This story is a sequel to The Silver Spoons; A Tragic Silver Spoon Story
If you want to read this story first to get to the parts with Luna and the autistic foal first (and don't care about spoilers) then read below.
After her parents’ divorce, Silver Spoon has chosen to move to Manehattan with her mother instead of staying with her father in Ponyville. It wasn’t an easy decision, leaving all of her friends behind, but she felt it was necessary. Living in the city will mean that she will have more opportunities to follow the destiny her new cutie mark has chosen for her after she was changed by the events of The Silver Spoons.
In the city, she will make and help friends new and old, find love for the first time, figure out her feelings toward her parents after all they’ve done, and find a way to help her aunt and autistic cousin through their hard times.
All the while, she’s trying to figure out why Luna insists on visiting her dreams and what her older sister, Octavia, meant by her last words before she headed back home.
Artwork done by Silver Melodies
rated teen for some langue and mature themes
A silver spoon redemption story? Eh, why not?
4475868 Believe me, these stories are good.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Once again good job it's nice to see this up.
Looking forward to more
Suri Polomare and Diamond Tiara are sisters? This explains SO MUCH!
No offense, but you have to be very good with MS Paint to actually acceptable artwork with it. My profile pic is actually one of my MS Paint creations.
Nice update!
Silver Spoon is gonna get a coltfriend?
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Silver Spoon struggled to breathe.
I can't wait till the next chapter! Something tells me it's going to be good!
Really liking it so far I hope to see more. I like all of your ocs personalities (especially Lucky) and I approve of her soon to be coltfriend. Hope to see more :3
Please tell me this story isn't dead.
5848278 it's not, I just lost the drive to write this one for a while
5848314 Oh, okay!
That's good to know. Seriously. This story is amazing.
5848323 thanks, feel free to checkout some of my other works while you wait, though
5848689 Dont worry. I will.
5848749 Also, check out this
5848770 Sure.
When is Silver Spoon gonna write to da CMC? If my memory serves me correctly she still has to.
This needs to be continued soon.
that last line made me
"mm coconut" for some reason i found that just adorable.
is it like, okay to laugh at this?
also a little detail, if Silver Spoon's face got swatted (even though she wasn't physically hurt) wouldn't her glasses have been knocked off?
I don't understand what "please" has to do with anything.
Okay-
1. Babs is taken a big risk because Manehatten Cops are canon
orig11.deviantart.net/f4d3/f/2016/093/2/4/pony_cop_by_cheezedoodle96-d9xlgmv.png she's watching you, Babs Seed!
2. How can she have cash to just throw away like that?
3. does there have to be a three?
yeah it's great if you don't mind all the drug dealers and sex offenders hanging around and dropping used needles and
knows what other USED items they leave around.
at first I was thinking Lucky (who is obviously a threat to herself and others) was full on schizophrenic but I was diagnosed once with something called Schizoaffective disorder, which is borderline schizophrenia, exhibiting many of the same symptoms though not as severe. Was later traded for a bipolar diagnosis.
I'm sorry but Babs Seed has allot of trust building to do. I mean it's not like she totally betrayed her own cousin and then the two ponies she just made friends with all in one week.
I'll shutup now.
by the way this is what bipolar disorder looks like.
OH my GAWD I just had a "Galaxy Quest" flashback!
I think having Babs say autism is pretty "common" in her school is either overstating things or there is something terribly wrong in Manehatten that is creating these developmental disabilities.
1 out 68 US students have autism and thats the entire United States. We're talking about one city!
Though I will admit.. we have not yet met a single well adjusted and fully functioning foal in this story. Unless you count Babs and she's not exactly a foal.
actually I believe I remember commenting on the previous story about how it was cool (and yet tragic) that Silver Spoon knew so much about body language she could tell Applebloom still hated her even when she put on her best false front to try and get to know her.
remember her strict training?
Oh poor poor naive little Silver. Let's no pony tell her that Diamond and her were MUCH more cliched.
5943241 it was already mentioned that she did write to the CMC as well as Diamond. We just have only heard the details of her first letter to Diamond because her letters to the CMC are obviously not at this time important to the story.
In fact she is likely just talking about her day or important events in the last week. Such musings would be repetitive and boring to the reader, offering little to no substance to the overall plot.
okay this is a bit confusing. Earlier you mentioned in the cab ride to therapy Decimal got spooked by a "Police CAR" passing by with a siren (not a siren noise made by a pony). I have no problem with Automobiles in Equestria in fact I like the idea, but consistency is important.
Either emergency services (Police, fire, and ambulance) are delivered in pony drawn wagons or they have cars and trucks to make their services faster and more reliable. You just need to be consistent.
seriously is the entire school for special needs foals or just the class Silver Spoon and Decimal are in?
I am legitimately concerned about Lucky. What happens when she decides there is no longer a doubt that her garbage man is an alien and decides to take action? She already took a swing at Silver Spoon JUST for questioning her logic. That to me is a the very definition of a dangerous individual. She's a ticking time bomb and one of these days she's going to explode.
You know I forgot Silver Spoon had dyslexia. Now it makes sense. Silver Spoon is in a "special needs" class. That just leaves Babs. What's her hang up?
I'm guessing you mean lunch bell?
"everypony (if you want)" why was that added?
7255163 True.
This chapter really brought some memories back that I repressed. I got held back one year and I have been in and out of several "special needs" classes as a kid, all the way up to High School when my parents took me out and home schooled after my Freshman year.
I remember how awkward I felt among the other students who were obviously much less high functioning then I (thats putting it politely). i felt like there was something seriously wrong with me even though my disorders were not as severe.
Felt like a freak..
I can only imagine what Silver Spoon is going through. At least she was much more positive then I was about it.
isn't Switch a colt?
calling her teacher "mama" was that a symptom of her dyslexia, a snide remark, or a typo?
and OMG cross-dimensional Dyslexic slip ups!
I always figured it was Los Pegasus, as in a parody of Los Angeles which is Spainish for "City of Angels" ironically enough.
are we supposed to know what Silver is thinking here? because if we are I completely missed it. All i can think is "Rock" is short for "Rock Cocaine" is that what we are supposed to think?
well anyway this story has effected me on a much more personal level then the previous story.
and I think the word you are looking for is "instance" or "instant" not intense.