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In her diary, Luna writes down the story about how a group of young ponies challenged a powerful enemy. To defet the enemy they have to go through a dangeres adventure that puts them all to the test.
Big thanks to my friend MistyMoon for making up most of the children of the mane six! Big thank you to both my friends MistyMoon and Starshipranger01 for prereading this!
The Amazing cover art is made by my mother and show Cookie and Speed.
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Nice.. luna's diary. How creative!
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Funny you liked it. The story will be out as soon as I have get it passed moderation!
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Tranfering it from an other writing program can be a hell and have cased me to fail moderation two times all ready!
which country are you from?
3703722 California...
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No way! Your the third person I met on this site that I asked where He/she is from that have answered Califonia! But isn't it like, in the middle of the night or something over there?
3703813 As it says on my profile, I am the goddess of random!
I even have a fan club! and yes.. it is 2:30 AM.
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It si 12:14 her in sweden, on, like, the other side of the world, in northen europ!
3703935 Nice, another foreign friend!
Join my fan club please?
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you just hade to use my adfiction of joining groups, didn't you?
3704180 Well, so far, I have 9 people joined...
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What is the name of the group?
3709855 MY FAN CLUB!!
Out of all the stories I read that I would like to see turned into an episode this one I think would be my fav.
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thank you, since this is a first time fic I have been working on for a long time, it make me happy to hear this!
Wonderful story! The storyline was great,the children of the mane six were cute,and Derpy was there! What more do you want from a story?
All it needs is a little editing and it would be a famous story!
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:[)!
I'm so proud of myselfe being a part of this amazing fanfic! (I made up most of the kids in the story)
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I wouldn't have made this far without you!
Loved it except for the name of the seventh element: compassion. This is basically the same thing as kindness. I thoroughly recall Twilght saying in the second part of the season 1 premiere,
I would've changed it to something like forgiveness, bravery, or courage. Other than that, I loved it! Thumbs up and a favorite for you!
I liked it! But the pacing in this fic is a bit rough. A story arch this long should probably be written in multiple chapters so that you can fill the story with detail without overwhelming anyone. I really liked the children in this story but I wish that each character could have been touched upon a bit more just so that I could get a feel for who they really are! Ultimately what I have to say is slow down. Give yourself the chance to add the needed detail and then your story will truly shine :D
You have an excellent cast of characters in this story, so give them the opportunity to have presence in the story. This story is about them so don't be afraid to expand upon each of their roles in the story!
Great work as always! Keep it up :D
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, but it's nothing I'm planning on right now.
Okay. May do a rewrite sometime, maybe even in multiply chapters.