• Published 2nd Feb 2014
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Heroes of Harmony - Honeytongue



Twilight and Spike go through the mirror and find themselves in the Kung Fu Panda universe.

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Chapter 3: Cookies and Crowns

When Twilight finally found her way to the Moon Gate, it felt as if she had once again stepped through another portal into a different world. The tranquil and beautiful atmosphere of Oogway Garden was replaced by the bustling activity of many animal citizens going about their daily lives. Most of the population seemed to contain ducks, geese, rabbits, pigs, goats and sheep. They all wore clothing and were walking around on two legs, though some were ridding on two-wheeled carts pulled by antelopes.

Twilight and Spike kept close to each other while making their way along the main road. An occasional glance at the Tonkinese cat and panda cub would be made from some of the animals they passed by. Despite the many sounds all around her, Twilight was able to pick up a faint, yet familiar, voice coming from a nearby side street.

"Oh, I'm-I'm so sorry-" The voice said with fear. "I didn't know!"

"Fluttershy?" Twilight murmured.

"Huh?" replied Spike.

Twilight motioned him to be silent and follow her, as she went towards the side street, trying to locate the voice.

"I-I just found it, and thought I should give it to her. I didn't know 'You' had dropped it!"

They turned around an alleyway corner, and saw two figures at the end of it. One was an elephant wearing a light yellow robe with cyan trimming, and a pink sash. She was trying to hide herself behind a pink parasol. The other appeared to be some type of big cat wearing a black cape and a red and golden hood.

"Well I did," said the hooded figure, whose back was towards Twilight's view, as she pointed at the elephant. "And I would've had it if You and your big nose hadn't scooped it up on me! You really shouldn't take things that don't belong to you."

Not making any eye contact, the elephant muttered softly. "It, it doesn't really belong to you either."

"Excuse Me?!!" The big cat snarled as she lunged closer to the elephant, pressing her against the wall, while brandishing a katar.

The elephant squeaked with terror at the sight of the bladed weapon only inches away from her throat. "N-nothing!" She quickly replied while slowly sliding down to the ground.

"That's what I thought!" the figure remarked.

Twilight's reaction instantly changed from shock to pure rage. The pupils in her eyes turned to thin slits, while her ears folded back and her whiskers pointed forwards. Spike also looked ready to do something.

"You're such a pathetic pachyderm." the figure continued. "It's no wonder your only friends are a bunch of parent-less children."

Finally hearing enough, Twilight emerged from around the corner, and stood in the middle of the alleyway entrance. Her shadow seemed to be towering over the two larger animals.

"How DARE you speak to her that way!" she yowled at the hooded figure.

The figure stopped and turned around towards Twilight. "What did you say?!" She growled lowly as she unsheathed the claws in her free hand.

Twilight began to walk towards the big cat as she growled back. "I said; 'How dare you speak to her that way'."

As the two cats got closer, Twilight could see more of the figure's frontal view. The reverse side of her cape was the same wavy red and golden pattern of her hood, resembling flames as she moved, and was held together by a jade brooch. She wore a sleeveless sky magenta shirt, with black trimming, and a flaming half-red-half-yellow sun. A studded black leather belt was wrapped around her waist, and a matching pair of wrist guards on her striped orange-tawny and rust-red arms. Her pants were bright orange, the lower part of her legs wrapped in light yellow cloth, and she had sandals similar to Twilight's.

Beneath the big cat's hood, her mint-green eyes reflected the morning sunlight, and large white teeth barred while growling. Twilight growled louder, as they kept slowly advancing towards each other. When the space between them was only a couple steps away, they finally stopped and stared at each other, for what seemed to last for eternity. Then the big cat stopped growling and gave a smug grin, as she flicked her tail at Twilight's nose.

"You obviously don't know who I am, do you?" The big cat asked while putting her katar away and pulling her hood back, revealing her face to have both features of a lioness and a tigress.

"No." Twilight rubbed her nose and replied. "And I could care less."

The ligress chuckled at this remark and bent down so her face met Twilight's.

