Trixie has returned with the Alicorn Amulet, enslaving the town's populace to work on a strange network of tunnels beneath Ponyville. With the Elements of Harmony captured, a small, unlikely group of heroes will rise. But is everything all that it seems here? Or does the magician have even more tricks up her sleeves than anypony can guess?
Warning! Journal and comments may contain spoilers! FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, DON'T READ EITHER UNTIL YOU'VE READ THE FIC!
Authors note: In case you didn't figure it out from that last sentence, there's a few twists near the end that might surprise you. So for God's sake, don't dislike because you don't like evil Trixie stories. If you're gonna dislike, please post a reason. I'm sorry for ranting like this, but that's exactly what happened last time I tried to post this story, so I have it up on my DA now as well.
Set in the same universe as my other fic, "The Chronicles of Swarm," though reading that isn't necessary for this.
Also, inspiration for Sethisto: http://johnjoseco.deviantart.com/art/Good-Morning-Sethisto-279016055
Are the CMC dead then?
Mine did.
Wow.
3023531 Aw, no. Remember: the "Trome" has safeties in place specifically for catching and containing ponies. They, along with the rest of Ponyville's populace, are perfectly fine. I'm planning on going into more detail about that in a sequel set from the Six's POV.
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3023738 I know!
This is like my story Princess Trixie's Revenge! Except a human isn't getting hypnotized!
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Ok i've been silent this entire time but buddy.......you've captivated me with this one
and for that you get.......9....no 10 moustaches
3231646 Thank you for the faves! And the staches (go ahead and have one back )
ohshitthisstoryisintricateandtoocomplexformyshortattentionspan
3231809 I'm just gonna go ahead and take that as a compliment
Ohhh... SHIT!
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YOU BITCH! You can take Colegate and Cloudchaser but I'm putting my foot down when it comes to Lyra, Bon Bon, and Derpy!
DOWN WITH SPARITY! SPIKIEBELLE OTP!
4030347 THANK YOU!
Wait... What? I'm so lost now but I guess that's the point.
FK shit no Twidash Gah Why!?
4031746 Not really. They're hypnotized, after all. Just seemed like something evil Trixie would do.
Yeah when I saw the Derpy part I was confused then it clicked and I went something like this : *bolts out of chair* "not just a Pegasus but Derpy the Pegasus!"
Omg that was awkward.
Once again another great story with a twist I didn't expect. Really you deserve more views.
4033779 Like dinner with the in-laws awkward, I know.
4034145 Thank you!
4033747 I wrote that "Oh, there you are Derpy" line, and couldn't resist.
4034578 lol if it was me I wouldnt be able to resist either.
Ah, so it was you who wrote this one.
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I take it you read it awhile ago?
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Yeah. I found it weird.
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Thank you :)