On a bright and sunny day in the magical land of Equestria, Fluttershy decides to take in some of those new "Pokemans" she's heard about.
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"If it explores new possibilities or evokes the slightest excitement, it has no merit." —literary scholars, probably
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um, good work? I guess?
No grammatical errors, but...............that's it? Nothing?
Dude, you gotta expand on this. This is too good to just leave it at that.
Yeah, it's good for what it is, but what it is isn't much. It just...drops off when Fluttershy calls them over. That's literally your climax, and it's a really lame climax at that.
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Honestly, it felt incomplete to me too while I was writing it, but the idea was such a simple one that it couldn't really go anywhere else. That said, I'm considering expanding the story to detail other instances of Pokémon in Equestria. Nothing epic, just some more little slice of life as ponies try to adjust to having monsters with bizarre powers in their lives. Hopefully they'll be more like actual stories than this one was :x
2906078 What a coincidence! I am actually writing a series similar to that idea myself. In fact, here's the link to the first story I have so far, The Darkest Fire The story is about Flutttershy and her encounter with a Houndoom.