"Well, you really should." she purred in amusement, then proceeded to get up and walk past Twilight. "I can talk to anyone, anyway I want."

Taking notice of a duck and a pig watching nearby, the ligress quickly moved right in front of them, and gave a threatening snarl. The pig and duck ran away screaming in panic as they tried to find a place to hide. When the on-lookers had disappeared, the ligress returned her attention on Twilight, giving the same smug expression from earlier.

"Because everyone here knows, that I can do anything I want, to anyone... who gets in my way." she growled those last five words slowly.

Twilight did not so much as flinch at this. "I've dealt with worse things than you."

"Really?" the ligress asked with mocking interest. "That's big talk for a wittle putty tat."

Suddenly a crow came flying down into the alley. It landed right beside the ligress, holding a scroll in one of its clawed feet.

"This better be important." the ligress said with annoyance for being interrupted.

The crow handed the scroll to her and replied. "Ma'am, if it wasn't, I wouldn't be here."

The ligress opened the scroll's seal with one of her claws, then proceeded to read it. This didn't last too long, as she quickly rolled it back up and returned it to the crow. There seemed to be a hint of urgency coming from her.

"Tell them I'm on my way!" She instructed. "And have all available re-enforcements sent over."

"Yes Ma'am." croaked the crow as it took off.
The ligress watched as the black bird disappeared from view, then turned towards Twilight once again.

"Consider yourself lucky that I have more pressing matters to deal with. But I Will be back looking for you to finish our little chat. So if I were you, I'd take this rare opportunity to leave as far away from this place as possible. I hear it's lovely in Mongolia this time of year." She grinned slyly after saying that last part.

With a sudden burst of speed and acrobatic skill, she leaped and climbed her way up towards the rooftop of a building facing the alley entrance.
"So until then, zaijian." she said while giving a wave-salute like gesture.

Before Twilight could figure out where she had seen that gesture before, the ligress was gone. A long silence filled the alley as she kept staring at the spot where the big cat had last been. The sound of movement from behind broke her trance, as she watched the elephant getting up.

"I can't believe you just did that!" she spoke with a mixture of shock and awe.

Twilight shrugged and replied. "I couldn't just stand there and watch!'

"Oh! Well, no- I mean- it's just that..." the elephant said as she began fidgeting with her parasol. Then she stopped, looked directly at Twilight and said sincerely. "No one's Ever stood up to Sunset Shimmer like That before."

"Sunset Shimmer?!" Twilight gasped in surprise, as she repeated the name and instinctively looked over her shoulder.

Her mind was now suddenly putting all the pieces together. The gesture, those colours, her voice, it all made sense now! Sunset Shimmer was the whole reason Twilight was here in the first place. The former student of Princess Celestia had used the portal to return to Equestria from this world, and stolen Twilight's crown! Except, in Equestria, Sunset Shimmer had been a unicorn, while in this world she was now a...

"You've heard of her?" the elephant asked.

"Sort of." Twilight admitted.

"I don't think I've ever seen you around here before." said the elephant as she briefly looked down at her feet.

Realizing neither one knew each others' name yet, Twilight meowed cheerfully. "I'm Twilight Sparkle by the way."

The elephant, whom Twilight had mentally referred to her as Elephant Fluttershy, glanced at Twilight for a moment before replying very softly. "I'm...I'm Feiwuni."

Twilight pricked her ears up as she moved a bit closer. "Sorry, what was that?"

"I'm Feiwuni." Said the elephant in that very soft tone again.

"Didn't really quite get that." Twilight meowed as she moved closer again.

"It's Feiwuni!" the elephant squeaked while using the pink parasol to hide her face.

Twilight took a few steps back to give Feiwuni some space. "You know, this is probably gonna sound crazy, but you remind me of someone I know."

The parasol came down slightly. Feiwuni looked at Twilight, then towards the alley entrance, where Spike had just appeared from his hiding place. Her expression instantly changed from timid to ecstatic.

"Oh My Goodness!" she squealed with glee as she rushed towards Spike.

"Aaaaah!" Twilight screamed, just barely getting out of the way from the one-elephant stampede.

