editors-R-Us. If you search Editors in Groups, there are plenty of editor groups.
Other than the spelling and grammatical errors it was a pretty good story
4710986
Sweet your hired
4711095
Yay
...i feel like i read this on FanFiction...
4710866 Are you really mentally retarded?
i love this story
could you make a sequal?
4711598
Way ahead of you already started
yay! can't waite till you post it!!
4711095
You edited cus it definitly seems like you did
4711574
thanks :)
Wow! Nice story.
4712264
thnx
You have a lot of spelling errors. also this chapter moves really fast.
4714628
Yeah i have an editor who will be working on that
4711387
If by mentally retarded you mean autistic, then yes.
4727261
there will be
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL I am laughing so hard right now!!
The spelling errors man! i can barely read. But it was still hiliarios about that one mistake.
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL
These mistakes are hilarios!!!! insta fave!
DAFUQ? And no offense but did you write this with your face or something?
Fave cuz number one: Hilarios grammer and spelling mistakes
(no offense) And also a good story! 
4749286
Um kinda maby a little bit here and there
4750719 is there going to be a seqaul
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Yeah but it will probovly be awile im not as old as you think so i have school coming up so it will be awile
Jhey evreypony lunaishot is back in action as you know i have promised a sequal so i have created rainbow dashs mothering it will be out sooner than later i promise
4819231 yay
Should have made it hard cider. We all know how much Rainbow loves her cider!
Rainbow Dash wears makeup?
99% of the time it's a urine test.
Soarin, you man-whore!
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I think a lot could come from a beta reader, spell-check, and slowing the pace of the story. I do find it very entertaining, however.
A male widow is called a widower.
A lady only looks slightly overweight at 2 months. No one would be able to tell that she was pregnant.
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yeah ill be re-doin the spelling tommorow at 6:00 AM ish
...Why is this in the Spike x Rainbow Dash folder?
Why is this unrelated spikedash story in Spikedash group?
Uh this shouldn't be in SpikeDash group. There isn't even a Spike tag here. Fail.
4991002
yeah i know
This is like a classic Rainbow and Soarin ship with a foal
I finnaly fixed the errors in the story so now it is readable
5414367
no but my story is going cuco
5414373 its not regestering on my story list