• Member Since 11th Sep, 2013
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Cromegas_Flare


"To become who you are meant to be. You must first accept your flaws, then make them into your strengths; only then, can you fully be who you are meant to be"

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Being just four months since the disappearance of her brother and sister in law, Twilight decides to brave the rest of her investigation. Though she had started months prior, the pull of his words were to much. Did it just take time to mended her weeping wounds?

Now ready to finish what she started, she turns to the key that will unlock the mystery.

Street Sweep's Journal on the other hand will unlock much more.

Chapters (4)
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Comments ( 9 )

Cool story, bro. (Literally! :D)

3742475
Why thank you, I do my best.

Reading this now, I realize I incorrectly formatted a couple paragraphs. sorry :facehoof:

3745170
Which ones? I did not really notice any errors... But then again, I do lack the education.

3745180 It was just some minor stuff, like an incorrect indention. If a grammar Nazi calls you out, make ssure to blame me

3745204
OK, but I will take some of the hits willingly. I'll look through it and try to find the errors. In the mean time I am working on the first chapter. It will take a bit of time to complete since I am looking through my death journal for good entries and how I can tie them into the mystery.

I'm dropping out here. It's well written, just not my kind of story. I'll leave the upvote in place. Good luck in the future.

3771475
Tis ok, I'm just glad you tried. That means more to me than anything.

So... psych thriller, or Lovecraftian horror? Only time ill tell I suppose!

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