Spike quickly began to back up when Feiwuni stopped right in front of him.

"Who's This little guy?" She asked while kneeling down to have a closer look at the panda cub.

Twilight emerged from between two baskets and replied back. "That's Spike. He's...Uh..My little panda."

A sudden gasp of delight came from the elephant. "You mean, you adopted him?!" She asked while turning around to face Twilight.

"I guess you could say that." Twilight answered sheepishly.

"Oh, that is so amazing!" Feiwuni focused her attention back on Spike, beaming a large smile on her face, while petting him with her trunk. "I have never seen a baby panda this close before. He's Soooooo Cute."

"Well, well." Spike said smugly, in the same way he had done when Fluttershy had first met him. "Talk about deja vu."

"Oooh, and he talks too!" Feiwuni rummaged her trunk inside a bag she had been carrying, and pulled out a saucer-sized cookie. "Would you like an almond cookie?"

Spike's eyes appeared to bulge out while he stared at the cookie and licked his lips. "Yeeessss, Pleeeeeeeease."

"Such nice manners." Feiwuni cooed sweetly and gave the cookie to him. "Here you go."

"Wow. It's, it's a really Big cookie." Spike gazed at it for a moment, before eating it noisily. "Umm! Num-Nom-Num!"

Feiwuni sighed as she spoke to Twilight. "You must feel really lucky to have him."

"Oh yeah." Twilight purred in agreement. "I don't know what I'd do without him."

Twilight realized that now was the perfect moment to get some answers from Feiwuni. "Sunset Shimmer had mentioned earlier you had something that she claimed was hers. Something really important. It wasn't a crown by any chance was it?"

Feiwuni had been only half-listening to Twilight, while she was petting Spike and giving him more cookies. When the crown was mentioned, she stopped what she was doing entirely, and turned to Twilight in pure amazement.
"How did You know that?"

"Uh, lucky guess, hehe." Twilight quickly replied and then asked anxiously. "Do you still have it?"

"Bu." was all that Feiwuni replied as she shook her head.

Taking that as a 'no', Twilight felt disappointed at first. However, she pressed on. "But you do know what happened to it?"

"Shi." A nodding head came from the elephant this time. "Earlier this morning, I was outside Oogway Garden's Moon Gate giving out volunteer fliers for Yinghuo Orphanage, like I do every Wednesday. But, like almost every other Wednesday, no one took any of my fliers. That of course made me upset and disappointed, since the orphanage really needs more volunteers, and I always couldn't seem to get anyone's attention.
I went to sit down behind one of the two stone Guardian lions, and started to cry, when something hard and metallic hit me on the head. After saying 'Ow' and rubbing my head, I looked around to see a strange little golden crown, with a purple star-shaped jewel, lying nearby. Picking it up with my trunk, I had a closer look at it. I don't know where it came from, but I knew it looked very important. So I went over to see Master Lian, and gave it to her for safe keeping."

"Master Lian?" Twilight repeated the name. "Is she like the ruler around here?"

"She's the Land of Harmony's senior Kung Fu master," Feiwuni answered. "Along with her sister, Master Ming-Yue, if that's what you mean."

"Where can I find her?" Twilight asked.

"At the Palace of Blooming Lotus." the elephant replied as she got up.

"Well that's good to know," Spike remarked, while rubbing cookie crumbs off his face. "We were just heading there anyways."

"Thanks." Twilight said to Feiwuni, as she and Spike started heading down the side-street.

"You're welcome.' Feiwuni called back to them. "Oh, Wait!"

Twilight and Spike stopped and looked back at Feiwuni.
"Yes?" They both asked at the same time.

"Umm," Feiwuni began, as she twirled her parasol nervously. "If it's alright with you- I mean- when you're done seeing Master Lian that is...Would you like to have lunch with me later? Unless of course, you have other plans, which is also fine, "

"I'm sure we can arrange that." Twilight mewed cheerfully.

"Oh, really? Yay!" Feiwuni started clapping her large round flat forelegs together, just like how a pony would have done. "I wanted to thank you for what you did back there. Does lunch at Jade Hare noodle-shop sound good to you?"

