All of My Courage

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When Rainbow Dash can't supress the feelings for her childhood friend, she calls in a few favors to make the most beautiful night for Fluttershy possible.

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lillytheomegawolf

lillytheomegawolf #1 · Sep 30th, 2012 · · ·

Awwwww... How sweet...
Nice angel on Flutterdash. Although short it was a nice read and more Flutterdash is always good, especially when its cute stuff like this.
FTW!

dkdiddyk

dkdiddyk #2 · Sep 30th, 2012 · · ·

lovely story

DianaWinters

DianaWinters #3 · Sep 30th, 2012 · · ·

Several days had passed and all the while the cyan pegasus had been thinking of ways to apologize to Fluttershy. Rainbow had beenn sitting on a cloud debating weather or not to aske her friends for help when a pink earth pony popped up in front of her before quickly disappearing.

Just a few errors...

i.imgur.com/j4Nnv.png ~Wolf

flutterdashforever

flutterdashforever #4 · Sep 30th, 2012 · · ·

It's so cute!

StarGuardian

StarGuardian #5 · Sep 30th, 2012 · · ·

1363911 Thanks for catching those, I really appreciate it.

DianaWinters

DianaWinters #6 · Sep 30th, 2012 · · ·

1364791 No problem, thank YOU for writing... Now if you don't mind, please write moar =\
The complete tag makes me sad inside.

i.imgur.com/j4Nnv.png ~Wolf

Soviet Power Supreme

Soviet Power Supreme #7 · Oct 4th, 2012 · · ·

Well done. Great short flutterdash story. Bravo!

josh6520

josh6520 #8 · Oct 15th, 2012 · · ·

there is no emoticon for what im feeling... damn is all i got to say!! this story really appeals to me, i love all (well, most to all) flutterdash fanfics, my favorite time of year is winter, needless to say this one almost made me tear up inside... i agree with wolf, the complete tag makes me sad though in itself i feel this one shot is nearly flawless!!!

StarGuardian

StarGuardian #9 · Oct 16th, 2012 · · ·

1446151 Thanks for the compliment. But I would like to ask what makes it nearly flawless, so I can improve upon it.

josh6520

josh6520 #10 · Oct 16th, 2012 · · ·

1447963 well... to be honest, its not really anything you yourself can improve on due to the fact that they are just personal things, like i hate seeing fluttershy cry, but that's what makes the story really connect with every other part maybe it being longer, a sequel, you know, just little things that (being a huge fan of this story now) wished there was, the story as itself though... dang you got talent! that's all i have to say right there, i read through again and didn't find anything in terms of literary mistakes, gaps, anything. sorry I'm not much help, but i speakz de truth!