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EurekaStorm


My name is Eureka and I'm a young unicorn mare from Vanhoover. (The town of Vanhoover, not to be confused with Vanhoover B.C.) My cutie mark is a key and I'm very talented at figuring things out.

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Rip n' Stitch, a notorious serial killer terrorizing America has just been caught by the FBI. However, when bringing him in, he slipped out of his cuffs and ran deep into the bureau. He tried to hide in a room that was supposed to be locked and fell through a portal that was supposed to be sealed.

Now a team of three has been assembled to go after the killer. This has happened twice before in the past and an alien world full of peace and happiness is in danger.
Eureka; a criminal profiler, Hawkeye; an FBI agent, and Vortex; an ex-marine must travel to this world incognito and stop Rip n' Stich before he harms any of the natives. They must blend in and apprehend him undetected.

But their biggest obstacle may be giving up their hands for hooves.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 9 )

This has a lot of potential.

I'm wondering if the two previous visitors happen to be characters we're already familiar with? Sombra?

Okay, this looks interesting.

Let's see what it's abo-

*Reads story*

Welp! I'm hooked!
See you next chapter!

5734307 She is!
But she was apart of the group that traveled to Equestria the last time something went through the portal. She had to change into a pony when she went in, like these characters will, and she loved it there. She's sad because she had to leave Equestria when the mission was over.

Star Burst was her code name.
Because they have to blend in, undetected, they act like they are just regular ponies from Equestria.
So the lady went in disguised as a pony named Star Burst.
But, as you will find out more, being there was such a wonderful experience that she has locked herself away back in the human world, wishing she could go back, which is why she keeps looking sad and zoning out when Eureka calls her by that name. :fluttercry:

Eureka and Hawkeye are just lucky enough that their nicknames on the job could also be Equestrian names. The ex-marine, "Vortex" was given that name because they can't use their real human names.

Sorry, if anything else is confusing, please let me know and I'll change it.
I wrote this whole story out in my head while I was riding the bus the other day, so when I got home I had to go back and try and remember all the things that needed to be said at which time.

But I hope you enjoyed it!
I'm working on chapter two now.

It's only going to be a few chapters, maybe 10-15, but it's already written for the most part.
Please share if you like it and let me know how I'm doing along the way!

<3:twilightsmile:

5735335 Yes, time moves differently there. She could've been there for months and been gone only hours in the human world. That's why I wrote it's been over a thousand years since they went there, even though it wash't that long ago in their world.

So things are going to be way different than they think!


And thank you!

Eeeeehhhh... So-so. Going to have to read more before deciding.

This is by far one of the most anticipated things ever (for me), besides Season 5. Can't wait for Chapter 2! :raritystarry:

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