In Her Majesty's Sedimentary Service

Most ponies consider Maud Pie to be little more than a ~~slightly~~ extremely boring rock farmer. Little do they know that she's the most capable agent in the Equestrian Secret Intelligence Service. Hot on the trail of a dangerous nationalist movement, she now has to stop the Princess-napping attempt of the century!

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nemryn

nemryn #1 · Mar 21st, 2014 · 1 · ·

She left the premises, hid inside a small pile of rocks that had been placed there for that very purpose, and waited.

Inthretis

Inthretis #2 · Mar 21st, 2014 · · ·

Well, that was an odd story. That was 20% footnotes. That's probably a record.

meerkat8472

meerkat8472 #3 · Mar 21st, 2014 · 2 · ·

“Vodka martini,” she said. “On the rocks.”

I completely lost it here, it's like James Bond, only Maud-ed.

keulan742

keulan742 #4 · Mar 21st, 2014 · · ·

The footnotes were at least as funny as the rest of the story, if not more so. img1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20101214224745/creepypasta/images/9/91/BRILLIANT.jpg

Magic Man

Magic Man #5 · Mar 21st, 2014 · · ·

Not bad at all, though it does strike me as odd how the NF seriously thought they'd be able to capture and detain an Alicorn Princess who could simply melt their faces off. Still, just shows what a bunch of twats they are.

Funny, I have my own 'Equestrian National Front', a far-right nationalist organisation in my story Citizen Weevil, who are opposed to all non-pony immigration, especially from the Changeling Kingdom (surprised they weren't mentioned here since they're pretty much the equivalent of the 'Evil Empire' in Equestria).

Also, Maud was awesome. I think that goes without saying.

nemryn