Fluttershy has recently become fascinated with hoarding things, and it's up to her friends to find out how she got that way and to change her behavior before disaster strikes.
This is a follow up story to my other story called "Ain't Want No Yeller Ponies 'Round Here." You do not have to read that story to understand what happens here in this story.
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/121395/aint-want-no-yeller-ponies-round-here
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As a Christian, I don't quite know if this is a little too preachy or if that was intentional, but I thought it was still funny!^^
Also, I feel as though that cut on Macintosh's leg comes back up at some point. Maybe in a sequel he has to get it amputated and gets a cool robotic arm with a bunch of gadgets and tools! But I'm rambling now^^
Overall I thought it was a good story, with a real life problem that was solved in a very cartoony way which certainly earns you some bonus points.
3061138 Most of my fics are inspired by the Bible in some way, shape, or form. I am a Christian fan fic writer here, and I love to include Christianity into my fics.
I thought about that scene with Big Macintosh, and trust me, your idea went through my head multiple times when I was writing near the end of this story, but I just couldn't do it. That would be too much of a change for Big Macintosh for me even though that idea could really work and be very funny. That was just a bit too crazy for this story. I do write other stories that are totally crazy and insane when it comes to humor. Mainly my Mortal Kombat MLP story called Flutter Spears And "Get Over Here", another story called An "Unreal" Day, and yet another story I did called Pinkie Pie Gets Amplified, but I wanted to keep this one a bit more toned down with the craziness.
I'm so glad you got some laughs out of this story. It was intended to be very funny!
Thanks for reading and God bless!
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And God bless you as well my friend^^
It's not too often that I find another Christian who is comfortable enough with their beliefs to have some fun with them XD
THANK YOU^^
3061405 It's my pleasure! Thank you so much for such kind words.
I usually get quite a bit of hostility and sometimes even hate when it comes to my stories from other Bronies who read them. I find that a lot of Bronies out there will preach love and tolerance to all except for Bronies like me who love Jesus.
Stick around though, I got another story that I'm about to put out soon that will also be a follow up to this fic!
Can't wait^^
You sure Fluttershy's not a masochist?
3062370 lol, yeah, I'm pretty sure she's not, but that's funny you mention that because my next story I am currently working on will have something to do with that topic. Oh dear, where am I going with this.....
3062655 Reply me only when that story is upload.
3062711 I'll try to remember! I am getting closer and closer to the 20th story count now, and the comments from others are flooding me! I have been pumping out multiple stories a week for some time now and I have spent almost three hours getting back to all the comments people are leaving me just for today. I even failed to respond to them all. I'm not sure if I can remember to PM you about this, but if you are willing, you can follow me until that fic comes out, and that way you can be alerted. Hopefully, in a few more days I'll have it done.
I have to agree with RisingMoon336. It did feel like it got a little preachy. And the Bible verses sorta came out of nowhere too. Definately didn't expect Sunday School on a pony fic.
And maybe we could've done a limitless more with Mac. I mean, we were given the ingredients for some good shipping here but the pie was never really cooked.
Overall it was a good story though. Clear plotline through and you wrapped it up with a bow. Hope to see more.
3064163 Thanks! I'm working on another story right now and I have plenty of other ones to read if you'd like to check them out!
I agree. I probably should have done something more with the fluttermac, but the story was starting to get very long. I was not too sure if I should have made it a full ship or not since Rarity kind of forced him into this whole situation. I think I'd rather just leave it up to the reader to decide if they fully get shipped or not.
Thanks for the kind words and thank you for reading!
Huzzah! finally! done with the story! pretty long, but still an easy read as it has a more true to show feel to it... and thank all that is good in this world that this didn't end like Pinkie's story!
I was expecting the Bible verses and surprisingly, I didn't find it quite as preachy as I thought it might get, or maybe I'm just getting used to your stories with biblical values at the core. I like how the ship didn't really happen as well, it kinda keeps the reader guessing.
I love the ending due to it's non-too-serious scene that gives just that right amount of comedy wrap up. The only thing missing is as the credits roll, Pinkie Pie pops out from the shrinking black screen saying 'That's all folks!'
Oh and being a Christian means you ain't gonna be loved or tolerated by the world in general, but that doesn't mean we can't show a little love and tolerance in return...
