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Darkryt Orbinautz


Still slowly trying to disentangle from MLP. It is ... slow going.

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Loved it, although it was a bit hard to read at points, what with Applejack's phrases etc. Kinda want to know where Pinkie went, since we don't see her for most of it :pinkiesmile:

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For the most part, she's at the mirror with Sunset, the Princesses, et al trying to figure out how to change the Rarities back with the rest of them. Later, she's part of the rest of the group, silently in the background while Twilight accuses Celestia of being a voyeur. Physically behind Rainbow Dash, but otherwise not involved in anything.

3987708 aww :fluttershysad: I hoped she had gone off to get up to mischief

Umm dude? Not to creep you out but my OC was in the room the whole time.

Celestia walks in and finds him poking a large corba whose frill has a few spikes.
Celestia:" Kul'as! What are you doing doing here? Last I saw you you retreated to the badlands."

Kul'as:" made a u-turn. I just came back for my stuff. Than I saw the Freaky Centaur on Pony junk and hunkered down for the whole thing. If the white one didn't turn back, I would've went next. I was just trying to wake up Chris Latta over here but I think I'll just take him now. Also where can I get that vest?"

Celestia:"and Twilight says i'm a pervert?"

Kul'as:"I'm Evil Incarnate, of course I'm a sexual deviant. In fact after I killed your mom, I banged her corpse.

Celestia rips off a pillar and holds it like a baseball bat.
Celestia:"you have a 5 second head start"

Kul'as: "Chris Latta! Interference!"

The cobra jumps up and shoots right into Celestia's face than jumps into a hole between Kul'as' legs.

Kul'as:(runs to a window) "enjoy the gift!" (Jumps through the window and flys off)

Very kinky story. You have one like from me.

Uh. At this point in time, they had beaten tirek, so why where they surprised by centaurs? I mean, he was one so... I'm not trying to step on any hooves or feet but... You know, a little continuity would be nice

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I'm not sure how you got that idea they've beaten Tirek. I'm pretty sure that episode wasn't even out yet when I wrote this. This takes places in a post-Equestria Girls, pre-Season 4, pre-Rainbow Rocks time period, with a few liberties taken here and there.

... upon further inspection, I( noticed that it took place in the crystal empire, and I apologize for that. I honestly thought it was set in the crystal tree castle, not the crystal empire. Seriously, I'm sorry for that.

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Yeah, I figured that was where the mistake came from.

It's okay, though. We're all good.

Do you mind if I add this story to my Equestrian Centaurs group?

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