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TacticalRainboom


I wrote some stories for you. I hope you enjoy them.

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Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash claim that they are packing for a trip to visit their parents in Cloudsdale. But who are their parents, and why have they never come to visit Ponyville?

When Rarity and Applejack discover the shocking truth about their pegasus friends, they decide to do everything that they can in order to help. Their search takes them on a journey that will teach them some unexpected pegasus lessons about love, commitment, and family.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 35 )

Hm, you should tag the characters

This has certainly grabbed my attention. Your interpretation of the way pegasi live is interesting and I'd like to see more. I love the attention you put into detail it was very refreshing.

Comment posted by The Yaoi Mistress deleted Apr 16th, 2014

Aah I must get more!!! This is sooooooo awesome!!! :rainbowkiss: Keep up the awesome job!!!

Oh my god I'm so nervoucited for the next chapter! :rainbowkiss:

No offense but....

WHEN IS MORE COMING!!!!! I AM DIEING HERE!!!!:flutterrage:

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It's actually already written! I wrote a blog post about this I promise it's not dead, the unpublished words are already more than the published words!

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4358964 so does that mean we'll hopefully get an update soon?

4359658 just did, well I know I have another awesome chapter to look forward to soon hopefully :twilightsmile:

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Oh geez.

Because I completely fucked everything up. It's fixed now.

4363012 Ah much more sense! Did you accidentally post the wrong chapter?

This is an awful idea that can only end in disaster and embarrassment for everypony involved. :facehoof:

Oh poor AJ :rainbowlaugh: another fabulous chapter can't wait for more :pinkiehappy:

AJ make be a silly pony, but she doesn't lack boldness.

Just found this story and can already see where it's going. Things can only end well at this point. :facehoof:

If I'm thinking right, there are some species of dragon that do something similar. Of course you usually find this behavior with insects or a few species of birds or possibly fish.

4395499 He's expecting an airborne love-fest, probably. Whole lotta cloudpounding, if you get what I'm saying.:ajsmug:

Or it could be something completely different, like pegasi are actually born from clouds. That would be interesting.:twilightsheepish:

Okay, so it looks like it's not anything super-sinister, just a chance for pegasi to cut loose and do pegasus stuff without having to restrict themselves to two dimensions for the sake of other ponies. The racism and the secrecy are a little worrying, though.

Welcome to "in over your head"-sville, population Rarity.

Yeah, I'd like to see more of this as well. Where are Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy at the moment?

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The next one's opening has been sitting and being stared at for quite some time now. It's going back into active production around now. I've had some time off for several reasons, and hopefully I'm ready now to move forward.

The next thing that comes out will be either this or a Frozen fanfic ^^;

Rarity and Applejack don't even seem to have considered that there might be legal penalties for infiltrating the Dance...

God damn it, you can't just leave me hanging here. I haven't been following for very long at all; is there a planned continuation?

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Yes(?)

My next chapter is in a weird place, but the show is off hiatus, so I might come off hiatus too.

Read my other bullshit :P

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I know that situation all too well. If it helps at all, I've absolutely loved the story so far.

Best of luck to you.

By Celestia's mane! Its been a minute since I have indulged in one of your crazy stories TRB! (and i feel somewhat ashamed as your stories are what launched me into this crazy realm of MLP fanfics!) Your tales never fail to dissapoint. Can't wait to see where this ends up next (though i may have a small inclination to where its going).

Bravo, I am anxiously waiting for next chapter.

If you are stuck, you may try to write chapter 7 instead.

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