• Published 8th Oct 2011
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The Dragon in Twilight - StreakTheFox



When Twilight reads a romance story about a dragon, she begins to rethink her feelings over Spike...

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First!
Good chapter/story:twilightsmile:

An entertaining, funny and armorous story to say the least. ^^ Well done! :twilightsmile:

It was a good story.

100000000000 times perfect, Spikelight is the best pairing ever created and I will forever love and be a fan of this perfect pair. This story will be engraved within my heart and soul (even though I don't have one) You dear sir are a genuis!!!!! and an amazing author, you should be given an award.

One of the best Spikelight stories ever created in my view......SPIKE/TWILIGHT FOREVER!!!!! :pinkiehappy: :derpytongue2: :ajsmug: :twilightsmile: :twilightblush:

:twilightblush: + :moustache: = :heart: FOREVER!!!!

I suddenly feel like the worst at making Romance with Spike. Even more than before. Thanks. ;-:

Thank you for writing this man!
I also DEMAND A SEQUEL! .... if that's alright with you.

:twilightsmile::twilightsmile::moustache::moustache:(*in captain falcon voice* YES!!) More please very well done

Now that ending was just poetic.

Also, channeled some Zecora there, too!

" Conjoined in time their lives will hold, bound close together for a length untold.

Together they will stay through any sort of trouble, against any sort of weather...

True love amidst their souls, bringing them happiness forever and ever"

Wow, wasn't expecting an epilogue today! That made my afternoon.

Man I am I glad I Favorited this back when I first saw it. Nice work!

Yes! YES! Great epilogue. Thank you very much for this story, its one of the best.

OMG YAY <3

Epi-Epilogue:

And then Twilight laid Dragon Eggs. :pinkiecrazy:

a most excellent fic :moustache: :heart: :twilightsmile:
good job :yay:

Damn son, I love it, kept my eyes open and it will be favorited in 10 seconds flat. 6:31 AM. Epic as.

You do sequel? :scootangel:

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There will be NO sequel for this story.

Make sure ya'll (to everyone, not just you Overworked) know that

717341 Dang, oh well, still an amazing read :D

This is an amazing piece of work... I... Wait...

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Aren't you another grammar nazi on this site? Hmm... Oh well... No point in pointign out mistakes since I just read this from start to finish...:pinkiecrazy:

Those last lines were written beautifully. Actually this whole story was written beautifully. Do more stories. (I dont mean a sequel just more stories):heart:

I felt the story had a good enough ending with chapter eight and didnt need the epilogue. I guess because I just like little play of words; "He was the dragon in twilight." I thought it was cute it was ended that way and would've been fine with it there.

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So what did you mean to say? :derpytongue2:

...I cant find any words to describe how I'm feeling. I literally cried at the end, and I never cry. Ever. This story was written so well I could literally feel the passion of the characters. This is deffinately going on my favorites list. Best. Clop fic. Ever.

Thank you so much for this wonderful read. :heart:

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... :rainbowhuh:
This story has nothing to do with Twilight though.... seriously. And no, I haven't ready any of those books, and I highly doubt I ever will.
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Where they hay did you get the idea of Twilight from? :unsuresweetie:

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I'm not exactly sure where that came from. I must admit that I am a total fucking spaz and I do random shit all the time. Let's just say that ADD is a real bitch.

I was expecting an awkward walk-out scene with everyone right in the middle of that.

I loved this fic so much.

704754 And that's how Equestria was made! :pinkiecrazy:

1330071 Or a sequel. *waggles eyebrows meaningfully at author!*

Bloody hell this was good! Shame there's no sequel but it seems there can't really be one I guess. Genius, so have a good day/night old chap, and may I see you wright again.:moustache:+:twilightsmile:=:heart:

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I guess you'll be seeing me again in about 5 seconds, since I just posted the next chapter of my current story I'm working on :trollestia:

1400743Well that escalated quickly. Good show, jolly good show

I love the story, I'ts just the way Spike is drawn, Make's it look Weird

i.imgur.com/CeWQS.jpg My initial reaction after reading all the chapters and well done mah friend:pinkiehappy:

I guess that sums it all up.

Hello i just wanted to congratulate you on this amazing story.

the drama, the conflict, the love... it was just beautiful you my friend have reat talent im goin to check your other stories but you created something amazing.

was just perfect.


lordzid:heart:

I love ever detail of this!:pinkiehappy:
YAY!
Go SpiLight!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:twilightsmile:

Truly a SpiLight that must be read!:pinkiesad2:
You just created a great and awesome story!:twilightsmile:

Congratulations sir, madam, entity, this masterpiece set firmly in my mind of giving My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic a watch. Thanks to you, I am now pleasantly addicted to the show/fanfiction. I of course read this, liking who I was reading about, and decided to watch the pilot. To this day I don't know why I started the fanfiction first, but I was curious as to who I was reading about. Though rare (since I got into the series) I do support Twilight and Spike. I like CMC and Spike (doesn't matter, any story that I read featuring them made me like them) Rarity and Spike, (no duh) Spike/Applejack (rare, only one other one) I have yet to read a Spike/Rainbow Dash fic which is sad because I have seen them together before :twilightblush: I think my OTP would have to be Spike/random Crusader... Thanks for getting me involved with the show....... Have a tissue for you troubles...... :fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:

I liked the story very much ! But in my opinion that Dragon in the end
came a bit out of nowhere, I already guessed that TwiSpike story would
be the same as the book's, BUT I expected the "Bad Dragon" to be an allegory...
Not a real Dragon. That was the only point that disappointed me a bit.
Otherwize I loved it !

Excuse me if my English is weird, I'm French :pinkiehappy:

:pinkiegasp: MADMAN03 if you enjoyed this you should definitely read warming up by Proteus-92. he also is writing a great story about spike as dovakiin. warming up: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/4266/warming-up

I loved this on fanfic. Glad that I could find it again since I never did finish it:twilightsmile:

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