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3585928 Don't worry, plenty more incest on the way
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lol, Wow; that was quick.
3585951 I like to interact with my fans LoL
When it comes to incest fics they usually last for only one chapter which is fine but I kinda want to read of what will happen further down like... Seeing each other in public like a date.or kissing one another. Hell even a wedding! Kinda want to read about that.
3586503 Your wish is my command, my sweet, sweet reader. Stick around
I may have to riff this, just because of the spelling and the few grammar mistakes I saw.
3586593 Hit me, where are the mistakes?
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YAY! CHAPTER!
a little rushed. but as a big fan of appleXmac ship fics, this was still pretty good
The sex was way too rushed! If ur gonna do clop you need to do it right...take ur time and get descriptive
3589556 Thanks, I'll take my time in the future.
Are you serious! Incest I'm okay with but Filly Fooling is where I cross the line. And here I just favorited your fic.
Way to rushed
Dont know what to say
We were warned in the description.
Still too rushed anyway.
Chapters need to be longer in general.
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While I agree with the sentiment; you realize that you are a silly man, correct?
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Agreed.
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some weirdo's like that crap and some others don't... And I myself hate it more than religion. And I'm not a fan of that too.
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some weirdo's like that crap and some others don't... And I myself hate it more than religion. And I'm not a fan of that too.
I never said i liked it. I don't, I was just giving advice on how to make the story sound more fluent and making the chapters longer at the same time as well.
Just like everypony else said. Seriously, don't rush it.
Okay Really? Don't bring poor little apple bloom into this. Fillies are not okay. No. No more. Also, your still rushing it.
3603955 um, ok.
Really? You're doing this to Applebloom...
This is her when she reads that part------->
4455035 I'm sorry. It seemed like a good idea at the time. And this entire story was written on a dare, so don't be suprised if it gets really weird. Besides, it could've been worse...
Reviewed by the Pleasant Commentator and Review Group
canceled? aww