Carry on.

moar?

MORE!!!

Huzzah! It lives!

I've been looking forward to this getting added to since the terribly harsh words thrown Mac's way last time out. Very potent image of an addled AJ wedged against the door frame, muscles singing with tension...

Turnabout is very definitely fair play and has meant AJ's heat's been kept in check for the time being. I can't help but think the poor mare's exceptionally confused now and these siblings will just have to have it out. Those clear-the-air talks will hopefully do nothing of the sort

Now while my prediction from last time hasn't come to pass yet, this is a nice stepping stone along the way and I must know where this leads! Doesn't sound like you knew where this one was taking you either, but maybe predictable ponies take detours sometimes

4201548
Thank you.

Your comments are always a treat to read.

Everyone's alive!

4200912 MY WAYWARD SON!!!~

4206929 DONT YOU CRY NO MORE NO!!!!!!

4207506
>Insert Guitar Riff here<

I really like this story. It's believable, which is difficult to accomplish when writing incest. I can't wait for the next chapter. Don't keep us waiting too long this time!

Write more damnit

4549284
Why the hell is this story getting so popular?

4551231 I think its the teasing. there is a long gap between chapters and in the first and third you give us a tease of what is to come. I imagine people are looking forward to the climax (no pun intended).

More...

More.

MORE

MORE!!!

Wow! Honestly, I was expecting this to be a run-of-the-mill wincest story (not that there's anything wrong with that), but you're quite the writer, and the emotions playing off between the two of them added a nice new layer. Kudos!

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Well, thanks!

Now, if only I could make myself write more.

I counted 5 comments requesting the same thing. Might add myself to that list as well.
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5393718
I am sick in the brain, but this is far from the sickest thing ever.

4 months ago the world ended :(

Well, actually, it was more than 12 months, but that's beside the point.

6135736

-The title is corny

I honestly could not come up with anything else. I spent days trying, but nothing came to mind. Sometimes a good title comes easy, sometimes it never comes.

having sexual intercourse with animals is completely against God's word.

So is reading a porn story about horse siblings fucking each other.

Get outta here, ya sanctimonious ninny.

6135965 I like the title, and I like animals, in every way.

6157407
Thanks, buddy.

6157886 It's the honest truth sugarcube. .

Why i came to read this, idk. I'm just bored and my mind started to think ''Maybe i'll be stupid and read some dumb clopfic because i'm bored.'' I shall take my leave xD

6468083 It was still a good story tho xD

6468208
...Well, I'm glad you liked it?

6469198 It was a compliment so don't worry

More?

6543919
I'll get back to it once I have a solid internet connection again.

6544131
Oh no! That sucks. I hope you get back online soon.

6544131 I hope you do soon so I can read more of this amazing story

4484353
...That's a really good point.

I think I'll add that in.

Sorry that I somehow missed your comment.

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Its not even a human. So how is this beastality.