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Darkryt Orbinautz
Still slowly trying to disentangle from MLP. It is ... slow going.
Darkryt Orbinautz
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WHY THE DISLIKES!!!!???
I LOVE THIS SERIES!
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Thank you! I adore this series too. I probably wouldn't have made a sequel if I didn't!
But I have an answer to your question.
Some people don't like "human," so that's a few instant dislikes right there ...
Some people don't like "dark," so that's a few instant dislikes right there ...
Some people are creeped out by "tentacles," so that's a few instant dislikes right there ...
Some people are REALLY creeped by "lactation," so that's a few instant dislikes right there ...
Interesting premise, and is it actually possible to "develop" a fetish for something where none previously existed? 'Cause that's what seems what happened to rarity
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Maybe, I don't know. I was thinking of it more as a drug addiction. It feels pleasurable to her, so she wants to have it. She has to have it. Just like a drug or alcohol addict.
Great as always =3
MOARR!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Never. You cannot speed up the creative process, no matter how many angry Fluttershies you throw at me.
Joking aside, just put the next chapter up.
I love this series because HOT DAMN is it hilariously sexy XD
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"Hilariously sexy"?
Hilariously sexy?
I'm not offended, I'm just confused on what that means.
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I may have worded that poorly 
How about; "This story is hilarious and sexy"
Good to see that you took my advice, at least you managed to mention that Fleur wasn't just breast feeding, but also penetrated by the tentacles of the blob, as soon as she was horny enough.
Which makes much more sense.
5074976 I have yet to read the story but Im thumbs uping this comment just because of how weird its sounds without context.
New chapter!
YESH!
... "How- How'd she do that?" (Stan, American Dad)
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My bad. I'll change it.
Though I'd appreciate you not quoting western animated drivel such as that on my stories.
I have almost no idea what's going on. Are a bunch of villains just showing up planning on getting sex-revenge all at once?
Now this was a great comeback chapter! Glad to see you went with my idea for the Dazzlings!
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I have read everything in this series.
Just wanted to say that I love your work. Though are there any other femdom breastfeeding stories that you've done? Also next time when the victim is forced to swallow will you please go into more detail about the aggressors nipple?
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Uh ... well, there's this story's prequels ... With Honeyed Claws has a little bit of breastfeeding ... hmm. I want to say I have more, but none come to mind.
As to your request ... I have ... particular and peculiar boundaries about what I will and will not write about, but I'll think about it.
hmm Dark this was a very nice read, a great one. I have to admit the whole bee transformation was very surprising and arousing I honestly had to take a break from reading several times so pardon my lateness for the review. This chapter made me very giddy, the sex scenes though brief if not skimmed over, left a lot to my imagination. I haven't really found Cadence appealing until this chapter, impulsive and frighting boarding on sadistic is a lot to my liking, now only if there be a few ice cocoons. *laughs* A thrill to see Celestia again the true one not the impostor however I'd careless if the other was nothing but a lustful impostor i would be very will to submit upon seeing that magnificent rack. Alas I was looking forward to Rarity regaining her power and striking back against Chyslis and Sunset but a fleet dream. I would have thought with all the events that were transpiring I would have assumed she would have relapsed back to her old ways. Perhaps I'm feeling nostalgic warring with my affections of the changeling queen with my love for Rarity. I am in a state of civil war and its thanks to you. ^^
I have to say that Rarity should be the last person in the Posion universe to point accouse those of being adulterous if my memory serves correct wasn't it not she who on a milk induced power trip to suggest they become swingers. with a past as checkered as that she shouldn't be quick to point fingers at people.
it was long but the problem was it felt somewhat rushed towards the end. quick switching of viewpoints and the humor could use some work. and I spotted spelling errors.
I understand, your discomfort, the word nipple can't help but cause me to laugh like a snotty fifth grader, the sound does break the flow of the story. I usually see Writers usually avoid the word or use something different. I even used the bookish term because the word makes me that embarrassed.
Oh and Flash Sentry I don't like your passive swagger >.>
Really great reads, all the chapters and parts. Can't wait to read the rest of it.
So what kinda transformation is about?
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Sunset Shimmer and Twilight Sparkle get turned into bee-women. Though now that I think about it, perhaps that's not "transformation" in the way most people usually think of when they see on a clop fic ...
7425466 yeah so what a real transformation?
There was so much stuffed into this chapter, a bit of tieing up loose ends well almost you never said what happened to Chysails and Flash Sentry are they still in the closet? I think I missed that part. Rarity has changed since the being of the white poison series from a confident succubus tempress to a scared mad women filled with regret and trying to redeem herself. I do miss her slime abilities though hot and steaming as they were.
