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Rarity needs gems for her upcoming dress, but has completely run out. In desperate need, she takes Applejack for a hunt, but finds out that gems are not the only thing she will be seeking. Honesty and generosity together in one, small, adventure of romance.
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That, was good.
Pretty good. No major criticisms for me to make note of.
I loved the premise but I felt that the story could have been fleshed out a lot more. To me the story just seemed to have moved far too quickly. Keep up the good work though.
Would have liked if the cave they ran into was where those gems were.
cute story i loved it very much and rarijack is my favorit of all shippings
That dialogue at the end where Rarity asks Applejack to be her special somepony is... really bad...
Kind of killed the whole story for me.
Eh, I give it a rough 6.5/10. Grammar was on point, which many stories usually lack, but the story itself and it’s pacing is just... no.