♪ Kingdom of ships around me and it looks like I'm the queen ♫
This story is a sequel to Secrets Between Siblings
After Rumble ran off, Scootaloo took off in hot pursuit after him to make him feel better. But, when she finally catches him, she finds out the reason for him being upset is bigger than she thought.
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Eh. I prefer RumbleBloom. Still, not a bad story
Not a fan of OrphanLoo, but it was handled well enough and not as some random sob story. Still, very short and sweet.
SOMBRA!!! DT and silver heard him ROAR
FINALLY! Someone else brings that up! How awesome must Rumble be if he could hang with adult pegasi with 10.0 wingpower?
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Right? I always thought about it and I was like, "Man, maybe Thunderlane or somepony has been training him to be a great flier." I wouldn't be surprised if he ended up on the Wonderbolts sometime in the future.
'Universe of Harmony' confirmed.
I never thought I would see a story past 50 Likes with no dislikes.
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I know right!
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Will it make 80?
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Yes
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Hella. Time to party.
Nice story with such character complexity. Liked, favorited, and I'll feature it on the blog I work for.
I never thought I'd see Rumble portrayed like this. You did a great job. Hopefully, Thunderlane will learn his lesson after this. (But he doesn't have to be punished, just have a talking to.)
So sweet!
Ooookkkay... Now I'm interested to see where things go with all 4 of them.
Nice! No hints of ButtonBelle like the last one, but still great. Keep it up!
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stay classy
Here the terms the kids use is a bit too technical... works against my suspension of disbelief which is odd since in your last story they seemed more like children. Putting the two parts together would have helped answer some questions and give more of a feeling of completeness. I understand now why Rumble (and can presume why Apple Bloom) were so very upset about their siblings dating. I like bittersweet stories and this is no exception. It's empowering to know that even though there are tough times that there can be joy anyways. I feel that the issues here were dealt with sensitivity and actually advanced the plot. It wasn't meandering and annoying wangst or cheap shots. My only real complaint is that they don't sound like 10 year olds, or too much like the show either. Too technical and legalistic. If they mispronounced a word or something then it would be more believable, or if they explained things in a more childlike manner. Still solid all in all.
Ohh I guess this is during a Time before season 9 came around so I probably need to treat this as an alternate universe story but dang that's kind of sad when she says that 😢
So it looks like Scootaloo finally made it to rumble even though she got hurt a little but she got to him to talk about what really makes him upset and it's not because Thunderlane and Applejack dating it's because he's been keeping a secret which he hated it so much after hearing the news about what happened to his parents I know thunderlane was trying to save him the heartache he's going through but I'm sure the kid wants to know the truth as well I think this was a pretty sweet moment of these two it kind of reminds me of another comic that I read they had this kind of talk before but still this was pretty good keep up the good work