"Okay." Twilight replied, then started to head towards the main road. Then she realized she didn't know where Jade Hare noodle-shop was. So she stopped, and turned back to ask Feiwuni the directions. Before she could ask, Feiwuni started giving them to her.

"It's the last building on your right, towards the Palace, before you reach the bridge. It will also be the building with the most decorations for the Autumn Moon Festival. You can't miss it."

"Thanks." Twilight said.

Just then, the distant sound of a bell could be heard.

"Oh my goodness! I forgot," Feiwuni gasped in realization. "I'm late! The children are probably starting to worry about me or something."

Spike and Twilight moved aside to allow Feiwuni to pass through.

"See you around the Hour of the Horse." she added before she went down the main road in the direction Twilight and Spike had come from.

The two of them watched as the crowd immediately began to part away, for the on-coming elephant with the yellow robe and pink parasol.

"Excuse me! Sorry! Thank you! Pardon me! Sorry!" Feiwuni kept saying, until she finally turned along a side street, and was out of sight.

"Well that certainly was interesting." Twilight noted, as she and Spike proceeded to continue their journey towards the Palace of Blooming Lotus.

Author's Note:

So, we finally have our newest chapter up. Yes, Sunset Shimmer is basically a Liger in this world [*braces for in-coming 'Napaleon Dynamite' reference jokes*], and Fluttershy is an elephant [bet no one saw that coming, but makes sense when you think about it].
Hopefully Chapter 4 won't take as long to make, and of course I still have yet to make a chapter with the P.O.V of Po and the other KFP characters.

Comments ( 184 )

Really loving the story so far, keep up the good work! :twilightsmile:

3921984
Thanks, and I will. :ajsmug:

GOOD JOB Honeytongue, Awesome Job, Oh and By the way here is a List Of My Favorite Kung Fu Panda and MLP: FIM Characters:

Kung Fu Panda Characters:
1.) Master Tigress The Tiger
2.) Po The Panda

My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic:
01.) Twilight Sparkle/Princess Twilight Sparkle
02.) Pinkie Pie (Pinkamena Diane Pie)
03.) Rainbow Dash
04.) Princess Luna
05.) Shenanigans (Who's just like Pinkie Pie, Created By: Xain-Russell, Fanmade)
06.) Aqua Jet (Who's just like Applejack and Rainbow Dash, Created By: Xain-Russell, Fanmade)
07.) Big Macintosh (Big Mac)
08.) Princess Molestia (Princess Celestia, Basically her Darkside or her Sexuel Side/Twin, Fanmade)
09.) Lyra Heartstrings
10.) Trixie Lulamoon
11.) Shining Armor
12.) Flash Sentry
13.) Queen Chrysalis

Sorry If you see never seen before names, there Fanmade, so Ignore them.
Thank you, if you liked it. :twilightsmile: :pinkiehappy: :rainbowdetermined2:

3922036
Thank you so very much.:pinkiehappy:
And that's a very interesting list.:moustache:

3922036
Actually, Shenanigans and Aqua Jet were created by The Fiery Joker (Joshscorcher) in his story: Recasted, where they do serve as Pinkie's and Applejack's replacements. What Xain did with the characters was to draw them so that they didn't look like your regular OC pictures.


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You are gonna hate me for this, but I have to point out something that can't be ignored. There's something about your narration style that just isn't right; I can't really put my finger on it, but let's take for example Feiwuni's (is that chinese?) flashback:

Earlier this morning, I was outside Oogway Garden's Moon Gate giving out volunteer fliers for Yinghuo Orphanage, like I do every Wednesday. But, like almost every other Wednesday, no one took any of my fliers. That of course made me 1) upset and disappointed, since the orphanage really needs more volunteers, 2)and I always couldn't seem to get anyone's attention.
I went to sit down behind one of the two stone 3) Guardian lions, and started to cry, when something hard 4) and metallic hit me on the head. 5) After saying 'Ow' and rubbing my head, I looked around to see a strange little golden crown, with a purple star-shaped jewel, lying nearby. 6) Picking it up with my trunk, I had a closer look at it. I don't know where it came from, 7) but I knew it looked very important. So I went over to see Master Lian, and gave it to her for safe keeping.

