A storm helps Rainbow Dash realize what she feels for her oldest friend, Fluttershy and reminds her of why she left flight school in the first place.
A RD/Fluttershy ship fic that was inspired by my friend's random Skype fic.
Also loosely inspired by For My Sake by Shinedown http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1FG3nR6Ww-8
A first stab at writing my own fic I plan to do more so hope you like this one! =D
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Love it! <3
My thumbs, take them, all of them!
Fluttershy ships are so cute, and your portrayal of her just made me, uh, how should I put this?
Daaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwww!
Kisses!
Glad I took the time to read this. It was a really good story, and I can say that I hope to see more like it in the future
A good first fic. If you take any constructive criticism, the dialogue could be better. Commas will probably help that a lot.
Dawwwwwwwww
Very cute. Great job on your fic a little FlutterDash is always nice before bed
This is so nice. The only thing holding this back is the grammar mistakes. One more read-through should eliminate any errors.
Otherwise...explosive cuteness.
loved every word, it was great. Very well done have some moustaches
How sweet.
Very cute, but like many others have said, this needs to be more thoroughly proof-read. The whole premise was precious, that they crushed on each other during their fillyhood. Not exactly an original premise, but you still managed to make my heart go HNNNNGGG with cuteness overload.
FlutterDash is the only ship I truly support in this fandom, so I just had to DAWWW at this fic.
Still, the story felt a little bland and daft. Sure, you had the premises all set up and the history planned, but it just seems a little rushed. Ask yourself this. Why, of all times, did RD suddenly want to tell Fluttershy she loved her on a storming night? Why does she love her? Her personality? Kindness? Friendship?
And just for fun, HOW THE HECK DOES A TORTOISE EVEN STAND ON A CLOUD?!
This was so beautiful!
This was absolutely beautiful, favourited, and I hope to see more fics like this.
That was such a cheesy ending but really cute still! Loved this!
A very sweet, simple story. Very nice. Some errors here, but it was fine.
684339 the answer to your question: Magic snort snort
Wow, that was really well written. So much Dawwwww
i started reading this, and then,'give me a sign" came on, by breaking benjamin. right around the time of the card ripping.
truly epic music choice, grooveshark.
Amount of D'awwwness is over 9000!
I got goosebumps when after Rainbow yelled, she noticed Fluttershy standing behind her.
Tusk is well written not a novel but good
There are daww moments but it felt to fast
Great though
What I'm going to say has already been said, but I'm going to say it anyway. The premise is absolutely divine. Even with that though, all of the errors in the writing just make it look terrible. I mean Jesus Christ, it makes the writing a lot less moving.