3071322 Thanks! That story I made that your read called "Pinkie Pie Gets Amplified," was just for insane humor and I really don't write stories that are follow ups and can be linked together. If you want a more happy ending for our pink pony, try my other Pinkie Pie centered story, "Pinkie Pie's Sugary Problem." Even though I have never really put my stories together, I am suddenly interested in linking my stories together and I have been trying to come up with some new ideas on how to go about that plan.
Oh, I already know all about that. Some of the comments I get on my other stories are incredibly negative and hostile all because of my faith. Of course, we need to show kindness and love, and even pray for those who hate us. It's nothing new, it's just something that we are called to do.
Thanks for the kind words and for reading another one of my stories. I'm so happy you enjoy them all!
Man... Fluttershy went hoarding because of a stupid rat?!? I guess Rarity should've brought Opal along to see the new cottage, if you know what I mean.
I'm sure Fluttershy and Big Mac would make a cute couple! And I LOVE the way you put in SoarinDash!
3090937 Haha! that would traumatize Fluttershy if Rarity brought her kitty over!
Pachy was like Fluttershy's new best friend!
And thanks! You know how much I can't get enough of my Soarin' X Dash ships!
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It would've been worth it, if she did.
Anyway, I love FlutterMac just as much as I love SoarinDash! I mean, A.J. would be thrilled to have Fluttershy as a sister-in-law.
love this!! I wasn't expecting the bible verses, this is the first of your stories that I've read (but I hope it won't be the last) but it was a very pleasant surprise indeed
inspired!!!
oh, and can I be the first to comment that 'cluttershy' was far more clever than 'flutter clutter'?
3176427 Haha! Thanks!
I liked both names Cluttershy and Flutter Clutter. I mention them both in the story. I think I went with Flutter Clutter as the title because of Rainbow Dash's little rhyme she made up for Fluttershy. 
If you liked the whole Bible verse thing, most of my stories here are Christian. Some are way more obvious than others, but what you read was actually part of a little series I'm doing called sisters in Christ and it's focused on the whole failing and redemption thing. The stories go in this order...
1. Ain't Want No Yeller Ponies 'Round Here
2. Flutter Clutter
3. Pinkie Pie's Sugary Problem (Older story of mine, but I updated it and tied it in with this series.)
4. A Rarity Of A Situation (Mature must be enabled.)
I'm not sure if I will be adding more to the series because creativity hasn't been very high for me lately. I'm trying to push for my big 20th story right now and then I might be taking a bit of a break from writing after that. I think a lot of people tend to over look my mature stories because I don't think they expect me to write mature stuff when it comes to sexual themes or gore. One of my most favorite stories that I have made here is a gore fiction called, An "Unreal" Day. There's even an important Bible verse and a Biblical moral near the end of that story too. That story is just very silly and yet awesome to read as well, especially if you love the old school type first person shooter arena video games.
I'm glad you'll be reading more!
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I will be sure to read them!!!
seems a little unnecessarily preachy let me remind everyone that just because some of us believe in god that these ponies pretty much worship celestia and luna and have never heard the teachings of the lord though if anypony was to be over zealous about it then it would have to be AJ like i said it was a tad out of character for RD to sound like some sort of philosopher PS not a christian myself but if you are I will love and tolerate you as long as you don't attempt to force it down my throat and argue about it
3241804 You should see what happens with poor Pinkie Pie in this series. I have her go on a crazy crusade of trying to mass convert ponies because she gets inspired by a certain verse. It's very funny.
That's true. It's almost like the ponies borderline worship Celestia and Luna in the actual show and we still don't have an explanation about either Princesses creation or about their past. I wrote a story about Celestia's and Luna's creation, but it's not related to this series. This series is just supposed to be fun (and sometimes serious) stories with Christian morals and teachings. I like to do this for many reasons. One of them being is that I love this show and that I see forgiveness, love, and grace through out this show even when it comes to some of the most evil villains. It's like I see God's love in this show even if this show has nothing to do with religion. I wrote a little bit about that in a story called "Putting My Idol on the Altar."
Thanks for loving and tolerating me! It's really rare that I get comments like that. I love you too and I also love and pray for the people who hate me on this site. Thanks for reading.
3241927 anytime
So...Fluttershy is like Gollum now?
I think you used the word "panic" way too many times here.
How does Big Macintosh know the word "Tetanus"?
Um, off-topic anti-chemical message in this chapter much?
I had a hermit crab once...