1) You don't need to add two adjectives, specially if the two mean nearly the same.
2) In the previous sentence is already stated that she can't seem to get any attention, no need to re-state it.
3) Isn't the portal to Equestria behind the turtle-shaped rock?
4) There's no way she could know of what the crown was made after touching it for half a second... with her head.
5) This description isn't needed since that's the normal reaction after being clobbered in the head.
6) You could reduce this sentence by saying "I picked it up to have a closer look. Keep in mind that this her retelling of what happened, so it is in the past tense, no need for so many descriptions.
7) "I knew"? I don't think she would be that certain for something she just find and had never seen before. Either drop it or change 'knew' for 'guessed' or 'though'.

I'm really sorry for doing this, but I can't just keep quiet. Also, I don't think cats in the KF-Verse would meow so frequently and Wouldn't elephants have stubby fingers like the rhinos?

I will stop before I get a little farther. My best advice: look for an editor to help you with the narration; Here's a group that could help you with that: Overly Extensive Editors. Just follow the submission directions and they will help you find an editor for your story.

Good luck, and sorry

3924844 Yeah, thats basically who I ment, and yes he (The Fiery Joker [Joshscorcher]) has a DeviantART accout and so do I. :facehoof: :rainbowderp:


3922861 Your Welcome! :twilightsmile: :pinkiesmile:

3924844
Hmmm....You certainly have given me quite a lot to look and mull through. I'll see what I can do about most of what you pointed out. Except #3. I was going to have Spike and Twilight discuss that in the next chapter [unless you think it should be placed on this one].
Thanks, I will go see if I can get an editor [I've already realized I probably need one].
Also about cats meow, I just wanted to put in something besides "Twilight said" or Twilight replied".
Hmmm, I guess you're right about the elephant 'hand' thing.
And yes, Feiwuni is Chinese, for Fluttershy. Fei-Wu [ the characters for 'Fly' + 'Dance'] means 'Flutter' or 'Dance in the Breeze', and Ni for 'Shy'.

3926997
If #3 was intentional as to create a plot point, then by all means leave it like that. :eeyup:

Feiwuni's name had me confused because I read it with english pronuntuationt rather than Chinese. I'm all about Gratitious use of foreign languages, but I'm not familiar with most of the words lol. How about putting it as Fei-Wu Ni? (sorry. I'll stop telling you what to do right now :twilightsheepish:)

And beside the editor advise, the rest was just nitpicking :derpytongue2:. The meows and purrs are just weird for me, but I guess it's okay, and having elephants use their trunks opens a lot of possibilities for action scenes (assuming she'll be in any :rainbowlaugh:), so I though having the trunk and both hands would be even better :rainbowdetermined2:.

Anyway, glad you agreed to most of my observations, and I'm terribly sorry for being such a pain in the b:yay:t. I know people don't like being told their... lets call them [insert noun here].

3927584
Thanks. Hopefully it will make more sense for you later.:pinkiesmile:
Lol. I guess you raise a good point about Feiwuni/ Fei-Wu Ni [hmm...gonna have to think this over. Same with the names for some of the other characters too].

Okay, thanks. I looked at the group you suggested. Seems like I would need to put this story on a Google Document thingy, plus they keep saying they're under-staffed and over-worked. But I'll give them a try. If not, I'll go find another Editing group on here.
Yeah, trunks and 'hands' [if we can really call them that] would be better. But I'm sure an Anthropomorphic elephant would more than likely use its trunk most of the time. Kinda like how unicorns [except Lyra:rainbowlaugh:, lol] on the show tend to use 'horn magic' for picking/grabbing/holding/etc.

Iron Will: "Don't be sorry! Be Assertive! Never apologize, when you can [*creatively*] criticize.":rainbowdetermined2:

I always appreciate your in-depth responses/comments on here. It let's me know where I'm standing so far with the story/writing. :eeyup:

Wait. What kind of cat is Twilight? Clearly not a tiger or leopard.

