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The Wonderbolts are worried. Spitfire and Fleetfoot disregard their teammate, acted without seeking permission and, worst of all, got somepony else involved. A pony who has every right to take legal action and whose best friend happens to be one of the Princesses of Equestria. The only way to clear the air is to apologize. But words are cheap. Luckily, the Wonderbolts have something that Rainbow Dash wants.
A chance to prove herself.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 27 )

Another story that I can't go without reading... Welp. Better get started then.

Brilliant! This makes one of the best intro I've read here on FiMFic. It's very easy to get absorbed fairly early on, which is something that not a lot of authors seem to manage, especially in the first few hundred words! Keep it up!:pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2:

The premise of this story grabbed me immediately. "Rainbow Falls" is not on my fave-list because of all the knuckle-headedness that went on in that episode. This story is an interesting rebuttal. I'll be keeping an eye on it. Upvote from me.

hope we get some good ole soarindash!

3998394 piffle! Far too little for the severity of their insult.

Dash should get her pick of the whole team ;)

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Ohh yes, I remember. :unsuresweetie:

There's gonna be more to this, right? It's off to an excellent start right now. Lol'ed at the letter opening scene. I could see something like that actually being done on the show.

...You have my attention.

Are you still writing?

SO AWSOME!:rainbowkiss:


Yesh, an update.


Btw i see the romance.tag, what shipping will be in this story?

4441898 My guess is Spitfire x Rainbow Dash, but I'm not too sure.

Yay update....and for the shipping, please tell me it's a SoarinDash :s

Well here's some advice. Copy and paste the chapters to make sure your not missing some of the chapters. Dang with all the fics I'm reading today I just see references to a future fic I have in mind. This fic is about one of the points in my idea. The fic I plan to write is called broken rainbows and wings of fire. The other fic I read that reminded me of my idea was rekindling. Trust me it's going to be nothing you have seen yet.

Well, I'm hooked.

The gdoc import function only sorta works. You're better copy-pasting the thing. I learned to type formatting tags on the fly pretty quick.

Looks interesting. Continue...

Great story so far! About how long do you think the story will be? Just a querie :twilightsmile:
I hope you enjoy reading my comment, appreciating it, copying it by hand, tearing it into little pieces, coloring it, and using it to decorate goody bags! :rainbowlaugh:

Looks like a bisexual love triangle is forming. Could be interesting

Spitfire adjusted herself slightly, about to give a reply. Rainbow Dash sat up a little straighter in her chair.

“Really?” asked Snap Shot. “What a shame. Any particular reason for this secrecy?”

Missed a bit here I think.

'Fraid that I can't really tell at this point. I'd say somewhere around twenty if everything plays out like I want it to.

Good catch! All fixed now. :twilightsmile:

4567822 Ehhh, maybe. Then again, looks a lot like Spitfire's trying to play Dash to keep the 'Bolts out of trouble. Might just turn out to be SoarinDash once Rainbow figures it out :P

Well, looks like Rainbow is noticing that something smells funny, but I wonder if the novelty of being a Wonderbolt will get to her first? Don't tell me, I'll find out the old fashioned way.

It's a slow burner, going into the "tracking" list...

It's interesting to see what kind of media circus each individual author drums up for these ships.

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