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EurekaStorm
My name is Eureka and I'm a young unicorn mare from Vanhoover. (The town of Vanhoover, not to be confused with Vanhoover B.C.) My cutie mark is a key and I'm very talented at figuring things out.
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Can't wait for more chapters! :3
She got bucked pretty hard at flutters I presume?
~OreoKookie
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We shall see!
Next Chapter: "It was worth a try at Fluttershy's".
Working on it now!
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Wow, that was the quickest reply I've ever gotten... thanks for the info though! Can't wait!
~OreoKookie
Moar >:U
Poor Twilight. She's going to feel so rejected when she realizes Rainbow isn't coming back.
At least Fluttershy isn't expecting her back anytime soon, but Twilight... Poor thing.
Good sir I'm going to have to ask you to please remove yourself from the outside world and finish this story.
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Actually, I'm a MISS, but that's okay.
I feel very flattered
Thank you! And new chapter is up!
How will Princess Luna react to Dashie??
WHO WILL SHE FACE NEXT CHAPTER?!
I feel like the way for the curse to be broken is for Rainbow Dash to make everypony that falls in love with her orgasm, prevent them from seeing her again afterwards (blindfold) and Dream Sex don't count.... but that would just be the "usual" way for most fic writers anyways...
YAY Luna will help!.....Oh......never mind owx
Ok so... yeah I was reading this in public. Yeah not one of my best ideas since I laughed so hard I nearly wet myself. Now everyone thinks I'm crazy. Also love your story. Keep up the good work sir- I mean Madame.
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Gender doesn't exist on the internet
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Sorry, I wasn't at all trying to be rude about it!
I was actually rather flattered.
Also, I don't know too many females that travel into this level of sexual story telling, so I just wanted to mention it.
And, to everyone else, thanks for reading, liking, and favoriting!! I appreciate it!
And for anyone who is waiting for RD to get with a REAL stallion, wait no more! Next chapter, Rainbow Dash diverges from her mare friends into a stallion's hooves!
But, WHO could it be??
I have only this to say: it's very good, but slow down, man!
Make us wait for your updates, for at least a few days first. You're kinda rushing in with chapter after chapter. Make it a habit to update every two days or so, till it's finished.
That's all I have to say on such a matter.
Hmm, I'm pretty sure Rarity can't teleport, I could be wrong though.
Wat.
4008940 Hmm, you could be right about that.
I assumed she could, being a unicorn,
and she did use her magic to put together a stage for the fashion show when Hoity Toity came back a second time.
And, I believe I read somewhere that all unicorns can telepot, but only ones that are really good at magic don't need to recover and recharge after doing so.
4008972 I had always thought that it was a high level spell, seeing as we've only seen Twilight and the Princesses teleport.
4009126 Well, now's a good time to do some research! I'll see what I can find.
Although, if I'm wrong, I'll have to change this whole chapter. Just running off will not work...
Or, I could just say in THIS universe, Rarity can teleport.
(But I'm still gunna check anyway.)
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Okay, so I read that all unicorns can WINK, which is different from teleporting, as winking is just traveling a SHORT distance, where unicorns like Twilight can teleport basically anywhere.
So, let's just pretend Rainbow Dash lives close enough to Carousel Boutique that Rarity was able to wink there.
4009189 I had assumed Winking was the old term for teleporting. Also I'm pretty sure Twilight has limits, the furthest I can remember her teleporting was when they were running away from the teenage dragons, and even that may only have been a few hundred metres.
4009467 Yeah, wink is a G1 term, but it's only very short distances.
And I think Twilight gets better as her magic gets better.
But, that is just what I read on a few forums.
It's all opinion, though,
so again, I'm just going to pretend Rarity can do it for my story.
I remember seeing a story kinda like this before, only it was everyone falling for Twilight.
Might I find as much humor in this?
I'll come back to it when I wake up more.
4009695 Really?
I'd like to read that one! Remember what it was called?
4009484 Yeah, why not go with it.
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Er..it's on hiatus, last I checked, but it hit feature box once I think.
It's called The Elements of...love?
It's teen so I can't link I think. Meh. there's a search bar.
It's not exactly like this, and it gets a little ridiculous a little fast, but it's okay
4009837 Thanks!
Well, tell me what you think of mine!
I knew the premise of the story had probably been done before, but I'm sure the actual plot is different.
This necklace sounds like a rejected SCP.
Either way, your story wasn't bad for it's genre. Coming from me, this is praise.
Interesting.
