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Some Person


Just a wannabe screenwriter who happens to have a fascination with pony fanfiction.

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I love Rainbow Dash.

I've loved her for so long.

But now she's been around less and less.

At first I was okay, but things are getting worse.

Now I need to know the answer.

The answer to the question I'm hesitant to find an answer for.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 20 )

Absolutely love it, this made the feels meter go a bit higher for today. Thanks for Posting

fazes.
"The fireplace hardly fazes me."
And I'm only telling you that because this is a fantastic short little thing.
Also I don't think vigor should be capitalized.
Seriously, hits it on the nose.

Great story. I love how it's one sided, makes it kind of relatable.

3610469
Any time! I'm just glad people seem to enjoy this story.

3610758
Agh, that word. Fixed now, thanks. Also glad to know this story impresses you! It's got the sort of message a lot of people need to be reminded of, myself included.

3610851
And that's the kind of story I was going for.

ron

Legendary.

Absolutely brilliant!

Absolutely love it. cried hard :twilightblush: faved :heart:

The feels, the feels :fluttercry:

I know how Fluttershy feels. In fact of explained to multiple people how everyone needs to be reminded they matter. Then they go and tell they friend they've been fighting with how much they matter. It sucks to be telling people everyone needs to know how much they matter and I never here it. Oh well.

I give your props because it seems you really captured how it would feel to never now and then when you finally get your answer

So beautiful. So poetic. It feels so real. It is great to see a short of them where they are already a couple.

Very good story

Beautiful beautiful story. Such feels. Definitely something relatable and...Im so glad it ended
happy.

I usually leave meaningful comments on stories, but this one deserves only 2 words...

Super-cali-fraja-listic-expialla-doshus and FEELS!

My review, 100000/100000 Here is a Mustache and a Derpy to congratulate you!
:moustache: :derpytongue2:

With Love, Hope, Care and Horses -Lizzy:derpyderp2:

THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL!!!:heart::heart: I swear I was crying for half the story:fluttercry: it was just so good!!!

I cried. So beautiful :fluttercry:

Very sweet, I got a little teary. :heart: I'm glad to see Rainbow Dash portrayed as a caring marefriend (at least at heart), it seems she rarely is.
(Apparently no one remembers she's the Element of Loyalty!).

I think RD would quit the Wonderbolts for Fluttershy, in fact I think she'd give up her wings for Fluttershy... but that's just me. :twilightsmile:

This is the greatest thing to exist anywhere, ever.

Aside from one awkward sentence:

We’re the only thing each other sees now.

This was perfect.
30 out of 5 stars. Just… wow.

5723989 Yeah, an Element of Loyalty FAIL, that is! Heck, even Spike is more loyal than she is!

7497661
Ikr? :facehoof: Just once I want them to make her the good guy of an episode.

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