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Well it looks like Hidden Scorpius XI has already answered your question for me [Thanks Scorpius btw]. So yeah, Twilight is a Tonkinese cat.:twilightsmile:

3973142
*sigh*
Yeah, I realize it now at this point too. :unsuresweetie:
I guess the reason I haven't been taking the time to establish the scenes and characters [as much as I should], is because I don't have enough time to write this fanfic more thoroughly (plus it's been a while since I wrote anything in story format). So that lack of time [and to an extant, attention span/creative drive] causes me to pressure myself when I do get the chance to write. And this is what the results are. :facehoof:

I think I will go over the chapters I have now, and fix what I can, before I continue any further with tis story. Finding a good editor [or two or three, plus a proof-reader] might also be a good idea too.

I am glad however that you are enjoying this so far.:twilightsmile:

Will Ke-Pa be appearing in this story?

3991280
Sorry, but Ke-Pa won't be appearing in this story. We already have a main villain (*Spoiler Alert*) who transforms into a demon later on, remember? But (hopefully) 80% more epic than what EqG gave us.

Hey Honeytongue, I've got some Idea for Heroes Of Harmony Ch.4, Here's one:

Twilight Sparkle: This must be the place, looks amazing in here then outside.

Spike: Yeah, looks more better inside too!

Twilight Sparkle: (Bumps into a male [any animal you Choose]) "Grunts, then rubs her head"

Male (Who sounds like Flash Sentry): Whoa, you okay? "Held hand out."

Twilight Sparkle: "Takes the hand, then nods." I'm fine.

Male: You should be careful, I almost knocked you down.

Twilight Sparkle: It's okay, I was too busy looking at the decorations of this place and it look amazing.

Male: Yeah, it's beautiful in here dosen't?

Spike: WAY beautiful.

Male: Hey, I didn't get your name didn't I, well let me introduce myself. My name is Lee Central (GoldenMare's Note: I Couldn't find any other Japanese name, so you can change yourself. :twilightsheepish:), What's your name?

Twilight Sparkle: I'm Twilight Sparkle. And this Baby Panda right here is Spike.

Spike: Nice to meet you, Sir.

Lee Central (Flash Sentry): Well nice to meet you both, Who are you two looking for?

Twilight Sparkle: We're looking for someone named Master Lian, do you know where she is?

Lee Central (Flash Sentry): Oh yeah, she's in that room over there.

Twilight Sparkle/Spike: Thank you.

Lee Central (Flash Sentry): Your welcome. Oh Twilight?!

Twilight Sparkle: Yes?

Lee Central (Flash Sentry): Did you herd that The Dragon Warrior and The Furious Five are coming here today?!

Twilight Sparkle: Um...who are they?

Lee Central (Flash Sentry): Oh shoot, I forgot, you two are new around here, right?

Twilight Sparkle: Yeah where new.

Spike: Think you can tells us?

Lee Central (Flash Sentry): I wishI could, but I'm too busy right now, you'll have to talk to Master Lian about them, anyway I'll see you two around. "Leaves the Palace"

Twilight Spakle: Hmmm....

Spike: What is it, Twilight?

Twilight Sparkle: I don't know why, but his voice sounds familiar to me, I mean, he sounds like that Pegasus Royal Guard Pony I saw when I was back at the Crystal Empire.

Spike: Hmm, Probably just a Coincidence.

Twilight Sparkle: Yeah.

You can find the way how to say Flash Sentry in Chinese, just so you know. :twilightsheepish:

3997983

Wow :pinkiegasp:, I appreciate your idea and everything (I really do, thanks:pinkiehappy:), but I've already got my own plans on what happens in Chapter 4. It might contain the part when Twilight meets Flash's alternate self, but if not, then maybe chapter 5 [depending how long I write chapter 4]. Also, someone else is going to inform Twilight and Spike about the Dragon Warrior and the Furious Five [care to give a guess?:duck:].
Japanese?:rainbowhuh:
While there is going to be a character who is Japanese of origin [won't say who], the majority of characters [from the KFP universe] are Chinese in this fanfic.