Rarity's thoughts of forming a self help group was a good idea but that could also back fire seeing how people would be less willing to seek the help of a person who started this whole thing and even if it was Flur who had done the attacks people will think Rarity had a hand in it somehow.
Poor Sweetie Belle you had so much promise a prefect B story to Rarity's A yet you remain in a lesser role I would have been much interested in the Sweetie, Scootaloo, Diamond Taria love triangle.
Aww Spike, Rarity, Rainbow threesome ^^ awesome tease
This chapter was long and well written though the characters grind my gears. What the hell Hershy and Shining Rarity got forgiven and you two are acting like Lex Luthor in your witch hunt. It shows that nothing really has changed in 10 years except Sweetie Belle chest size >.> Yes the character Development is lacking Shining hasn't out grown his bias, and Sweetie, Diamomd and Scootaloo are still being treated like children. Sweetie should be the last one to have her eyes shielded from Rarity and Rainbow's love making because she understands what Rarity is going though
I enjoyed the chapter,
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Define 'real' - actually, you know what, no, you can just go read the story and reach your own conclusion.
I like this chapter you haven't lost your descriptive touch, glad you are tying up loose ends. Though the pacing is the big issue it feels choppy.
Sweetie Belle at this point could just get her own story because this is a Rarity story and Sweetie Belle's focused parts can be removed without affecting the story at all. Sliver Lens has outlived her purpose it seems once a driving element now a nagging fly in the ear. Same for Shining and Hershing I was once rooting for them but now they crossed over to Lex Luthor paranoia you never want to go there.
I have to say for a queen with a hive of changlings at her beck and call Chysalis doesn't seem to use them as much as she should. In the fact villains are dropping the idiot ball so often that I'm surprised that I am surprised I figure this out just now, maybe the side effects of the powder cause one to experience a arousing high hence why they are so laughable incompetent. But I did find myself laughing at their attempts.
Sunset bee form will be missed,
Sonata was with Spike in one scene and then is at Rarity's house in another, I'm guessing we are just going to have to imagine what happen to that sandwich huh :( I can imagine what happens so I'm fine but it still feels a little bad to skip love scenes in an erotic story,
Oh I was not excepting that erotic surprise Darktry clever though gross to most I'm among the few that actually found that scene with humor and arousal. ^^
So I enjoyed it, there are some grammar mistakes, pacing issues and redundancy,
I praise the descriptions though the dialogue is long winded I'll let it pass since this is a Rarity story its like her to over dramatize something.
Rarity still best ^^
Don't you mean cider lactation potion?
YES! YES! YES PLEASE! Mwuahahahaha...
NO! PLEASE finish what you started! Damn it!
Here I was hoping i could read finally some lactation clopscene in your story again after so much time without it.
In my opinion before this part happened you didn't need the Horror Tag in this story.
I have a few questions:
I would like to know, does Raritys slime girls do something in the next chapter? Until now they were doing not much other than looking for Sweetie Belle. I need only a yes or no. ( Because if it is a yes than i want to read it in your next Chapter)
Will you ever write "What if..." Chapters or Storys to this one or A Poison Most Intimate? I found already two on Fanfiction.net
Would you be okay with it, if someone would write "What if..." or AU Versions from your Storys? After they ask you of course.
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Yes, Yes I did.
Thank you for pointing that out.
I have noticed there has been less focus on sex as the story grows closer to its ending.
I'd like to think it qualifies for psychological horror. Perhaps "Drama" would be a better tag, maybe? I 'unno.
They do something ... but it's probably not what you're hoping for.
No. The remaining ideas I had for "A Poison Most Intimate What-If's" were adjusted and put into Last Glass of Poison, namely Twilight having a dream about nursing Celestia and Sunset Shimmer as a honey-leaking beewoman. And the one I had for a Last Glass of Poison what if, I decided wasn't really worth the effort.
I would be flattered, but only if you would actually write it. Regardless, I maintain an open policy of "it's okay for other people to write stories based on mine, or using elements from mine (Like the Pipe Slime or Silver Lens) as long as they credit me and source the elements back to me." Ex, a story using the Pipe Slime written by someone else is fine, as long as they put in "Pipe Slime originally from Darkryt Orbinautz's Poison series" or something similar at the end of the description or Author's Notes.
I can't believe it's over, but I got the ending I wanted. No matter how much I want to see more I know that this is it, thank you for this story, I loved every second reading it
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Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.
As a certain reviewer likes to say, the ending is paramount, a sentiment I agree with wholeheartedly, so it's good to hear it was liked.
7500029 I really want to read Raritys book now...unless this IS Raritys book! :O
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*gasp!*
Yeah, sure, let's go with that.
The air rushing past the falling book could easily extinguish the fire and keep the book intact.
All's well that ends well.