I started out this fic with some trepidation: wow, a Mac struggling with mares in heat fic. Which convenient plot devices will be worked into this, and how long will it take for the reluctant to start shagging everything that wants it, needs it... Imagine my surprise when the first chapter went this way?
No complaints, looking forward to how this progresses. Quite pleased Winona's involved, she doesn't get enough love in most fics.
Also, this fic confirms that Luna's the princess of filth: pray to her and your sister will make sure you get off
Now if you'll excuse me, I'm going to... take a leap into the pond!
This is truly one of the sickest things I have ever read. Let me break it down for you:
Grammar: -The title is corny -The chapter titles are corny
Content: -Just the thought of Applejack having sex with a dog, (which I never would have thought of until now) makes me want to regurgitate, and hear you go writing it. Since I'm a Christian, having sexual intercourse with animals is completely against God's word. And really, even a sinning heathen would admit this is wrong on multiple levels. This was just plain sick.
5393718 6135736 Just because you don't agree with something doesn't mean you have to criticize it if you don't like then leave a down vote and go read a different story don't criticize the author for writing something that many other people enjoy
6135736 Wow. That is just sad. People like what they like. And unlike SOME PEOPLE I don't feel the need to try to push my beliefs on other people.
What I'm getting from your comment is that you would consider me a SINNING heathen simply because I don't believe in Christianty, or any major religion. Yes, there is a religion I believe in, but it is irrelivent to this.
Also Applejack is a pony and as such, technecly she IS an animal. This leads to your point about having sex with an animal to be completely irrelevant.
6135736 Dude, I don't mean to be rude but your statement is completely invalid. Your on fimfiction and most likely looking for clopfics (how the hell else did you find the story) which I hate to say, yes I'll admit myself to it... is pretty much bestiality. For God's sake, your reading about techno colored horses having sex. You can't try to imagine they are human... it's not about it being pony X pony, no... your reading it for a reason my man. So instead of leaving some invalid hate comment and throwing your two bits that, well look at that unfortunately no one cares about. Just leave a dislike and get on with the rest of your day. Thank you, yours truely ~That Weird Guy~
P.S. I somehow find you to be either, A: a really big troll or B: some little kid who doesn't know a rat's ass of what they are saying... so, GG.
really incests!!
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ok
3179619
Sounds like a good time, yeah?
Incest is bestcest!
3179994
...Huh?
3179994 that comment gave me cancer
3180043
Good sir I am cancer.
I guess my comments were I'll received. Damn you unfunny sarcasm!
3180075
Sarcasm in text form, good sir!
3180077
Meh.
3180056 how tragic
My only complaint is that there were a lot of unnecessary commas. Otherwise, good fic.
3181541
I always thought that I was a little comma heavy.
Thanks for the feedback!
EPIC!
i demand more!
3181683
Good! Because I plan to continue it!
3181700
the opening was a bit rough but it was well worth reading to the end
3181704
Fixed it! I think...
Oh my
3182555
Hurr hurr. 69 faves.
this was lovely, natural and dirty
I started out this fic with some trepidation: wow, a Mac struggling with mares in heat fic. Which convenient plot devices will be worked into this, and how long will it take for the reluctant to start shagging everything that wants it, needs it... Imagine my surprise when the first chapter went this way?
No complaints, looking forward to how this progresses. Quite pleased Winona's involved, she doesn't get enough love in most fics.
Also, this fic confirms that Luna's the princess of filth: pray to her and your sister will make sure you get off
Now if you'll excuse me, I'm going to... take a leap into the pond!
3183800
Hehehe, your comment genuinely made me laugh!
Thank you for your kind words!
Awwesome
3243802
Are you really C-D?
Not meaning to cause any offense, but:
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This was awesome
Please, take my favourite
3255313
Quite gladly, good sir or madam.
3255315
'Twould be sir
I noticed your comma dilema. You want any help with that? I'd be glad to read this again...
3179991
feellikeasir
3255358
feellikeasir
3255315
I tried to get the G-docs to work, nope. Sorry
Regardless I'll be keeping an eye on this.
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3268175
Wait... You actually understood that?
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3268220
Oh well...
3268175
I haven't sent you the link yet...
3268255
I know, I meant G-docs in general. Android compatabilty sucks
If you want to, you can still send the link when you want, but it probably won't work until I get my laptop back from repairs in two weeks
3268585
Oh, I see.
I suppose I could make do without you, for two weeks.
Let me know, when you get your computer back.
3268591
I shall. Good luck with continuing this, it's good
And for the record, is best incest.
Bring me moar
This fic can't die! It is a Ghost!
3363395
Oh, goodness no. I'm just lazy as fuck.
i-want-more!sorry-spacebar-doesn't-work-sometimesMORE!
3496332
You should get a new keyboard.
3268621
Lies, Princest is Wincest.
this is the most sick thing ever you're sick in the brain bitch
This is truly one of the sickest things I have ever read. Let me break it down for you:
Grammar:
-The title is corny
-The chapter titles are corny
Content:
-Just the thought of Applejack having sex with a dog, (which I never would have thought of until now) makes me want to regurgitate, and hear you go writing it. Since I'm a Christian, having sexual intercourse with animals is completely against God's word. And really, even a sinning heathen would admit this is wrong on multiple levels. This was just plain sick.
Incest o.o xD Getting a little... interesting...
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6135736
Just because you don't agree with something doesn't mean you have to criticize it if you don't like then leave a down vote and go read a different story don't criticize the author for writing something that many other people enjoy
6135736
Wow. That is just sad. People like what they like. And unlike SOME PEOPLE I don't feel the need to try to push my beliefs on other people.
What I'm getting from your comment is that you would consider me a SINNING heathen simply because I don't believe in Christianty, or any major religion. Yes, there is a religion I believe in, but it is irrelivent to this.
Also Applejack is a pony and as such, technecly she IS an animal. This leads to your point about having sex with an animal to be completely irrelevant.
6135736
Dude, I don't mean to be rude but your statement is completely invalid.
Your on fimfiction and most likely looking for clopfics (how the hell else did you find the story) which I hate to say, yes I'll admit myself to it... is pretty much bestiality. For God's sake, your reading about techno colored horses having sex. You can't try to imagine they are human... it's not about it being pony X pony, no... your reading it for a reason my man. So instead of leaving some invalid hate comment and throwing your two bits that, well look at that unfortunately no one cares about. Just leave a dislike and get on with the rest of your day.
Thank you, yours truely
~That Weird Guy~
P.S.
I somehow find you to be either, A: a really big troll or B: some little kid who doesn't know a rat's ass of what they are saying... so, GG.
6135736
The fuck are you here for then?