3998356 Oh okay, but thank anyway. :twilightsmile: It just that Flash Sentry is My Favorite Pony/Character and I want to see him in this MLP: FIM and KFP Crossover! :twilightsheepish: :pinkiesmile: :rainbowwild:

3998403
You're welcome. :twilightsmile:
Don't worry, Flash will be in this fanfic, but unlike EqG, I'm going to give him Something important to do (yet out of the way), and try to make him more interesting.
So, am I to assume you are a Flashlight [Twilight X Flash] fan?

3998520 Will not Exactly, but I do like both Twilight Sparkle (My Most Favorite Pony/Character) and Flash Sentry (My Favorite Pony/Character) to work together (Mainly when it comes to fights, not with eachother, but with the Villians) and with The Mane/Main Six (Pinkie Pie is My Favorite Pony/Character and Rainbow Dash Is My Favorite Pony/Character)! :twilightsmile: :pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2:

3998694
Oh, well good. Because there's going to be so much happening in this fanfic. So, there won't be any real room for a lot of romance [but there might be hints or moments]. Oh, did I ever ask if you are a TiPo [Tigress X Po] fan?

3998886
Okay. In that case, I think you 'might' enjoy this fanfic even more.

I am also thinking that if Twilight and Po do meet, Po will be the first to Actually know what Twilight & Spike really is because Sunset Shimmer is Taunting Twilight and he is the first to know that both Twilight and Spike aren't from the same world as he is, but in another Universe/Dimension/Alternate World which is Equestria and Twilight and Spike tells him not to tell anyone about who they really are (By using the Pinkie-Pie Promise) and he will try and not tell anyone/anybody about it Intell (or Until) she tells her new friends about it! :twilightsmile:

What do you think?! :twilightsmile: :pinkiehappy: :rainbowdetermined2:

4002198
Interesting. So how would Po know who/what Twilight and Spike really are?

While that does sound interesting, I probably won't be able to use it.

4003179 Well that suck for me because I atleast want One person in this Fanfic to know who she is and probably help her a bit. :facehoof: But if you do, I'll have to be somewhere where Po, Twilight & Spike (Po's first time, while Twilight and Spike second time.) meets Sunset Shimmer somewhere hidden, so think about it, even though you still won't sadly (Sucks for Me......Again. :facehoof:). :pinkiesmile:

4003245
Well let me explain a bit more [sorry, I was watching an awesome movie].
What I meant was that Po probably isn't going to be the one to know (although he is going to be given some clues) who they really are. But there is going to be someone else who will know [I think]. I'm not saying who, because this character is going to be really important in this fanfic [and I want it to be a surprise:pinkiehappy:].

Also, I'm not keeping Twi's true identity a secret [at least between Po, Shifu, the Furious Five, the Alternate-Mane Five, and the Celestial Sisters] for too long anyways. I just don't know if I want alternate-Pinkie to blurt it out with her 'just a hunch' bit or not.

4004007 Okay, I [Think I] Understand right now, sorry for bugging you about, just that I read other Main/Crossovers that atleast one person know who is who in it and kept it a secret from other. :twilightsheepish:

4007571
That's quite alright.:twilightsmile:
I enjoy reading your suggestions, and comments in general. Especially since I haven't posted anything in over 2 weeks. I kind of feel bad about leaving you out on an limb at this point. Yet at the same time, I think I need to do some re-writing on the current chapters [and find an editor], before I continue any further. Hopefully you understand that I just want to make it 20% better than it already is, because this fanfic could become epic if I do it right.

4008993 Cool! Then I'll [all of us] be Waiting! :rainbowdetermined2:

Oh, I just realized why you turned Spike into a Panda! Clever :raritywink:

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LOL.:rainbowlaugh:
Took long enough eh?:raritywink::trollestia::moustache:
There's more like that coming latter on.

