• Published 3rd Feb 2014
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Our Love Blooms - LightningBass94



Spike spends the night with Applebloom

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Our Souls Blossom

"Thanks again for letting me stay here, Granny Smith," Spike gratefully commented once more. He was sitting at the Apple Family dining table with Granny Smith and Apple Bloom. Big Mac and Applejack were busy attending Trixie's show. Though, Trixie deemed him mature enough to attend as well, Spike had turned the offer down. He'd seen enough of her magic at home to last a lifetime. Beyond that, he needed a break from the horrible, awkwardly silent environment she and Twilight were creating around the library. Two weeks was too much!

Generally, his first choice to hang out was Button Mash, but he and Sweetie Belle were going on a date that night. That wiped both of those options completely off the table. Spike knew, without a doubt, that Love Tap would be "Chaperoning" said date.

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Love Tap stared at her son and his marefriend from across the dimly lit restaurant, watching like a hawk. She wore a poncho, a sombrero, and her husband's fake moustache. Her eyes narrowed and she spoke lowly in a foreign, gutteral tongue to herself, "He is not ready, She-devil..."

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Normally, Rarity wouldn't object to Spike hanging around Carousel Boutique with her all night, but she too was attending Trixie's show. Scootaloo lived in the orphanage, so that left one choice. "Oh it's no burden, Young'n. Yer no stranger 'round these parts." Granny Smith responded. She was finished with her dish, so she stood up and took it to the kitchen. She let it soak to be washed later. "Granny has to rest 'er ol' tired bones. Y'all play nice now, ya' hear?"

"Yes Granny!" They both responded, nearly on impulse. Spike grabbed both their empty plates and dropped them into the sink. Briefly, he took a moment to enjoy the simple feeling of freedom he felt when he didn't have to do the dishes. He spun on his heels and smiled warmly at Apple Bloom. She smiled back in kind.

"Wha'do ya wanna' do first?" She asked, just before he opened his mouth to ask the same question. The situation flipped on him, he had no idea.

With a shrug, he replied, "I dunno'. Anything's cool with me, I guess." As soon as the words left his lips, he remembered he was speaking to a member of the Cutie Mark Crusaders, and he immediately regretted the wording of his statement.

"How 'bout tag?" She asked. Spike gave a sigh of relief.

"Potential disaster diverted!" He high-fived himself internally. Outwardly, he just smiled at his filly friend and replied, "Yeah!" It came out more excitedly than he had anticipated. He ran past her and out the door, tagging her on the way. "You're it!" He called behind himself.

"Hey! No fair!" Apple Bloom responded, giggling as she ran after the purple dragon. In all honesty, she knew he didn't stand a chance against her natural earth-pony stamina. She was gaining on him fast.

Spike panicked. He could sense he was losing, and had to think of something fast! He spotted the barn and hatched a plan. He changed course, risking a bit of what little lead he had on the mare left, and made a bee line toward the open double-doors. Sprinting as fast as he could, he made it to the barn several seconds before Apple Bloom. She slowed to a walk as she entered the dark, suddenly cavernous, barn. "Oh, spike!" She called in a sing-song voice, "Where are you~?"

"Welcome to the thunder dome!" Spike shouted as his yellow adversary ventured deeper into the barn. Apple Bloom's head shot up. Somehow, Spike had made his way to the second level. He grabbed a rope in his purple claws and jumped, swinging from it and landing far behind her. He bolted out of the barn before she could even turn around.

With one brow raised, she smirked, "Smart cookie!" She bolted after him, galloping through the orchard as fast as she could. Spike was getting tired. She could see it in the way he ran. Far ahead of her, he stopped and turned, admitting defeat. That wasn't going to cut it. Slowing down, Apple Bloom stalked her prey. She crouched down, ready to pounce, and she did. She pushed Spike to the ground and toppled over on top of him, screaming, "You're it!!!" The pair of them laughed and hugged for a bit, but all went silent when Apple Bloom raised up onto her forelegs. She became immediately aware of the close proximity she was in with the strangely alluring dragon. She stared straight into his big, emerald eyes. She never knew how lost she could get in them. They seemed to glow in the coming darkness. Celestia had begun to lower the sun, and the sky was painted with an array of oranges and reds. The sun's final rays seemed to make his purple scales glisten.

"Uuumm, Apple Bloom?" Spike interrupted her thoughts, a small blush breaking through the scales on his face. "Think you could get off me now?" He asked sheepishly.

Apple Bloom's blush darkened and grew, threatening to blend with her hair. She jumped off of him immediately. "S-s-sorry," She stammered. "I-It's gettin' dark, w-we should go inside now." Spike nodded and they made their way back to the house.

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After much needed showers, the pair found themselves staring at the bed before them. "I-I only have one, s-so we're gonna' have ta share," Apple Bloom stuttered, all the awkwardness of their earlier situation racing back to the foreground of her mind.

"Y-yeah. That's c-c-cool." Spike stuttered back, refusing to make eye contact. He was beginning to understand what Twilight had been going through with Trixie. The way Apple Bloom had been looking at him in the orchard made him feel strange, like butterflies in his stomach. "It wouldn't be the f-first time we've...shared a bed." He gulped and took a leap of courage by climbing onto the bed first and claiming his side. Apple Bloom exhausted the candles and slowly slinked her way onto the bed. She kept her distance from the dragon for awhile, staring at his back. She sighed heavily.

After several minutes of strange silence, Spike felt a hoof wrap around his torso and a barrel squeeze against his back. Apple Bloom's hot breath tickled his ear as she whispered into it, "I had a good time today, Spike." She gave him a lingering kiss on the cheek that left his face burning like hot embers and nuzzled into the crook of his neck to sleep.

