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Bliss Authority
Don't do dark magic, kids, or this might happen to you. Fantasy fan, gamer, inveterate shipper, Flash Sentry apologist, fiction author - fan and otherwise.
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If someone had told me four years ago that I'd be writing erotica about pastel horses, I'd have looked at them real funny. Yet, here we are.
Tell me what you think and why you think it, if you can; that's the only way I'll get better at writing.
Something to be Shy About - or On Courage is coming Soon.TM
So is Deduction, Induction, Intuition - or On Wisdom
This was not bad. RariJack clop in itself comes around once in a blue moon, but those two getting it on with BDSM is like trying to find a four-leaf clover. (Also, never saw AJ as the dom. Normally, that's Rarity's role. Kudos for switching it up!) You did a fairly well job with writing this, even if I'm not a fan of anthro. Have a thumbs up.
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Ahahaha I didn't even know that rarijack BDSM and Appletop was that rare.
That explains a LOT. Glad you liked it!
D'aww... I liked it, very sweet. And I am such a sucker for the Rarijack ship so this was something I had to read.
I must say that from now on I'll prefer Applejack to be on top in these kind of stories. I think it suits her being a strong earth pony and all, besides the usual concept of Rarity taking the lead is so overdone. Good job I say!
Keep it up, I'll be looking forward to your future stories.
4564391 If you like Flutterdash and delicious Twinkies (they're so delicious), I have a sequel and a planned sequel, respectively...
And yeah, thank you! I honestly didn't know that Appletop was so guldarned rare on FiMFiction when I wrote this thing.
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Thank you for the reply, Bliss.
I'll will read the sequel for sure, I like almost every mane6 shipping combination there so I'm sure I will enjoy some FlutterDash too. Not sure about Twinkies though, we dont have those in Sweden but I'll take your word for it.
This was beautiful.
5492272 Thank you. That's much more flattering to me than 'that was hot,' frankly.
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Something feels off here. The problem is beautifully laid out, but the resolution ... even after a few rereads I'm not entirely sure what it is the story presents as a resolution. Given Applejack's initial reaction I find it very hard to believe that all she needed to feel better was to hear Rarity affirm that she wanted it all. She can't possibly not have known that already, what with safewords and everything already in place.
The impression I get is that Applejack legitimately hates topping but went through with it for Rarity's sake. And that's very cute and sweet of her, but I miss some kind of acknowledgment from Rarity that she actually made a sacrifice here -- offer to do things AJ's ways the next time, or at least try to let AJ know her love is not conditional on AJ agreeing to go exactly as far as Rarity wants, or something.
Alternatively, AJ did actually enjoy abusing Rarity while the session lasted, and is now scared shitless that she's even capable of that. And in that case what she needs is not reassurances about what Rarity feels, but help with integrating that newfound capability into her own self-image. Which the story doesn't show her getting either.
Just some thoughts, +1 anyway.
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It's intended to be the latter - AJ terrified at what she's capable of, and that she loved it in the moment. And if that's unclear, that's on me!
I may need to rewrite these; the Trihorse Trilogy is my first and weakest fic in the MLP universe so I'm glad someone is giving it thoughtful analysis. I have a real problem with writing a single act of a three act story, usually a beginning without a middle or end, and this is kind of an example of that.