Poor Rainbow.
I'm guessing the whole "it won't be easy" is the instructions to take it off. In the case of the mare in the story I'm guessing it involved confessing to the pony she loved because it wasn't easy for her. If that is the case who does Rainbow confess to? Applejack? Soarin? Rarity?
Or worse, has she yet to discover her special pony?
Wow...these ponies sure do have some short cummings.(wink)...(wink)........(wink)
4012359 Yes, I did think about that, but I did not want to spend a long time going into great detail and make the entire story about just sex... even though it is a story in which she has sex...every chapter...with someone else...
Well, I want it to be at least slightly entertaining ontop of the sex.
Is it?
Also, just because I'm not describing every minute, doesn't mean it's all that short. Let's just pretend she's just getting humped for at least a few minutes in the time between I describe something new happening during it.
4012276 And I wouldn't mind including someone's OC, the only problem I see is people reading the story might not understand. Also, I'd need more of a character description if I'm going to write a character I'm unfamiliar with.
But perhaps I could write a side story or a mini chapter just for you
if you want, that is.
4012446 ...you got a deal!
Keep up the good work madam!
4012446 And yes it is also entertaining!Hilarious!!!!
4012467 Okay, If you can fit him in. He's black, red eyes (although sometimes they change color) a glacier colored mane, massive wings, a mowhawk. Very determined to protect the remaining members of his family, relies on trickery and strategy to win battles.
Poor Twily, rejected again.
I know Rainbow only said she'd do anything she wants if Twilight could get the necklace off, but Twily tried her best! I wouldn't be surprised if Twilight is quite upset now, probably rhinking that Rainbow doesn't love her, and that maybe nopony will ever love her, poor thing.
4013560 Actually, this is my favorite part of the chapter.
I think I'm going to make this a running gag with Twilight confronting Rainbow Dash about not holding up her end of the deal and then something goes wrong before Twilight can ... get what she came for.
Hehe.
Gosh, these characters would hate me if they saw what I was doing to them.
Especially Rainbow.
Especially Rainbow
4013617 Aww, poor Twilight, she actually helped Rainbow a bit. She deserves some love too.
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The problem, as I see it, isn't that the sex scenes aren't lengthy. That's just a symptom of the problem which is that they lack any real description or feeling. You don't have to throw in a lot of different acts just to lengthen the scene, but when all you get is a couple of quick descriptions with little to no feeling, emotion, or any sense of any type; it's like reading the cliff's notes to a really short porno.
A sex scene should have feeling, emotion, and be permeated by prolific description of all the senses, just like the act itself. By intentionally keeping your sex scenes to at most a paragraph or two, you're doing your own story a disservice, and you'd honestly be better off just removing the scenes entirely and replacing them with a scene shift to jump forward.
4014713 well I agree and disagree with you. Not all sex is passionate. A lot of the time there are no emotions involved at all, there is a big difference between love and sex. And yes all the ponies affected by the spell may "love" her but this is mainly told from Rainbow's point of view. She is not exactly thrilled about any of her partners yet, and your body can react and enjoy pleasure when you mentally are not. (it's not rape, it's called reluctant sex.)
But, you're right, I do need to put more detail into it. I was nervous at first about how people would react so even though it's a mature fic, I tried to Li it getting to in depth with the sex scenes, as it's not just a clop fic. I personally like a storyline with lightly detailed sex scenes. But now that I see everyone's positive reaction to it, I will make them more indepth.
Also just wait til she gets it on with the pony she truly wants, that'll be passionate as hell!
I've read a lot of similar stories to this premise, but different t. I like to think of mine as a somewhat maybe parody of this type of story, as instead of everyone just falling in love and spending the chapter trying to honest to goodness woo and date her, they jump right into physically showing their love!
But thanks for the criticism, I will keep it in mind for the next chapters.
typo
run-on. add a comma between highlighted words.
that is all. cheers
run-on. replace the commas with semi-colons.
run-on. add a comma between highlighted words.
this is not a compound sentence; remove the second comma.
run-on. either replace commas with semi-colon or period.
that is all. cheers
It'll be more appropriate to use a participial phrase here: "Living out here alone?"
also, watch out for run-ons in other parts of the chapter
that's all. cheers
4022664 Hey, thanks!
I need to edit these better.
When I read them again, a few days after I post, I keep noticing typos and errors I didn't mean to make. I think I get them all, but I always miss a few.
I appreciate you letting me know!
Cheers!
Dude, what. the. hell.
