Rainbow Dash is the type of mare who doesn't really care about being in a relationship. No one understands why, especially Rarity. Rainbow Dash meets with one of her fillyhood friends, and sees that he, unlike everyone else, understands why Rainbow Dash doesn't really care about relationships. He wants to know why she doesn't want to be in a relationship.
Well my first story was probably worse. You have a lot of places yo u can improve, but the main thing I think you need to understand is showing vs. Telling. Google that and read up on it. You'll be instantly better.
So he understands why, but doesn't know why? What?
Rainbow Dash and Thunderlane? That could be a treading new couple.
>>Rainbow87dash
Listen dude. I wrote this because I like this shipping. Rainbow Dash isn't a dude, so she can cry if she feels like it. And this is a story not the actual show. So calm your tits.
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I worded that wrong. I meant that he wants to know what happened to her that made her not want to be in a relation ship. Hope that helped.
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That wasn't help if you want Rainbow Dash to be a specific way. This is not the t.v. series so if you have any more comments reguarding how any of the characters act, I suggest you keep it to yourself.
This...
This is beautiful!
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ThunderDash: Y U no popular?
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^This.
What this guy said 2908310
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^^^^^^^^^^^^
Listen to this niga
I will be posting a chapter either tomorrow or Monday. In the meantime, if anyone wants to give ideas for what they want in the chapter, I will do so. I will give credit to whosever idea I choose. Thanks guys
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Heed this man's words!
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THIS GUY KNOWS WHAT'S UP
2908402 Listen to this guy here!
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y'all listen to this motherfucker
2913405 This guy here knows what he is saying.
2913411 this man is a sage his words are the truth
2913441 Heed this man's words
I AM DETECTING A PATTERN HERE
Interesting paring idea. How did you get this through with the 1st chapter being only 266 words?
Awsome story I love itplz plz plz write more
it is interesting!! but needs more detail.
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I know I'm working on it. New chapter will be posted soon for those who are waiting.
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You still need to sort that description out.
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I know it's really crazy I will fix it in time
would be interesting to see RD and Scoots double date with Scoots and Rumble. Im a rumbloo fan
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I may add that in..... Maybe
3647951 the dash sisters dating the lane brothers
My first story (i am currently working on) sucks!
for your first fanfic this is okay but I agree that it needs more detail.
keep up the good work!
I like the shipping but a littl to short for the chapters..
Im pretty sure Starlight Glimmer's a mare XD
Jk this was probably before season 5