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This story is a collection of unrelated short stories written for the Thirty Minute Ponies tumblr.

None of the chapters directly relate to the others, they're all independent stories based on daily prompts. I'm just posting them all here for fun and for critique/comments. Keep in mind that these are all written in half an hour or so, so they're short and a bit first-draft-y, and rather uneven quality-wise.

I will try to add tags to the end of chapter titles denoting the tone of that chapter.

My participation in this is inspired by Esle Ynopemos' six-month long series of these, though I'm not focusing on any particular character like they did.

Chapters (80)
Comments ( 107 )

I see someone's a fan of Penny Arcade. :D

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Thanks, and I'm glad you seem to enjoy what I write for TMP. It's been fun having something new to work on daily like this.

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It's a fun comic, but I'm not sure I recognize the reference you think you see. (Unless you mean the prompt itself, which I don't write.) Thanks for the comment though.

3600359 It's a reference to a strip where one threatens another with a threat that ends with "And then I shall open one of my three mouths, and sing the song that shall end the earth". And your reference to Sweetie singing the song that would end her world made me think of it.

I could tell you enjoyed writing this one... It feels like it could even work as a prologue to a longer work... Gotta love villain team-ups.

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It's a bit comic supervillain teamup style. Which I've always enjoyed.

Though making it a longer work would mean I'd have to figure out what the heck Sunset Shimmer is even doing with all that stuff.

Great work, with what I feel is the hardest pony to write correctly.

OT6. This might be some kind of record, but so goes Pinkie Pie.

If I could extra favorite one of these individually, I would. And I suddenly want to play some left 4 dead...

Ah, good ol' British history in the guise of kid's rhymes. :D

Excellently done, sad, but not melodramatic. Celestia and Twilight handled this with the grace I'd expect of the characters, and in your hands less was more with this particular theme.

Well, looks like I have some new head-canon regarding Discord. What a magnificent bastard!

Yay, twishy romance! :twilightsmile::heart::yay: What a sweet and loving story, and I am loving the others, too.

I liked this. I think that a longer version of this could be made, but this little fic stands well enough in its own right.

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Haha I like Blueblood, even if he does tend to get the short end of the stick in my stories. There's been a couple of these TMP submissions I think I'd like to blow up into full stories, given time and motivation.

Beautifully done. Twilight's reply is perfect

Oh, yay! I'm really happy to see these posted on Fimfiction. :twilightsmile:

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I've always liked Spike and Twilight's weird friendship/relationship/familial thing. It's only been expanded by how often they rely on one another in various episodes and EQG.


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Seems like short story compilations don't get a huge pile of attention here, but that's fine. I like having these all in one place anyway.
Thanks for helping run TMP by the way, I appreciate the work you folks do.

This was a very inspired idea... now I'm sad the show killed Sombra off. Would be interesting to see Chrysalis' side of this story, too.

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Oh, thank you. You're very welcome! :pinkiehappy:

Fucking ace! Well done mate, if I could like and fave again just for this chapter, I'd do it in a heartbeat.

Please continue this, it will be awesome.

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The Chrysalis/Shining/Cadance chapter? I like them being a bit silly together.


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I'll have to see after this season is over. it's sort of looking like Twilight's going to end up with her own kingdom or something, and it would be possible to swing this story that way with a little work.

This is now my new head-canon regarding the origin of Discord.

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Twinkie is always fun, at least I think so.

This chapter... I love it. From the madcap flight across the Everfree, to Twilight's foil to Pinkie's... being Pinkie Pie, to the heartwarming end where we see just why it was so important to Pinkie that they get there as soon as possible. This is a lovely stream-of-pinkieness.

And this is how you use phonetic accents correctly.

Never bet against Pinkie Pie, indeed. :pinkiehappy:

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I have a lot of fun writing Pinkie, especially that chapter. She's pretty much my favorite pone. Glad you liked it!

Ooh, very exciting action. I like.


3612078 Heh, I know that feeling. "Sure, it'd be great to expand this thing I wrote, but then I'd have to actually come up with an explanation for what the heck it was even about..."

Heh, okay, you got me with this one. The twist of the episode was that the Pony of Shadows was Pinkie all along, and here the twist is that, no really, it's Pinkie.

If this was cuter in your head than it is here, I don't know how you handled it at all, because this is absolutely adorable.

There's been a handful of entries on Twilight and Celestia now, and I've got to say, I like how you write their relationship. You always seem to give them a very warm, comfortable friendship. It's nice.

Hmm. The action seems a bit sudden, like it comes out of nowhere. I think you're right; this would be better if it had room to fix the pacing issues in the first part. However, the idea of a friendship between Gilda and Scootaloo is awesome.

Also, I had myself a very immature giggle when Gilda mentioned not eating ponies since flight camp. That's a great line.

Wow a slew of Esle Ynopemos comments!

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A New Day is probably my favorite story of the ones I wrote for TMP.


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Omniship only really makes sense being introduced by Pinkie, in my head. Plus, you know, it's cute.


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Regarding Celestia and Twilight, yeah, they seem close and by all appearances Twilight at least had a lot of experience interacting with Celestia. "In all the years she's been my mentor, she's never once doubted me!". Pity they see one another so rarely in the show proper.

This is the story that made me decide to go back and read the rest of your 30-minute entries. This is an incredible story. I love how it ties together so many different parts of the lore in a way that makes so much sense that I just wish it could be canon. And it casts Sombra's simplistic villainy from the show in such a complex light. I love it.

DT's lie at the end is just heartbreaking.

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Yeah, "Crystal' was a lot of fun to write. I like fleshing out villains a bit more, and both of them are loosely defined enough to come up with all kinds of neat stories with some work.

I like the little bit of a fakeout that happens here when Applejack heads directly for Carousel Boutique. It seems like an implication that Rarity is the other name on the invitation, until we find out that, no, AJ is headed there to keep Rarity from murdering anyone. :rainbowlaugh:

I wrote a review of Nope. It can be found here.

Nope is very cute, sweet, and well-written! This story made me smile. :twilightsmile:

Brought here by Titanium Dragon

Okay, if this changeling hasn't already crossed the line into hurting Fluttershy just by kidnapping Twilight and impersonating her, she's a hair's breadth away from doing so. Discord really ought to just blow the whole thing open right now before they have sex.

This seriously creeped me out is what I'm trying to say.

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