delicious new chapter yay can't wait

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Don't hold your breath.

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you're a very good writer, so either way i'm happy

that was a great chapter i can already see where this is headed

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Rough, sloppy make-up sex?

Yay! There's definitely a big shortage of AppleMac on here. It's nice to see another story involving these two. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work!

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well that's a possibility but i see several paths

Big Mac could take many paths and applejack could as well

applejack-one emotion leads to another and she tries to tell big mac sorry and ends up forcing him to have sex with her because she's in heat, hurting him even more and scaring big mac, that would be a wonderful story arch because there would be so many feels as each time applejack tries to tell him sorry she only hurts him more till he goes to bed crying every night, flinching at his sister's voice
(i would love this story arch if you choose it hehehe)

she says sorry and they have awkward silence

she says sorry but big mac gets really pissed and hurts her, and or tells her what he saw and blackmails her into sleeping with him whenever he wants

applejack catches big mac in the resting and decides to use him while he's sleeping, or you could have him "working out some stress" and she helps him and herself, through that they start having sex

big mac get's hurt because applejack's scolding him and she does everything she can to make him feel better

fire breaks out and big mac saves applejack and she repays him

the list goes on and on, i have high hopes you'll make it really good

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one emotion leads to another and she tries to tell big mac sorry and ends up forcing him to have sex with her because she's in heat,

Hehehe.

It would be interesting to see that in a story, but I don't think I'll take it that way.

Maybe a bonus chapter?

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i'm sure whatever you do will be awesome i can't wait even if it takes you a month or two more

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Thanks!

Can't promise anything, though. The will to write comes and goes as it pleases.

HARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRSH!!!!!!!

Ouch... I felt that one.

This doesn't look good.
I suppose that Big Mac COULDN'T save his Mom and Dan?

Wonderful read, can't wait to see what you come up with next

“And how many family members have you saved, Mac? Mom an’ Dad? Ya did a great job there!”

Big Mac was stunned.

A dark silence fell between the two siblings, neither knowing how to react to what had just happened.

Applejack was the first to recover, and she started stuttering out an apology, “I… I’m so sorry, Big Mac… I didn’t mean–”

Okay, that caught my attention, and put this story in my LVF file.

Come at me bro, and let's see where the story goes.

You had my curiosity, but now you have my interest, please do go on

It's Macintosh, not McIntosh.

Owowowow... AJ, why'd ya do that?! I'm all for a conflict or two in a story but yikes, that was harsh.

Even though I love it when mares get angry, I didn't hafta take a leap into the pond on this one, which I didn't expect. This must mean it's headed somewhere, which is all kinds of good.

Although if this does go the "rough sloppy make-up sex" route then I won't be disappointed.

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Sorry, I'm a sucker for the canon. Hasbro says it's "McIntosh", so that's what I'm going with.

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Well, there's this, and the fact that Faust has always called him 'Big Macintosh' or 'Big Mac'. That's about as canon as it gets.

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1) That list only proves that there is inconsistency, even amongst the officials.

2) I'm sorry to tell you this, but Faust relinquished all control over canon when she left the show.

All in all, I'm going to stick with "McIntosh".

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That list only proves that there is inconsistency, even amongst the officials.

Likely caused by marketers who have no real connection or care for the show, and are doing it because it's just their job. Even still, this point could still be highly contested, despite the fact that Rainbow Dash would never willingly and joyfully wear glitter, as her toy often is. And Celestia isn't pink. The spelling or even their names aren't as important either, since it's a physical toy and not a story where you have to read the name every time it comes up. I know I'm counter-arguing myself from my previous post, but at the end of the day, the show is far more relevant to fanfiction than the toys. So take that into consideration.

I'm sorry to tell you this, but Faust relinquished all control over canon when she left the show.

You're right. And you could argue that point in the latest episode (Flight to the Finish) that if Scootaloo began to fly, people would've flipped (and are doing so anyway) because Faust herself said that she was never meant to be able to fly. But the last time Faust was ever really involved was with the season 2 premiere. So yes, in that case your argument is valid because she hasn't been involved in the show for quite some time.

However, it is not valid when you argue their names. Names are something that are established and never changed, unlike plot points or general direction of the show. It just doesn't apply because it's a name. Additionally, Big Mac's name was pronounced in every episode as Big Macintosh, or just Big Mac. And finally, it is accepted by everyone nearly everyone in the fandom that it's Big Macintosh, which is relevant because you're on a fandom site. In fact, of the hundreds of stories and millions of words I've read, I have never seen it spelled that way. Not once. So I'd say it's at least in your best interest to adopt the spelling.

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1) McIntosh is pronounced "Macintosh".
2) Big Mac was named after the apple. The apple's name is McIntosh.
3) The fandom is rather notorious for holding ridiculous headcanons.
4) I've seen it spelled McIntosh in fanfics quite a few times.
5) Popularity does not equate to correctness.
6) I'm not going to change it. I am far too lazy.

I really liked how the second chapter ended and really curious to see what happens next

When I saw this story, especially the title, all I could think of was the song by Asia of the same moniker. Now all I'll think of is Big Mac's look on the cover image when I hear it.

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Aha! I have ruined that song for you!
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Well....fuck Applejack, is that how you feel?

Applejack screwing a dog turned into Big Mac letting his parents die.
Lemme just go laugh it off for a bit

HO HO HO, THIS IS GETTING GOOD

This story badly needs a new chapter. Very badly.

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But I have ADD, and it's hard to focus on things.

Also, I'm really fucking lazy.

So when Mac gets a little sleep to recharge, that's an outrage, but there's nothing wrong with Applejack spending half the afternoon just searching the entire orchard on a quest to lecture him about wasting time? I was really hoping he'd point that out during their argument. Oh well.

In any case, I'm surprised how much this is turning out to be a real story, not just totally frivolous clop.

I was all 'yay yay' first chapter and beginning to browse single-handedly and then i hit this chapter and its all 'both hands firmly on keyboard'

It may is well have been

fuck you

sad face

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but there's nothing wrong with Applejack spending half the afternoon just searching the entire orchard on a quest to lecture him about wasting time?

Much less when she goes off for days.

I really liked this chapter, with the tone it acquired