"Best. Sleepover. Ever."

Author's Note:

Thanks, Frankie2, for the comment which sparked this little idea. I hope you and all my other readers enjoy this. ^_^

Please leave comments. I'll feel empty inside if you don't. lol. I've never written Apple Bloom into a story before, so I'd really like to know if you all think I wrote her character well, or not.

Comments ( 59 )

D'AWWWWW! I love Spikebloom shipping! So adorable!

Instant fav! :moustache::heart::applecry:

I'm more towards the Spikebelle ship, but I will have to admit, really good job. Well written. Like and Fav! :eeyup:

Thank you everyone. I'm really glad you all liked it. :pinkiehappy:

This was short, sweet and cute. I definitely liked how you ended it as well. Most would want more but I honestly prefer this one to end like this.

9 out of 10 for Romance
8 out of 10 for Comedy
10 out of 10 for grammar
10 out of 10 for overall story.
A like your way! :moustache:

3893880 Only an 8/10 for comedy? :fluttershysad: Lol jk. Thanks for the compliments. :pinkiehappy: I think this story has gotten me my best reviews so far. :rainbowderp:

I love Spikebloom story's wish there where more.

But I have to wonder what happen at Sweetebells date?

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Sweetiebell date.
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Kids mom: I know what you are thanking you little devil child! Your not taking my baby colt away from me!

Random customer next to her: who are you talking too?

Kids mom: "Shhhhh can't you see I'm trying to find a way to save my baby colt from that she-devil over there!"

Random customer: waiter check please!

3894208 Lol. That very well may be another spin-off I do, but it may not be. I put another little hint of SweetieMash in Trixie's Return, which is what started this entire thing.

I wish these dislikers would comment too so I could get an idea of what I need to improve upon. :unsuresweetie:

3896288 I wouldn't worry too much about that. I heard that a lot of dislikes are from people who just don't like the pairing. They don't even read the story. Don't let it get you down, you dd a great job. :pinkiehappy:

3896288 Know the feels, bra. :ajsleepy:

spikebloom YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES

she ran after the purple dragon

Applebloom is chasing the purple dragon...
AJ YOUR SISTER IS DOING HEROIN! SHE EVEN THINKS WE ARE ALL PONIES!

3898414 Lol. I didn't catch my own drug reference? Shit! Good eye. :rainbowlaugh:

3898511 Thank you for the good story

3898579 Thank you for enjoying it. Lol. I hope you enjoy more of my stories as well. :twilightsmile:

Oh god… the DAWWWWWs….. *dies* :heart:

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D'aaaaaaw
*dies as well*
(Who will be the next victim?)

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*rubs hands together sinisterly* good, GOOD!

Spiek Shipz. Foe Reel Dough.

It was a neat story, but I just feel like the story ended right when it got interesting. A lot of people do this, and it sort of gets annoying after a while.

3902575 I honestly didn't want to venture into clop in this fic, just some harmless, sleepy cuddles.

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Actually, I was just thinking about how their relationship develops from this point, and what pitfalls they may or may not run into. :twilightblush:

3902789 Oh. I didn't really think about that because all but one of my stories so far have been in the same universe, so the other stories, from this point on, will have elements of their relationship. It might not be the most popular idea, but i was something different I wanted to do. Not all my stories will be like that, however.

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Oh... ok, thats pretty cool!
Now that I know that I'll go check out the other stories. :twilightblush:

3903053 Lol. Love Drunk is seperate. Trixie's Return is the beginning, and this story takes place during chapter 3 and 4 of Something About Her, the sequel to Trixie's Return. It's small now, but I have big plans for this universe. :pinkiehappy:

not bad my friend, not bad

I should be thanking you for the nice little story that clarify the situation.:twilightsmile:

3924782 No, really. Thank you. If you hadn't given me the idea, I probably never would have written this, and it's quickly become my most popular story :pinkiehappy::heart:

Cuteness at it's finest, everypony! Pay CLOSE attention!

Cute and fluffy and just the right amount of puppy love.:heart:

Comment posted by LightningBass94 deleted Mar 4th, 2014

Oh no...SPIKEBLOOM? :ajsleepy: :applecry: :twilightoops: :facehoof: :unsuresweetie: :trixieshiftleft: :rainbowwild:

4109893 Read it before you decide it sucks. :trixieshiftright::rainbowwild:

4110807 Good point, sorry. :fluttershyouch: I'm just not a big fan of Spike, that's all. Sorry. I will read it.

4110807 Okay, I read it and it wasn't bad. Very well written, I just don't like the plot idea. Sorry again, I should keep my rude comments to myself. :derpytongue2:

4110932 You were only a little rude in the first comment, and everything since has been pleasant. I'm perfectly happy that you were capable of enjoying my work, despite disliking the premise of the story and one of the main characters. Thank you.

Fuckin adorable! Glad you didn't have ruin the moment with sex or butt rape, clop is getting kind of old in my opinion.

4163680 Lol. Love isn't about sex, so why include it everywhere? :twilightsmile:

4163708 EXACTLY! I try not to add it in my stories ^^

4163716 I'm not good at clop, and sex has a presence in some of my stories, but not a large one. :eeyup:

4163727 Its fine if you enjoy clop, what I mean to say is it gets more attention than I think it deserves.

4163737 Ah, I see, well you're probably right about that. I didn't mean clop though. Typically my shipfics are kept at a teen rating, and sex is mentioned, and it may even happen, but it's not shown, and it's not something that happens too terribly often.

4163756 Ok, I see where your getting at. Well I'll stop spamming your comment section now, have a good day. :)

4163782 Lol. I don't mind, really. Take care. :twilightsmile:

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