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Mystic Shadow


Won't be as active, apologies >_<

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//HIATUS: Edited 10/1/17


As childhood friends, Rainbow Dash and Soarin spent nearly all their childhood together, sure they had Fleetfoot, Spitfire and Fluttershy but they could trust each other equally in anything...

Not really...

Ever since Rainbow moved away to Ponyville, hoping that he would someday see her again, Soarin never got the time to spill his feelings to her. He never replied to her letters. He never went to visit her. He wanted to forget her... to not break her heart. After all, his life is way better than love... right? You know, loyalty? His crushes friend's element...?

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I like it ... :derpytongue2:

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WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOwww Thanks alot for the long OHHH :I

I like it ... :derpytongue2:

... thankzies

Interesting. Has some grammar issues. but that can easily be fixed with an editor. Also, don't know if this is your fault but those lines in between every line is really bugging me... but i still like the story. :twilightsmile:

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Oh okay thanks and also, I dont really have an editor and write off my mind, my school work is very confusing at times when doing English even though I know grammar. I am still learning quite a bit so apologies :twilightsmile::pinkiesmile:

BEST CHAPTER EVER KEEP IT UP!!!!!!!!T UP!!!!!!!!

:rainbowkiss:

Nextttttttt
Please

It's a really aswome story!!!!Great job!!!!I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

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Awwh thanks :3 Writing it currently! :pinkiehappy:

6952656 No prob!!And yayyyy!!!!!

What is going to happen!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!???????????????

Also aswome and funny chapter!!!!

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tbh, I'm serious and I don't know though I'm the author

6952760 Well it's ok!I can't wait!!!

Umm.. Errr...
I WANT A BIG BOWL OF SOARINDASH FLUFF NEXT CHAPTER
PLEASE AND THANK YOU

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Hmmmmm nah! in at the most around 5 chapters! Maybe I'll throw a kiss is in XD ITZ BUILDING UP! (hoping for it to come in the 3rd/2nd chapter after this one) Sozzy !

UPDATE??!??!?!??!?!?!??!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!??!?!??!?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!??!?!?????????????!?!?!?!?

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ChanGed up the plot a bit and for some reason it didn't save, I got frustrated and now I'm going to write it again

YouTube LOL:rainbowlaugh: cute chap though :heart:

7545090 ^^ Old fic, really. cringy to me, gonna re write it in ny spare time ^^

"OOH! ARE YOU CALLING RARITY A MARSHMALLOW?! COOL! I CLASS HER AS ONE AS WELL!" squealed Pinkie.

"EEEEEEEEEXXXXXXXXXXCUSSSSSSSEEEEEE MEEE?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

"UH OH! I'M OUT!"

CRAP :rainbowlaugh:

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