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Twinkie Hoof
Writer of clop, rule 63 and padded pony.
Twinkie Hoof
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Karma's a real you know what, eh Lightning Dust?
Hah!
Lightning Dust so deserved it!
Heh.
I really like this one
And thanks for using my art as a cover! Here's a link to it: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/13714335/
Awesome... just AWESOME! I really hope there will be a sequel with "little Dusty" as Dashies new foal playmate^^
This was really cute and awesome! There weren't any errors in grammar or plot that are worth noting, the characterization seems spot on, really, the only thing I did notice is what appears to be a missing paragraph, unless I read it wrong, which is possible.
Here:
Assuming you wrote this in a google document, a double space like that between two paragraphs that seem to be confusing means during the upload it missed out a paragraph (It's done that to me I dunno how many times.)
So yeah just thought I'd let you know I spotted that, aside from that though, this was a wonderful story, I enjoyed it and I thoroughly enjoyed the ending with Lighting Dust getting what she deserves. I just wish I knew what the future holds for the new little family.
I love you Tyrant, I can honestly say I get very excited when I see you post a new story, or chapter. Always a great sight to see. Keep it up my friend, you rule!
this was a wonderfull read , it realy is a shame it's only a one shot beacuse it has so much potential for more chapters and to become one of the true greats of this type of story's iif possable please rewconcider makeing this multiple chapters it would be truly wonderfull if you did
I loves this story, your work is awesome Tyrant. Still, I wish this could have been longer, a multiple chapter story.
4540372 Maybe the future will look like this:
A whole week has passed since Spitfire found Dash in a Diaper and "adopted" her. Now comes the weekend and Spitfire has to return to her home. A little house a bit outside from the city. As Captain of the Wonderbolts, she could easily pay the rent and had always enough left for bad times. But this weekend will be different for her. And Rainbow Dash is part of this difference...
Well, That's my thoughts to this. And maybe "uncle" Soarin will come over for a visit^^
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Hehe, that sounds like an idea in the making.
Anyway I do wish to tell you again just how well done this story is, it never overdoes anything, just the right amount of everything to make this one of the few perfect stories on fim.
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ey lightning dust? Sompony a hippocrit?
ey lightning dust? Somepony need a diper?
by the way this is an amazing story, i thought this was going to turn into a clopfic, but it didnt, so yay and thanks! wuv
this gave me an idea for one of my storys!
Bigmac: the bad one?
Me: Nnnyyyaaaa
That was super adorable
I "d'aaaawwwwwwwed" way too many times. 
Loved it, especially the way you did spitfire's character.
This was just so adorable!! I love Spitfire's characterization here! And I think I know why she was so quickly accepting of little Dashie – apart from Dashie being the most adorable foal/adult foal in the entire universe – but I think that Spitfire's reached that point in her life when she's on her "Mommy Clock"
And I would so love this to be more than just a oneshot, it's just so adorable too just leave it like that!
D'aww
I liked how Spitfire made Dash comfortable with the diapers in public and not be ashamed of it. Although it does beg the question of what her motivation for any of this actually was. Having fun with an adult foal, sure, but going as far as making her not ashamed if anyone laughs at her? That needed a bit of explaining that was nowhere to be found.
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Yep, i agree. Spitfire backed her up and made Dashie feel as if she could be accepted without fear of what others may think. Kinda like how i felt talking about being a brony two nights ago at camp. They weren't critical at all and asked me questions. My good friend said she'd try to watch MLP this week.
THAT WAS THE BEST FANFIC I HAVE EVER READ!!!!!!!!!!
sorry pinkie got in again but seriously Tyrant hoof you keep on going man because I love this story and it gave me the feelz like no other also CLIFFHANGER!!!
Hehe funny shit
whoa that was amazing. I enjoyed every single paragraph of this story.
Also just found out that you wrote The Prissy Pony's Padding... I think I might need to keep an eye on you.
encore? dustys punishment?
D'AWWW OVERLOAD!!! *HNNNNNNNGG*
You have earned another follower
I apparently forgot to comment.
Either way, I liked the way you played Rainbow Dash as a submissive foal. That and the way you portrayed Spitfire getting so quickly into this mommy role was heartwarming. Your writing is sooo good.
It's one of those stories that only work with ponies, though. I really doubt I would've enjoyed it as much with humans, as everything went way too quick and far too unrealistic for this. So,hurrah for the idealistic world of My Little Pony!
In a singsong voice: Karma!
Awesomely awesome and 200000% cooler too.
I AM READING THIS SO RIGHT NOW. Sounds super epic. Im not much into the publicizing thing however, this sounds adventurous and super fun. I am so game on this, and I will comment again when finished reading :)
I CANNOT BELIEVE THIS
THAT WAS TOTALLY RADICAL! I could feel the rush of every individual moment and tweak. This is one of those things you wish was animated. :) I love that beginning with Spitfire and rainbow and the realism you placed into that. You emphasised the military feel and brought me, and the other readers into this wonderful world. I love it when Spitfire starts talking slow and take one step at a time outside. Almost a tender moment. :)
Beautifully done. I wish I can write fictions like you.....
Can we get a sequal. Pwetty pwease
5557841 Seriously! We need a sequel! Pllllleeeeeeeeaaaaaaasssssssseeeeeee!?
.....adorable...
Will there ever be a sequel?
ive read a lot of these kind of stories, and yet this one is so unique...I enjoyed every aspect of it, everything from momma and uncle to the calming touch a mother gives. this has true potential to turn into a chapter story, my goodness this is such a great little story.
5922903 I'd read it if there was one.
I'm dying of cute Y.Y
By Luna's moon I beg you, do NOT end this story here, it needs more!
NEEDS A SEQUIL!!!!!!
Lol this is too funny and too cute . Needs a sequel.
I never thought I would ever hear... well read Spitfire saying that.
6947439 I totally agree with you.
6995440 thank you
Took me a while to get around to reading this, but I am glad I did. It was Very fluffy and cute
I love momma Spits! If I were inspired to write a story about her, would you mind?
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I'd say go right ahead! Thanks for the compliment.
This was so great! I didn't think I could love any pony taking care of RD as much as her own Mommy, but you just proved me wrong! Momma Spitfire was great! I applaud your creativity, especially where Lightning Dust was concerned. She deserved it! You did such a wonderful job, and I just love this! Can we get a sequel, please??? HAVE A LIKE, HAVE A FAVE, HAVE A COMMENT, HAVE SOME PONY-MOJIS, HAVE ALL THE WONDERFUL THINGS THIS STORY DESERVES!
Nicely done. Spitfire makes a better mom than I thought.
MORE PWEASE!