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The owner of a humble travelling sex doll store has an unfinished custom order due in only a few days, so he heads into town to get the job done.

Special thanks to Kaidan for creating the Balloon Ponies group, which helped motivate me to write another story.

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Comment posted by birchwood deleted Jan 4th, 2014

Not bad! Not completely what I expected, but I liked it none the less.

Very fun! I like the idea of tf'ing ponies for sale! I wonder, did you write this for the contest? I admin the Balloon Ponies group, and I'd like to add this to the group!:rainbowkiss:

I loved your Day At the Pond story too! Started it all.:pinkiehappy:

Wow, this is really creepy.

Wow, I'm super excited that I not only actually inspired you, but you also came up with a new story already! Thank you for creating such a nice story full of possibilities. I could picture the unicorn running around, transforming fortunate mares.

@ 3732873
This story is the best kind of creepy. Every colorful doll in his store must be another mare, with another backstory, trapped in their squeaky prison until they're purchased. Will their owner take good care of them? Will he love them, or use them and toss them in the trash? Oh I can't wait to find out. :pinkiehappy:

Indeed, he started it all. I'm really glad his original story was pointed out to me.

It's quite sad it's complete..
I want to see more of this dollmaker.

Now I've got two dollmakers to look out for!:facehoof::rainbowlaugh:

Noticed the story was lacking icon tags like [OC Pony], otherwise it was quite an enjoyable read. Going by other non-pony fiction of this subject, it's fairly tame and by-the-numbers.

It is indeed a little creepy how casually this fellow removes Sunny Skies from the population however. But ponies are so trusting with their own kind making it all the harder to find out who the 'bad ponies' are before it's too late.

And before someone says it, it would be unlikely to see him try to grab one of the Mane 6 since they -are- the Elements of Harmony and you don't mess with a nations heroes who also happen to be the most powerful weapon against whatever badness is going to end the World as we know it.

Besides, there's a whole world out there. And not just ponies. There's gryphons, minotaurs, dragons... although a changeling would be really weird. Maybe something Shining Armor would have commissioned for his secret Stallion-Cave where Cadance is not allowed to intrude. Heck, if we're gonna be crazy, why not toss monsters into the mix; let's have a bouncy manticore or a squeaky pony-lamia (ponia? lamony? Eh, whatever).

That cover art image makes me think of it as an SCP artifact.

3732919 I want to see a balloon pony story that ends nicely, though! Every one in the group has them ending up either stuck forever as balloons or popped. It's good but it gets old. A story that ended with the pony returning to normal would actually be different.

I thought the cover art looked a little boring, so I spruced it up a bit.

That was pretty well done.

I'd also love to see it written from poor Sunny's perspective. That might just be personal preference, though it could also be done as much more of a horror or fetish story, depending what you go for. If you do it. :twilightsheepish:

That is all

Wait, why was this posted in the group first now?
I red this story a while back.:yay:


I'd have preferred from her POV as well. Poor girl.

The mental landscape Pierce displayed is a psychoanalyst's dream. And for once, Freud's go-to diagnosis may actually be relevant.

I have one question, however. If the transformation is one-way (likely, considering that he still has basic questions on the process, such as whether it hurts), then why is Pierce so sure that the ponies aren't killed by the process? Is he just fooling himself? Mysteries to ponder, there are... :applejackunsure:

It's these very strange fictions that make me extremely jealous and aroused at the same time. Jealous that it's impossible to be in such a position, yet aroused that I'm reading about it.

I wrote a continuation (kinda) to this story. You can read it here: [link]

4353807 What if he's just in insane pony in a mental institution who think's hes doing these things but he's actually not and these things are just actually filly dolls. Like mlp's barbies.

well we can comfirm it :3

but its just a theory!

a fanfic theory O3O

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