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It says there are 17 comments on this... but they don't show up.
You broke something, didn't you?
Edit: I guess I fixed it? That's a glitch I've never seen before...
I rewrote this story which is why you can't see the comments.
3893853 read the one above you.
I like it.
4106569 I feel honored.
Awsome
4260299 thank you
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To anyone reading this chapter four will be out as soon as possible. I was on vacation and didn't have time to finish it. Thank you so much for your support and patience.
Hello it's me theone2three and I feel like reviewing this particular story.
Reason being to have some fun while I joke around, help and jsut have a good time writing this review.
As a disclaimer this is mostly opinion based so don't get offended.
lets begin.
*looks at cover pic*
So big brother is watching over us...
Ok good start. could use some more descriptive words you know.
Woah WOAH WOAH!
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Umm... yea... no.
You can't just do that. Add ships to everything you anger the readers. Not me in particular but others.
Aww... I was hoping for a fluttercord... well now you've angered me.
Oh I know where this is going
What!? Soooo anticlimactic.
I want my money back!
*inner voice responds*
You never payed to read this.
Oh right I forgot.. Ok lets continue.
Ah come on! don't leave us hanging.
Bad writer bad!
Cliche level over 9000.
Crap the gif I was going to put up broke because of that.
what. I get myself a hambuger and some beer to pass the time...I think a bar would be a better setting for this... not use as often.
If I was a person in the cafe I would look at you with that face of
And then call the police for satanic activity
why is this in code!?
No seriously I think after some code you should stop before I get up and pimp slap one of you.
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Ok. two things, stop the code and two no one with some common sense would let a hooded person/pony into a public establishment
wuss... here in Mexico we have one half liter cup of tequila with some tacos... and not that taco bell shit.
I bet you someones OC is named the exact same thing.
Orphios? googled it and saw WoW, battlefield, LoL.
is this your gamertag?
I don't play these games so don't look at me with that face
So you're the assassin... OHHHHH... wow took me long enough to fine out.
And also by what I read in the description of your story I see its Luna you seek.
Yep. this story was made to anger the fandom. I rest my case.
So he wants Luna alive. Ok... sex slave it is. Silver Skull wants to fulfill his erotic fantasies.
Ok the fandom is now with pitchforks ready to behead this author.
How in the hell don't you know the princess of the night! Wow this story is irritating me more and more... but I must keep calm and go on.
To pull this off you must be either a mad men or just mad. To kill a alicorn is like killing asgardian god. hard but you'll die first before she does.
Anyways I'm done with this chapter lets continue to the second chapter.
4954298 thanks, for the review. Your hilarious.
4955072 thank you my writer friend.
4955434 it's actually, the first in a series of twelve fanfics. When you review the next chapter. Let me know
For anyone who is concerned my account has been giving shit so, I haven't been on long. Chapter six will be done soon.
5479180 so is this story dead...or what?
6197444 no it's still active. I'm just on a bit of a hiatus. Please be patient. The next chapter's almost done.
6205051 ok
6205064 You enjoying the story so far?
6205110 ya i guess...just wish the chapters were longer. The story feels extremely rushed
6205128 Yeah. I'll admit some of them were rushed. The reason why this chapter is taking so long though is because its a long chapter.
6205238 if I were you, I'd get myself a really good editor, scrap this story, and redo it. Make it longer and better.
6205275 I agree
6205346 if you do decide to redo it, I'll help anyway i can. Let me know what you decide
6205369 alright