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Aura Zero


Main Bio on profile. Favorite pony is Applejack, however, Fluttershy will always have my heart. Spike is best character to me. I'm a gamer, writer, and love to read. Photo by Joakaha from DeviantArt

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Have you ever watched one of the episodes of MLP and started wondering, "I wonder what Spike is doing right now?" well the answer to that question will be satiated here.

Join Spike as he goes through many of his own adventures whenever the mane 6 are on their own or when he is merely helping others while not on screen.

There will also be noticeable changes on canon episodes but it wont change how Spike's character is. Mostly adjusted scenes and/or different wording.

Lastly, episodes where Spike is the main focus, or is mostly presented will either be shortened or will have most skipped.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 77 )

This looks good so far, a bit sad at how the other girls bond with Spike seeing how he is ignored in series.

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Wait are you talking about how the bond with him in this story, or in the show?:derpyderp2:

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........:facehoof: that doesn't answer my question....

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Forgive me, I couldn't resist a chance to do the Mathematician Answer.

I mean that here in your story everypony seems to be bonding rather fast with the lil guy, however in the series as it goes on Spike is being more and more forgotten about. He isn't invited to Twi's birthday party, Twi has referenced Shining Armor as her only friend in Canterlot, Spike got left out of Twi's "I love you" speech at the end of Season three even thou he was right there and wasn't even invited to meet Pinkie's sister.

Reason I love fics like this, the dragon can get some love!

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Well that is mostly the reason that i only go to FImfiction for the love Spike deserves rather than the story. In the new season, they've all but erased Spike from the story. Im not completely giving up on this but it isnt something i will hold my breath over either. Its up to us to show the awesomeness of Spike to the world! :moustache:

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Indeed have you read The Descendant's work?

Very good, my friend. Liking this series so far. Really liked the bit about Spike making Luna feel better. Keep on "Spiking" it! (Oh Celestia, that was lame...)

not the speech I would've given, but it does shine Spike in a light I love to see him in (a light that shines very rarely in cannon)

I love it when Spike finally gets appreciated :pinkiesmile:

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Thanks! And dont worry, Ill make sure to turn the heat up a bit XD (Cornier than yours :moustache:)

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Well since Cannon cant deliver, its up to the Spike fans to give him the recognition he deserves.

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Same here! that's why i'm writing this. Everypony needs to know and recognize how awesome Spike truly is.

4169181
Sorry I've only watched season 4, who's Spike? :derpytongue2:


But yeah, totally agree, I love coming here and seeing Spike more developed (and frankly respected) than he is in the show. I look forward to your future stuffs!

Next Up will be episode 3: Ticket Master, or for Spike's Story, A Dragon's Ticket.

:rainbowhuh:i wonder how you'll make that chapter given the episode.

I like the story so far, keep it up:moustache:

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well there will be a few alterations, But i'll keep with the overall of the canon version. It's already halfway done and will probably be posted in a day or two max. I like to put holes in the middle to make more of the story. You'll see when you get the update :moustache:

A story where Spike is appreciated? I'm sold:pinkiesmile: I look forward to more chapters.

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glad to meet another fellow Spike fan. I'll be sure to give Spike his dues. :moustache:

I understand the changes you made, it's hard to write these kinds of things as cannon as possible... especially with a show that isn't exactly accurate with itself:

S1E1: "I came from a cute little purple-and-green egg"
S1E23 Spike's egg is shown as lavender with purple spots

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Yeah. I can think of a few contradicting scenes in the show. So, for sense-making purposes, I will adjust the canon stories. Oh, was the chapter to your liking?

4236456 yep, I did like it, though I was hoping for something a little bit more motherly from Celestia to Spike... maybe something like she misplaced his personal letter&invitation and hopes he didn't mind getting one like Twi and her friends'

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Ya know, I was thinking about that when i was reading over it. I was thinking it would have been good if I added a little more for Celestia's part, however, that will be addressed on a later chapter that I have planned for that slight screw up.

4236550 though it's not really that late to change it... I mean, I think I'm the only fan to read it so far... just something really quick like he only said that but read that Celestia was sorry for that

4236556
Well I added a little extra to show an idea of what i had planned for a specific episode. Check it out and tell me what you think.

4236586 ah... planning ahead for what he's doing away from the sleepover... nice

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How did you.... Nvm. Maybe it was more obvious than i thought...

4236606 I mean, what other time was he in canterlot other than at the gala? (and even then he didn't get to see Celestia until after it)

4236643
True, but i might plan for him to go another time too, in an episode he isn't in.

4236678 very true, but it could easily be assumed that he's simply slaved with the chores of cleaning the library and/or Twilight's study messes (if not helping others like AJ on the farm, even if that contradicts that other, self-contradicting, episode... unless he was testing how bad a "helper" he can be before she cracks or talks to him about it)

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Oh, Trust. That episode will be one of Spike's episodes that will be completely altered. Spike at your service was a Mockery of Spike's talents and will be fixed by me. It will be Spoken in the Authors note, which will be placed before the story on that chapter.

4236728 I certainly hope so... and I can't wait to read it (and now that I'm thinking about it, I'm wondering how you're going to change the absence of Spike in the Equestrian Games stuff (like when he was pet-sitting or ANYTHING ELSE dealing with the Empire he's credited saving... but I can wait for excellent story that shines a positive light on my favorite character)

Nicely done! I love how all the chapters in this story are still in sync with the timeline of the episodes. I feel as if these really happened on the side during the show.

Really good chapter! Can't wait for the next one!

Whoa. I think...yeah...THIS is head-canon for me.

Comment posted by Aura Zero deleted Oct 12th, 2014

....... did someone just dislike my story for no reason? Wow....

.....ok I just received 5 dislikes, but no comments were made... If possible, can you please tell me why you disliked the story. Im trying to become better and just disliking a story doesnt really tell me anything...

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Asking why probably isn't going to help, as they probably aren't paying attention. Some folks just downvote based on characters, I've seen some stories get downvotes before anyone could have possibly read it.

Fact of the matter is, some folks just don't like, or down-right hate, Spike and will down-vote stories just because he's the main character, just as some folks do with other characters.

Otherwise, I have enjoyed this story and look forward to more

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well I thank you for your comment and am glad that you like my story.:twilightsmile:

I mainly posted in hopes some would tell me their reasoning, however, I realized some don't and now, I couldn't care less.:twilightsmile:

Please write some more.

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Yes he is. :moustache:
There will be more of this soon enough.:twilightsmile:

I hope to see more cause THIS IS AWESOME!!!!!

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Ill make sure not to disappoint.:pinkiesmile::ajsmug:

"Oh my stars, darling! Whatever happened to your chauffeur?"

It's coiffure, french for hair.... Read the transcripts, they help...a lot...

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