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I hope so. Would that count as a "Our Dragons are Different" Trope? :pinkiehappy:

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I don't know. Maybe?
I never heard that before, nor what you're referencing to.

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It's a "trope", a narrative device used by writers in order to construct their story. See them as the eskeleton of a plot, that writers can arrange in any form. The "Our Dragons are Different" trope was forged due to the many cultures that have myths about dragons, but never agree on how they behave, if they can fly, breath fire or how do they look like. In storytelling, you can use this trope to create a creature different from conventional dragons and say "Look, there's a dragon"

If you're interested in more, check the TV-Tropes pages for My Little Pony: FiM and OurDragonsAreDifferent

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Okay, thanks.
So, again, maybe it would I guess. :pinkiehappy: Can't wait when him and Po finally meet.:rainbowkiss::yay::twilightsmile::moustache:

Okay I think I can guess rainbow's counterpart based on her personality and I'm going to say she's a eagle or hawk. Rarity I got no clue as with pinkie but applejack I'm guessing is a wolf.

4194375 also I agree with scorpious here on the trope I saw the reference. Anyway might I suggest a character to act as twilight's guide around china while they try to track shimmer as I know will happen? his name is linghun huhuo which is Chinese for soul foxfire. He's you guessed it a fox. A three tailed fox. He's the oldest orphan in flutters' orphanage at sixteen and is considered her son. Guess you can say he's like po and his dad in terms of the bond he has. What might as well make the numbers even for the group. We have seven from the mlp in this story and six from kfp that would be uneven in terms of the members. Yes he's a kitsune but he was raised in china. His tails made him an outcast like po. He takes mostly after fluttershy's counterpart in personality except his prankster side from his genetics. His kung-fu is fox style obviously. It relies on speed and timing with cunning. It allows him to use his momentum as strength/power. Basically he is lean and every much the usual for foxes.

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Pretty close with Dash. What made you decide a wolf for AJ? Considering we already now have two MLP characters as wolves.

4205346 applejack cares for family like a pack of wolves did you see how close she is to her whole family she would do anything to make sure her family is safe like the pack mentality of wolves. That means she's got the heart of a wolf in her. Family is important even friends are considered family to her.

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Wow, that sounds rather interesting and an awesome character. Too bad I can't use, but if you want to make a MLP/ KFP crossover fanfic with him in it, then by all means. I'd be interested enough to read it, and we need more MLP/ KFP crossover fics.:pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy:

Not to spoil too much here but (and sorry if I disappoint you), most of this story will be taking place within the Land of Harmony (which acts as a sort of mini-assimilated universe of both worlds). And since Twi has only a three days to get her crown back before the portal closes (same applies with Sunset Shimmer), there won't be enough time for her to go cross-country around China.
I think you forgot that Master Shifu will be joining Po and the Five (I really need to make a chapter with them sometime soon). Plus we have the Celestial Sisters; Master Lian and Master Ming-Yue (whom we shall, hopefully, meet in the next chapter). And there is one other character from the Land of Harmony, who's identity I will keep secret for now.

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Hmmm...interesting explanation. I never thought of it that way. Actually, if I hadn't chosen Fluttershy, an elephant might have been a great choice for AJ and her family (herd mentality, led by elder matriarch, strong family bonds, etc). Oh well. I guess you'll just have to wait and see what I've got her (and the others) being.:ajsmug::derpytongue2:

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Care to share? So Sunset Shimmer is a liger, Fluttershy and elephant and it seems that just ike her pegasus counterpart, is very shy and gushes over Spike, much to the young one's amusement I'm sure.

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Po is a panda too... and the Dragon Warrior.

:derpytongue2:

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Oh, :facehoof: stupid me, I should have seenn that coming.

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That is Correct!!!:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile::moustache:
Next chapter will show Rainbow Dash, the Celestial Sisters (hopefully), and a couple background/extra characters.

Good story so far. Fluttershy's counterpart is an elephant and Sunset is a Liger. Cool. I wonder how'd she fare in a fight with White Liger from Power Rangers Jungle Fury being both Ligers and one having the spirit of the white tiger on his side? Any ideas?

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