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This story is a sequel to Broken Armor


Shining Armor has done many actions that, when he became a leader, thought he'd never do or have to do. Not only has he betrayed his kingdom and left it's citizens without leadership, but, worst of all, he has betrayed his wife and his sister. What spell has Queen Chrysalis cast upon him to make him do such drastic actions?

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Rocky Diamond, Lance Force, and Blooming Lily has escaped from the Changeling Kingdom. But now they face more dangers including the harsh elements, themselves, and much more.

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Twilight Sparkle's only brother has been taken from her along with Princess Cadance. Now, she must work quickly to find a counter-spell to stop the transformation spell cast upon Shining Armor before it's too late.

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NOTICE: For anyone who happens to come upon this story before reading, "Broken Armor", I would highly recommend reading this stories predecessor, as I mentioned before, "Broken Armor".
NOTICE 2.0(11/12/2016): I'm currently re-editing through the story, generally fixing grammar, and revising some parts, mostly parts with Rocky Diamond, Lance Force, and Blooming Lily. Mainly because, rereading it after all this time, I didn't like the turn it took. Too many loose ends. Please be patient, I'll try to finish as quickly as I can. Thank you.

Chapters (21)
Comments ( 16 )

Your version of Chrysalis is pure evil, I hope Shining gets some vengeance later.

6510923 I can't say much, but trust me; there'll be some actions that Chrysalis' won't like.

I'm really diggin' this so far. It's very very intriguing, and the build up to what's happening to Taltra an Shining. Whoof!

6862447 Glad to hear that. Hopefully you'll be pleased once what's happened is revealed.

6863591 Well, I'm more of a transformation kind of gal, with a lot of build up and things being taken slow, as well as things are being told and "shown." The other perspectives giving a nice break and shows what's going on in the world as things occur. So overall its got great pacing!
Kudos!

6864836 Thanks. I really appreciate that.

it's good to see a new chapter of this story, again:pinkiehappy:

6988758 Thanks. Glad to see you enjoy it :raritywink:

good chapter as usual:pinkiehappy:

Is this... an edited RolePlay? o.O Aside from that, this kind of need some editing. There's mis-used words ("me" instead of <name>" the part with Shining, for example) feels kind of rushed, and ... time skip?

7153457 Sorry. I'll go in and re-edit. Tried to get an editor/proofreader, but could never find one.

Huh. Damn. I've been meaning to read this and its prequel for ages now, it's been sitting on my read list for literally months. Now it's actually done before I even got around to touching it. That's some expert procrastination skills for you.

What a weak BRONY ending!

"It's nothing. You'd do the same if something happened to Big Macintosh or Sweetie Belle."

I think you mean "Applebloom" since she is A J's little sister, and Sweetie Bell is Rarity's little sister

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